Welcome Guest [Log In] [Register]
Add Reply
  • Pages:
  • 1
  • 2
Motion: Condemn Cremorne; any advice please
Topic Started: Feb 19 2010, 01:03 AM (906 Views)
sedge
Member Avatar
Sedgistan
I'd replace at least one 'ACCEPTING' with something like 'NOTING', so that it flows better.

Once you're satisfied with the draft, you've got a choice of what to do next - either you submit it straight away, or you post it in the Security Council section of the NS forums, to allow others to review it.
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
A mean old man
Member Avatar
Crazed Curmudgeon
Instead of outright calling it "trolling," you could do what I did with my condemnation and call it "insulting" or "disrespecting in crude fashions." It slipped past the mods.
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
sedge
Member Avatar
Sedgistan
Well its trolling on off-site forums, so its not something you'd have the NS mods deal with.
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Bogans and Boozers

have taken these additional edits into consideration, and have submitted as a proposal

http://www.nationstates.net/page=UN_proposal/new_proposal=1/council=2
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
sedge
Member Avatar
Sedgistan
Are you going to post this on the NS forums for discussion, and telegram delegates to get approvals for it?
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
A mean old man
Member Avatar
Crazed Curmudgeon
Most Recent Government Activity: 27 days ago

I wonder what happens if someone CTE's while their C/C is in the queue?
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Bogans and Boozers

sedge
Mar 3 2010, 11:03 AM
Are you going to post this on the NS forums for discussion, and telegram delegates to get approvals for it?
I have posted it in the NS forums (security council), and have started the telegram campaign
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
sedge
Member Avatar
Sedgistan
A mean old man
Mar 3 2010, 09:35 PM
Most Recent Government Activity: 27 days ago

I wonder what happens if someone CTE's while their C/C is in the queue?
I guess we're going to find out (unless he's on vacation mode).
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Oh My Days
Member Avatar

I haven't really been following the debate so don't know my position on this, but if the founder deserves it then I'm all for it. It would also set a precedent for ordinary C&Cs, everyone who has been Commended or Condemned so far is pretty unique.

I'd recommend changing the telegram used to contact people, the one I received said this: "Hello, I have created a proposal in the security council to condemn Cremorne, the founder of Australia. Could you please support this proposal?

B&B"

People are lazy, they won't bother to find out why Cremorne deserves to be Condemned or searching for the proposal. I'd recommend giving a reason and putting a permanent link in there, something like this:

"Hi,

The nation of Cremorne has been wreaking havoc in the region Australia (doing whatever he has done). Please approve the proposal [proposal]bogans_and_boozers_1267589127[/proposal] (when sent as a TG, this will result in a permanent link to the resolution).

BB"
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
A mean old man
Member Avatar
Crazed Curmudgeon
Actually, I wrote a monstrous essay that I sent to delegates at the last minute for the condemnation of Haven, and many of them seemed to appreciate it quite a bit. Although that situation was a bit more complicated than the one in this condemnation. Had I started sending those telegrams earlier the condemnation may have reached quorum. The Havenites seem to have receeded, though, so I'm happy that's over.
Edited by A mean old man, Mar 7 2010, 04:41 PM.
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
1 user reading this topic (1 Guest and 0 Anonymous)
Go to Next Page
« Previous Topic · Drafting Floor of the Security Council · Next Topic »
Add Reply
  • Pages:
  • 1
  • 2

Under Pressure created by sakuragi-kun of the Zetaboards Themezone