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Commend Fudgetopia?
Topic Started: Nov 27 2009, 02:53 AM (508 Views)
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Description: REALIZING that in the world there are many regions,

FURTHER REALIZING that many of these regions have World Assembly Delegates, some being evil and corrupt, or others good and attentive,

RECOGNIZING the fact that many of these delegates, most of whom are good and attentive, have served their regions for years,

DISTRESSED at the fact that many of these nations are not recognized for their contributions to their region and the world,

NOTING the fact that The Nothing to See Here of Fudgetopia, World Assembly Delegate of The South Pacific, has served her region for more than three years,

FURTHER NOTING that The Nothing to See Here of Fudgetopia is stepping down from her position as Regional Delegate, and handing the Delegacy off to another nation,

REALIZING that [nation]Fudgetopia[/naion] has made this decision by herself, to step down from her position after three years of service to The South Pacific,

DISMAYED at the fact that The Nothing to See Here of Fudgetopia is stepping down from her position as World Assembly Delegate of The South Pacific, yet glad that her reign ends the way it is, with her stepping down from the position on her own, and,

IMPRESSED with The Nothing to See Here of Fudgetopia for stepping down on her own, after serving her region for more than three years.


The World Assembly Hereby Presents The Nothing to See Here of Fudgetopia with a World Assembly Commendation for Great Servitude to her region and the world.


Um...

does anyone else notice that more than half the material in this proposal is commending Fudgetopia for stepping down from her Delegacy?

I have nothing against commending her, but what the fuck...? Material! MATERIAL!!! Give us some evidence! Some examples of this "great servitude to her region and the world!" What's all this shit? It's a pile of flabby, meaningless "some delegates are really nice and some suck a lot" BS; If that was a basis for a commendation, then hell! Let's commend every delegate who "does a nice job!" Submit 'em all! Commendations for every delegate in the world who's been "good and attentive!"

Say something about feeder region politics! Say something about her accomplishments in office! Say SOMETHING! This proposal isn't saying anything at all!

Sorry, but this is just totally absurd. I'm sure some of you will feel the urge to disagree with me because you like Fudgetopia, but please - just look at this thing... if we pass this, the GA purists will have more shit to throw at the SC than they will know what to do with.

This needs serious revision. I can't believe this is getting the support it currently has. Just because she's a popular delegate does not mean we commend her for the first poorly designed piece of crap that appears in the queue.

Maybe I'm overreacting, but this piece of writing is a terrible example of what the SC should support. Refined, well thought-out, and detailed proposals - not something some random twelve year old cooked up during five minutes of his computer class.
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"not something some random twelve year old cooked up during five minutes of his computer class."

IT WAS MEDIA ARTS CLASS, jerk. :D
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lol

You still can't seriously say that this is a well-developed and un-repeal-able proposal.
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Oh its United.Nations. Repeal-able alright!
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Nov 27 2009, 03:40 AM
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I'm all in favor of C&C resolutions that describe the subject matter in broad strokes and go into more detail in the accompanying thread. It's necessary when the subject matter is known for doing multiple things, which most NS nations and regions with a long history are. In contrast, this proposal zeroes in on one specific action (resigning) whose commendability is...debatable. It'd be better to talk about her actions in office. I'm not asking for a laundry list of examples here - if complete, it'd be too long, and if incomplete it'd be wrongly judged on the examples alone - but the focus of the proposal is more than a little askew.
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This also is similar in quality to this marvelous feat of ingenuity.

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Description: NOTING the fact that The Axis of Evil's behavior has been immature in terms of war and dealings with other regions and nations.

RECOGNIZING that the only puropse of The Axis of Evil's existance is to invade.

DISMAYED that The Axis of Evil has dedicated itself to invading other countries including but not limited to Democratia, Extraordinary Evil Nations, The Layman Empire, and Evil Nations Unite.

SHOCKED that they have no respect for other regions and nations

THEREFORE, the The Axis of Evil is condemned by the World Assembly.


Gee, how many people could we condemn on these terms?
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There is a [/nation] tag left open, looks messy
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Now that I look at it, dismayed is a harsh word, especially for the new delegate, Southern Bellz.
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Nov 27 2009, 06:40 AM
There is a [/nation] tag left open, looks messy
Undoubtedly someone will base a repeal on that.
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