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| EV training for Little Cup; WIP | |
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| Topic Started: Oct 10 2008, 04:55 PM (1,066 Views) | |
| eric the espeon | Feb 17 2009, 10:05 PM Post #31 |
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Pretty good, I will edit it in once you add the conclusion. Also a few things I noticed: "Have you ever had even an inkling interest in Little Cup? Perhaps you're not sure where to begin or maybe you think it's too much of a time investment. Have you read all the guides yet you're still confused?" This may be appropriate for the thing on the nintendo worlds forum, but it does not fit too well here. All the other guides are available, and people will only be reading this to find out about EV training in game. "There is Little Room for error in Little Cup." Caps are not quite right. I saw you capitalised Little Room here as well: "The Little Room for Error and Little Cup:" |
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| dr00 | Feb 17 2009, 10:23 PM Post #32 |
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i thought little cup should be capitalized like Uber, OU, etc. and the second was just for the play on words. i'll fix though. |
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| eric the espeon | Feb 17 2009, 10:49 PM Post #33 |
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Little Cup should be, but Little Room should not really. Also, those two quotes are from different places. Its not very clear.. |
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| dr00 | Feb 17 2009, 11:35 PM Post #34 |
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oh well i'll recaptialize Little Cup. i added a conclusion... it feel it's too short, but i don't know what else to add. suggestions? fine as is? |
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| eric the espeon | Feb 18 2009, 12:15 PM Post #35 |
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Yup, it should be very helpful to EV trainers. Editing it in. Addie could you go over it for grammar and stuff? |
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| dr00 | Feb 19 2009, 02:17 AM Post #36 |
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yeah, i was hoping we would get more people to help critique this ;/ and i guess i should update my EV guide with the new program then, yeah? or is this fine? i haven't played around with the new program yet. also i have confirmed that 2 Exp. Shares makes no difference in experience gained for the LC pokémon being trained from only using 1 Exp. Share Edited by dr00, Feb 19 2009, 03:20 AM.
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| eric the espeon | Feb 19 2009, 11:13 AM Post #37 |
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vader was here
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I think that program is the same one as you had, no? And yea, it would be nice to have more people helping but we work with what we have. I'm sure that this will make it much more easy for people to start EV training for LC. Good to have confirmation. |
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| dr00 | Feb 19 2009, 10:44 PM Post #38 |
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the new program can figure out your desired EV spread for you |
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| eric the espeon | Feb 20 2009, 10:18 PM Post #39 |
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It only helps with defensive EVs, and its not exactly new. Its been around almost as long as the old one. But if you want to do new screen shots that would be good. |
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| dr00 | Feb 20 2009, 11:24 PM Post #40 |
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yeah i just played around with it and saw that, so ignore my last comments. |
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