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Gin Cornellio; Shinigami
Topic Started: Aug 6 2010, 02:25 PM (690 Views)
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Name: Gin Cornellio
Age // Apparent Age: 87 - 16
Gender: Male
Division // Rank: 9th Division, Vice Captain

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Height: 5'8" ft
Weight: 168" lbs
Eye Colour: Light Brown
Hair Colour // Style: Golden Blonde, Medium Length and Messy
Skin Tone: Tanned
Body Type: Athletic
Distinguishing marks/features: A deep scar in the middle of his chest
Appearance Description: Gin's look is basically formed by his lazilyness. He doesn't brush his hair and leaves as it is letting it go everywhere. Even so his hair still is in top notch shape and still has its shine in the sun. Gin's a pretty average shaped teenage boy. He keeps fit and is sometimes seen in the gym lifting weights, using the punching bag etc,

The athletic, strong 5'8" ft and 168" lbs vice captain always seem to wear and basically look the same every day. Even so he doesn't smell actually his hygeine is very good. Gin also has a massive scar in the middle of his chest that runs from his left shoulder to his right hip. He got this from a incident that got him wanting to be a shinigami.
Clothing: Gin's uniformed is a bit too big for him when you first take a glance, but when you look more closely you will see that only his sleeves are extra long. Longer only about 10" or 11" cm. He has his zanpaktou's hilt sticking out from a small opening through his robe at his waist. Besides from all that his uniform is normal.

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Personality:

Likes
Gin likes the usual things a average teenage boy would like, and by that I mean porn. If you would take a peak in his room you would see 1 or 2 magazines lying around. He likes chasing and fooling around with girls. Strangely he always gets the girl he goes after. Guess his a looker and a great charmer. He likes sports and drinking really really sweet tea. He likes to read and play classical music really loud. Sometimes you may hear some Mozart coming out of his room. He likes kittens and a interesting fight. He usually spars with friends but soon gets bored. He likes to drink heaps of milk sometimes even leaving 10 - 12 empty glass bottles of milk laying around his quarters. He also likes the color Purple,

Dislikes
Gin hates Brussels Sprouts! So much that he constantly tries to avoid them. He doesn't like screaming psycho music and hates gloomy boring people. He dislikes loud people and really, really hates bullies and people who tend to go on and on and on about the same thing. He also hates drunks maybe because of his life before he died, but it might be because when people are drunk their as loud as ever. He also hates the dark and really hates Justin Beiber ( :P ).

Other
Gin is probably the laziest guy you'll ever meet. He'll never clean his room and never make his bed. He is always calm and mature even when in the worst of situations. He thinks about things logically and is really good at chess, but doesn't play very often. Even though he may look like a delinquent he is a very smart guy. He is quiet but will take command if any of his comrades are in danger.

History:

Childhood
Gin's childhood was all just pretty normal. He was born into a loving family and was an only child. He was given everything he wanted and so he was a little spoiled brat. He was loud, chaotic and didn't act friendly to anyone but his mother and father. That all changed though when he was kidnapped. His parents were reasonably rich but placed their child in a public school. Thats how the kidnappers knew Gin was rich and where to get him. Even so they knew all that Gin helped. He was brave and didn't scare easily. He followed them after being offered ice cream. Thats when a black van appeared and was dragged into it. He was taken away and was kept prisoner in a dark attic. He sat there tied to a metal pole. Being fed regularly so that he wouldn't starve. In the end he was found but not until 7 months after he was said missing.

Teenager
After Gin was rescued by the police. He changed he wasn't that spoiled brat anymore. He took everything in moderation and was quiet. He studied hard in school and expanded his knowledge. He didn't ask for anything anymore sometimes only the necessities. He had so much opened for him. He was good at music being able to play the piano well, and studying hard getting accepted into multiple colleges that were very high. Even so as they say the good always die young. As he was walking home from the Library he was hit by a car.

Afterlife
When Gin awoke he was in a dusty old village. He sat there and stared at the people, and then stood up and dusted himself off. He slowly staggered towards a small house and leaned back against the wall. He slowly slid down and sat there against the wall. He sat there and cried, and cried, and cried. He cried until he couldn't cry anymore. He finally stood up when he was done, and staggered off trying to find a way back. He walked far and for a long time but only reached the forest. Thats when a hollow appeared it had a giant mask and it made Gin freeze in fear. His whole body shook and thats when he was struck. He suddenly blacked out and collapsed. He thought he was going to die again and be sent to a bottomless pit, but when he awoke he was in a house. A shinigami had saved him and nurtured him until he was well again. This incident left a giant scare on his chest but also left him wanting to be a Shinigami. His fire burned deep and so he grew an attachment to his Zanpaktou Ryuu and climbed the ranks with incredible swift.

