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| [ti]Pink ribbon[/ti]Creative writing contest #1 | |
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| CJ | Nov 17 2012, 11:56 AM Post #31 |
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A very minor case of serious brain damage
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Unfortunately, I'm likely to be too busy with other things now to be able to finish it off .
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Nov 18 2012, 01:19 AM Post #32 |
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Wow, forgot about this. Still open until I grade. Hard with this semester. I'm willing to let someone else grade them if they want to; if not I will get to it eventually. |
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Nov 21 2012, 11:55 PM Post #33 |
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Well, with the only entry, PL wins! My suggestions to improve your writing (I'll do this for everyone): -use more description -don't sound rushed, but explain parts out -good job with the plot, though I would have liked more action with the characters and Darkside -got a bit confused with the plastic swords and skeletons and how these were relevant -more traps would have been cool This concludes the contest. PL gets the pink ribbon! Edited by thecostumedanceparty, Nov 21 2012, 11:55 PM.
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| CJ | Nov 21 2012, 11:58 PM Post #34 |
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So, it was good enough to be ribbon-worthy? Congrats, Daniel! |
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| Pyrite | Nov 21 2012, 11:59 PM Post #35 |
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Just as Planned
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That was my first thought, actually (as in, "how did that get a ribbon?"). I hope you enjoyed reading it, though, Adam .
Edited by Pyrite, Nov 22 2012, 12:01 AM.
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Nov 22 2012, 12:00 AM Post #36 |
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In my opinion, I wouldn't have given a ribbon for the story itself. But I know PL has worked hard on it, and I know he's participated in pretty much every contest and if there were a ribbon for "Participating in the Most Contests" award, I'd give him this instead. I really appreciate the effort and participation and I think this needs to be noted. Every contest I see PL has entered. Maybe he should get a special contributions ribbon instead? Edited by thecostumedanceparty, Nov 22 2012, 12:01 AM.
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| CJ | Nov 22 2012, 12:01 AM Post #37 |
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I've awarded the ribbon now. Well done once again .Time to archive this, I guess. |
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