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Smoking Fags! (Demonite Short); No Homo(s were harmed in the making of this short)
Topic Started: Sep 7 2011, 09:06 PM (534 Views)
Demonite
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Well, I actually did it... After fuck-knows how long I made a comic.
Albeit a VERY VERY VERY VERY....... VERY short comic, it is a comic nonetheless.

Do not click unless you can deal with crap jokes and crap posing...


Like I said, the idea has been there a while, since I talk to Americans all the time and used to smoke.
I have no idea what spurred me to actually make the comic, but if it is enjoyed, some of my other "Mistranslations" may be turned into comics.

Feedback is, as always, wanted.
Hell, just read my sig.
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Flashlight
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Hahaha, i already knew what the term meant, but i knew you were going to make a joke out of it, and i honestly expected you to be doing something else when you used the term "smoke"...

Id love to see you post more comics an...

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Edited by Flashlight, Sep 7 2011, 09:15 PM.
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lmfao. I have a few more ideas in mind, and like 2 weeks before Uni starts, so I might get a couple more done between now and then :P
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Mythos
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Idea was cute, though it wasn't much of a joke, more like an informative comic in the style of "Did you know...?". Posing... well, it's passable in the last two shots, but in the first it's awful. There's not even faceposing for what is a dialogue scene.
Editing is below average, but the main problem is the image's too small. It could be at least a teeny weeny bigger, I reckon.

I don't have anything against you, but you wanted honest feedback, so here it is. No need to go brutal on you, I'm sure you just don't want to waste time making comics and it's understandable. It was a smart idea, too.
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Well, it has been some time since he last made a comic (never saw any of his except for this one) :)
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Faceposing, Honestly, I'm just retarded and forgot :D
As far as the image size, I reduced it to about 60% of the original, I normally do 75% but it seemed big xD

I like brutal feedback, It means I know exactly what's wrong, so I can improve. If everyone is like "Yeah that's alright" I would keep making the same mistakes :P

If someone told me "Yeah, it's okay, but this bit is shit, do this..." then I can learn :P

Constructive criticism ftw.
Edited by Demonite, Sep 7 2011, 09:46 PM.
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Mythos
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True, true. I'd be harsher if this wasn't a three-frame comic that you clearly only made for the hell of it.
If you want to make something bigger and invest a little time on it, I suggest you check the two tutorials at EFM, one of them being a very simple technique I have for layouts: http://efmonline.wordpress.com/tutorials/
I'm not doing a plug or anything, I've just heard they were found useful and thus like to share for people who want constructive criticism.

Also, a little bit of a rant related to the topic of ultra-short comics but not at all connected to you: I fondly remember the time when a comic with twenty frames was considered "short". These days, one single frame is considered a comic, and three frames is already seen as a good thing...
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The Gobo
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I'm going to be demoted for this, I know,
but I want to ask a serious question.

Wasn't Dem's character black?
Or am I just remembering way... way way way way Wwaaaaayyyyy off?
(Again, I'm being serious, I don't mean to make a joke out of this)
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Mythos
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That was another dude. Demonite was always the Breen reskin.

How can you even be "demoted"? You hold no rank.
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The Gobo
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I hold the position of Janitor,
did you forget?

But alright,
I guess I musta have been thinking of Cors' Picture or something.
I have no idea where the hell I got that idea.
D:
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