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| Trav-Coch | Jan 6 2010, 07:08 PM Post #11 |
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I think that clause specifically should follow the previous OBSERVING clause through (like commenting on the implications or the wording itself of the new WFE). The invader coalition can be mentioned in another clause. Or perhaps: CONCERNED by the implication that The LKE has invaded the region with the motive of refounding the region under their rule, which is possible given their track record and those of TNI, Europeia and Unknown, the other regions which participated in the raid; (I don't actually recollect Unknown and Europeia griefing regions, while TNI most probably has. Anyway, the proof of all this should be posted in the SC forum for all to see)
Maybe you're right but, DISGUSTED by this colossal overreaction by The LKE; doesn't look professional. Maybe: DENOUNCING The LKE's over-reaction to the jibes made by Free Thought's natives about its flag; ? But again, have they actually said so (that they raided Free Thought because of the jibes)? Edited by Trav-Coch, Jan 6 2010, 07:16 PM.
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| sedge | Jan 6 2010, 07:55 PM Post #12 |
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Sedgistan
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I think that incorporates most of your points, let me know if I've missed/mis-interpreted anything. Unknown do have a record of griefing regions - the region 'Unknown' itself was griefed - by The Brotherhood of Blood, who invaded, passworded & ejected natives, before re-founding it as their new home region. Europeia are less clear-cut, but they've assisted other regions (predominantly The LKE & TNI) when they've griefed. The LKE have also said that they invaded because of the 'insults' about their flag. Edited by sedge, Jan 6 2010, 08:39 PM.
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| Trav-Coch | Jan 6 2010, 08:10 PM Post #13 |
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It still does not use the word "griefing" anywhere. There's no need to define it, in that case. EDIT: The italics in OBSERVING needs to be fixed. EDIT2: Maybe the DENOUNCING can go before OBSERVING. EDIT3: BTW, the reply I got from a higher power on a query regarding Unknown and Europeia's griefing activities was along the lines of "Unknown, yes. Europeia, no." But you've got that covered already anyway.. Edited by Trav-Coch, Jan 6 2010, 08:16 PM.
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| sedge | Jan 6 2010, 08:24 PM Post #14 |
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Sedgistan
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As I said before, I've said 'grief' in the resolution a couple of times - I'd like to add the word griefing - maybe replacing the 'Concerned' clause with "CONCLUDING that The LKE are griefing Free Thought, especially given their track record, and those of The New Inquisition, and Unknown, who have also participated in the raid;" I've fixed the italics, and moved the denouncing clause as suggested. The above edit ('concluding' clause) would remove reference to Europeia if I went for that change. Edited by sedge, Jan 6 2010, 08:24 PM.
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| Trav-Coch | Jan 6 2010, 08:35 PM Post #15 |
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I didn't (and still don't) see "grief" or "griefing" in the latest draft, that's why I raised the issue, but the suggested change is perhaps the best (CONCERNED -> CONCLUDING). BTW, I was talking about this "higher power" from my perspective. You're the Arch Chancellor of the FRA, and you have evidence and records much like this "higher power" of mine has. If you've seen Europeia griefing, let the references to them remain. |
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| sedge | Jan 6 2010, 08:46 PM Post #16 |
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Sedgistan
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Regarding Europeia, I also remembered that the FRA has an embassy with them, and that they helped us in Feudal Japan, so I'd be cautious about calling them griefers, although they have helped beforehand. I think this latest draft is pretty good, I'll leave it for a while so that Uni & others can comment. |
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| Kalibarr | Jan 7 2010, 02:18 AM Post #17 |
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this is just my opinion but "griefing" to me is ether re-founding or locking down a region to use as a trophy, clearly Unknown does not use Unknown as a trophy it build the region up. perhaps a record for those regions listed as "having a track record" could be provided. |
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| sedge | Jan 7 2010, 08:23 PM Post #18 |
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Sedgistan
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I'll make sure that such a list is provided in the thread on the NS forums, but I'd rather not include that in the resolution text. |
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| sedge | Jan 8 2010, 09:00 PM Post #19 |
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Sedgistan
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We have submission, which means its time for a telegram campaign! |
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| [unibot] | Jan 8 2010, 10:37 PM Post #20 |
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Yellow Matter Custard
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Europeia's delegate supported neither "Liberate Utopia" nor "Liberate Land of the Liberals" (I later said thank you to him for not voting for it). However, he has supported the condemnation of Macedonia, which I don't even support. The next resolution I submit, I'll make sure I have his support first.
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