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| Azurill; Eliminated redun. set. ~Chris | |
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| Seven Deadly Sins | Jul 17 2008, 01:24 PM Post #16 |
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KD24 banned Tangela
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Can anyone explain to me why Azurill and Marill have completely different Egg Move lists? It's pretty lost on me right now. |
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| Vader | Jul 17 2008, 03:22 PM Post #17 |
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Marril makes Azurill eggs with that incense, so Marrill has a different list, being treated as an entirely different Pokemon. |
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| Dixie | Jul 18 2008, 06:07 PM Post #18 |
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Back. Will see in the next week or so how much I can contribute.
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Needs mention of Aqua Jet, Ice Beam for bulky grassers and Light screen in other options. Also make clear that it doesnt get STAB on Waterfall |
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| squirtleboy12 | Jul 18 2008, 06:33 PM Post #19 |
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aazurill dosnt seem to get aqua jet on shoddy server..added the rest tough |
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| Chris | Jul 19 2008, 06:02 AM Post #20 |
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Abrasive Dick
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It's a bit loosely written. I think I'll just copy edit this later tomorrow. |
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| squirtleboy12 | Aug 4 2008, 06:44 PM Post #21 |
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Chris i tried looking for some mistakes and tried to fix them if you still feel that there's some mistakes your welcome to tell me or edit them.Aside form that i think this is pretty much ready. |
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| Chris | Aug 4 2008, 07:13 PM Post #22 |
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Abrasive Dick
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your EVs are completely nonsensical. HP only needs 196 EVs to max out. |
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| squirtleboy12 | Aug 4 2008, 07:45 PM Post #23 |
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fixed ev section anything else? |
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| squirtleboy12 | Aug 5 2008, 04:01 PM Post #24 |
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bumps topic,well my analysis is falling toward the end of the page, i think its pretty much done but i think somebody should check iot again..i think i already fixed everything chris told me so yeah,im still aiting for a reply. |
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| eric the espeon | Aug 5 2008, 04:14 PM Post #25 |
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Do you mind if I go through it and fix some stuff up? there are quite a few small errors (caps, spelling, odd sentences ect... and a couple of set changes) |
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| squirtleboy12 | Aug 5 2008, 04:17 PM Post #26 |
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no i dont mind at all your more then welcome to do so |
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| Cooper | Aug 5 2008, 04:46 PM Post #27 |
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Smiles are free
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What I like about this analysis is that you use the word "Azurill" in every sentence. It serves as a helpful reminder of which pokemon I'm reading about, just in case I forget. Thank you very much for your concern. However, I feel other people might not understand and think you just lack a mastery of pronouns. Maybe you could substitute "he" and "it" in every couple of lines? |
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| eric the espeon | Aug 5 2008, 04:55 PM Post #28 |
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Right, I think I helped it a bit... but there's still a good deal of stuff to fix. Could someone else try to fix the rest from here? Just copy the whole thing and make changes on it. SB12, I am not trying to be mean or anything but you made a LOT of mistakes in that thing, the format is very off, there were quite a few Capitalisation and spelling errors, your sentences are a repetitive mess, the sets themselves needed much improvement and... yea. On Smogon you would have got an infraction, but here I am just asking you to read a few of the others and be more careful with those things if you do another one. But it is possible to get a decent analysis out of it so all hope is not lost. |
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| Cooper | Aug 6 2008, 06:04 AM Post #29 |
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Smiles are free
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I'm not going to lie and say I didn't completely rewrite a lot of this, but I believe I managed to keep the spirit of the analysis. And I put it into smogon format. |
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| eric the espeon | Aug 6 2008, 08:36 AM Post #30 |
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Brilliant, I will edit that into the OP and then we can check if there's anything else needed. |
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