The Sack
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jul 19 2010, 05:23 PM (374 Views) | |
| chaotic38 | Jul 19 2010, 05:23 PM Post #1 |
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(this is a hp story) It was a dark and gloomy night, the kind both Crabbe and Goyle liked. Here in the Slytherin Common room Crabbe and Goyle planned to break free. But maybe I’m getting a little ahead of myself here. Let’s go back a few days. No, that’s too far. Forward a little bit. Perfect. Here is where our story begins. It was nice out. Not too hot, and not too cold either. Crabbe and Goyle were following Draco to the Quidditch Pitch. As they got there they saw Harry, Ron, and Hermione. “Well, Well, Famous Harry Potter, backed up by your mudblood friend Hermione and the Blood traitor Weasley, as always.” Draco says. “Get out of here, Malfoy” Harry of course. Goyle went to raise his wand, yet Draco says, “leave it. Well, potter, feeling pretty brave are you?” “Expelliarmus” Draco’s wand flew out of his hand. “You’ll pay for that potter. Crabbe, Goyle get him.” Just as they raised their wands Ron and Hermione both sent their wands flying. “You imbeciles” Draco shouted at Crabbe and Goyle after they left with their wands “Can’t even draw a wand to save your life.” “but…” Crabbe replied slowly. “Get out of here” Draco replied. As Crabbe and Goyle walked away, they thought the same thing you’ll get yours someday. The next couple days were nothing but shame, in Draco’s eyes that is, from Crabbe and Goyle. But over those days Draco didn’t see that they were out the night before for a long time. As the day went by Crabbe and Goyle spent hours planning, even in their classes. As the night approached Crabbe and Goyle like the day more and more. It was a dark and gloomy night, the kind both Crabbe and Goyle liked. Here in the Slytherin Common Room planned to break free. Break free from the clutches of Draco that is. As Draco’s shadow appeared on the side wall of the staircase, Crabbe got ready for his part of the plan. Once Draco fully emerged at the bottom stair Crabbe shouted “Crucio” Draco screamed. The pain was too much too bear. Draco fell to the ground in agony. It felt like a thousand butter knives that were dulled beyond belief were stabbing him. It felt like… well you get the picture. “Why” Draco asked when he felt like he could talk again. “Your insults have gone too far,” said Goyle “we need to make you not insult us, so we chose to break free from you.” Crabbe walked up to Draco “I’m sorry” he said “Avada Kedavra” |
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| xdragon | Jul 19 2010, 05:27 PM Post #2 |
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Wow, nice story! Is there more? |
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| chaotic38 | Jul 19 2010, 05:44 PM Post #3 |
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I'm working on a part two now. |
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| xdragon | Jul 19 2010, 07:29 PM Post #4 |
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Can't wait! |
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| yojoel333 | Jul 26 2010, 08:35 AM Post #5 |
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Good job! |
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| chaotic38 | Aug 4 2010, 06:42 PM Post #6 |
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This one seems to be more popular than God of Wars |
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| xdragon | Sep 7 2010, 06:29 PM Post #7 |
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Really??? |
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| chaotic38 | Sep 15 2010, 07:45 PM Post #8 |
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Well, this one is newer and my newest ones usually are the better ones. PREVIEW TO PART TWO!!!: Two weeks have passed since the so called ‘unexplained death’ of Draco Malfoy. But Crabbe and Goyle knew better. It was them who killed Draco. It was his constant insulting that drove them to the breaking point. Ever since Draco’s death, Lucius was bringing Hogwarts down to its knees. He even blamed Harry Potter. Lucius had been staying at Hogwarts in the teacher’s dorms. He had been Tormenting Crabbe and Goyle about the death of Draco. It was time to have another ‘unexplained death’. But once again, I’m getting ahead of myself here. I’m to tell the story aren’t I? Well, it all began at the Headmaster’s office. “I won’t have it” a voice shouted from the thin crack of the door to Dumbledore’s office, “I will hold the school responsible for this”. “Calm down, Lucius” a second voice said, “I’m sure it wasn’t done on purpose. An accident, if you may.” “AN ACCIDENT?!!” Lucius shouted “My son is dead, and you call it an accident??” “Please, get a hold of yourself” the second voice calmly said. “Why should I, Dumbledore?” Lucius shouted “Draco is dead, and I bet it is the doing of that Potter kid.” “It is not the doing of Harry, I will assure you of that” Dumbledore replied. “Get Crabbe and Goyle in here, they should know something” Lucius shouted. “They are closer than you think” The door suddenly opened and Crabbe and Goyle stumbled in. “What do you know about the death of Draco?” Lucius shouted. “I-er-we…” Crabbe stuttered. “Well?” Lucius shouted “Speak up you bumbling buffoon” |
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