Other:
-Hates being called a kid or midget

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Kidou:Name: Shakkahô (Shot of Red Fire)
Number: 31
Type: Hadou
Element: Fire
What is it?: A red orb of energy is concentrated in the user’s hand as they chant, creating a sort of grenade floating within their reach. This small period of charge time has a great payoff, however, as the orb created is a potent concentration of energy. It shoots off at high speeds to the target, exploding in a great blast of fire and forced, with a ten meter range and a three meter blast radius.
Activation Command/Chant: “Ye lord! Mask of blood and flesh, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Inferno and pandemonium, the sea barrier surges, march on to the south!"

Name: Byakurai (White Lightning)
Number: 4
Type: Hadou
Element: Lightning
What is it?: By concentrating reiatsu at the fingertip, the user draws forth a great deal of their reiatsu, causing it to course through their body. From there, the energy is converted into a white lightning at the origin of its use, a fingertip, and fired out in a beam about two inches in diameter, with a fifteen foot range. Although energy has piercing properties, it should be understood that they are limited, especially when foregoing the usual attack command, but it remains a dangerous technique due to the sheer voltage it shoots through the target.

Name: Sôkatsui (Blue Fire, Crash Down)
Number: 33
Type: Hadou
Element: Fire
What is it?: The sister technique to demon art 31, a blue glow of energy is concentrated in the user’s hand as they chant. Upon completion, a sort of missile violently fires from their hand. This small period of charge time has a great payoff, however, as the orb created is a potent concentration of energy. It shoots off at high speeds to the target, exploding in a great blast of fire and forced, with a twenty meter range and a five meter blast radius, also firing out a beam of blue flames for five meters after impact.
Activation Command/Chant: "Ye lord! Mask of flesh and bone, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Truth and temperance, upon this sinless wall of dreams unleash but slightly the wrath of your claws."

Name: Geki (Strike)
Number: 9
Type: Binding
Element: None
What is it?: A light suddenly flares outwards, after the insanely long incantation is completed, which engulfs the target to completely freeze them for a few seconds. It’s a full body immobilization, it is broken by a rise in the target’s spiritual pressure.
Activation Command/Chant: "Disintegrate, you black dog of Rondanini! Look upon yourself with horror and then claw out your own throat!"

Name: Shitotsu Sansen (Beak-Stab Triple Beam)
Number: 30
Type: Binding
Element: None
What is it?: Three beams of light are created, lancing out of the user’s hand to slam into the opponent, often used to pin them to a certain surface. The beams themselves are six feet in length, and fire forward towards three key places- each of the shoulders and the waist.

Name: Enkosen (Arc Shield)
Number: 39
Type: Binding
Element: None
What is it?: A kido that describes the creation of a shield, nothing more than condensed reiatsu. The shield is resilient to attacks comparable to offensive kidou of the same number in a completely balanced situation, but shatters if hit by multiple attacks by stronger ones.

Name: Tsuriboshi (Suspending Star)
Number: 37
Type: Binding
Element: None
What is it?: Simply the creation of cushions of spiritual energy, each suspending star is a cushion for falling objects, anchored to a certain point by a “rope” of spirit particles. Generally a safety net, it requires no chant, but full concentration and must be maintained throughout the duration of its existence.

Techniques/Abilities: Shunpo (Flash Step):
A highspeed technique that allows the user to travel long distances with their spiritual power. As the name states its done within a step. Is said to be an extremely hard skill to learn and master to those below captain level.

Senka:
A technique using shunpo to attack the opponents back aiming for their hakusui. (Requires shunpo)

Eishohaki; The perennial ability of a skilled kidou caster. This ability enables the casting of lesser spells without the use of an incantation with only minor reduction in kidou power. (Note: this is not an excuse to kidou spam).

Hanki (Reverse Demon):
This technique nullifies an opponent's Kidô spell by hitting them with a perfectly opposite surge of energy. Yoruichi uses this against Soifon's Flash Cry.

Strengths: His strengths are his ability to make strategic decisions in seconds. He also has a lot of spiritual power which is probably another strength. His urge to keep fit also helps with his movement speed and attack speed. He doesn't worry about his strength so which is why he isn't all bulging with muscles. His calm and mature thinking also helps in fights. Fighting alone is where he can truly show off his skills with no one to worry about he can go all out.
Weaknesses: Gin focuses mostly on his speed and Hado so he doesn't hit very hard. Another disadvantage of his is that he thinks only of his comrade if they are in danger. He forgets about himself and focuses on getting them out of there alive. He also has a rule about not hitting women. So if his opponent is a female he will surely lose. Also Gin doesn't use his Zanpaktou unless he is forced too. Or is angered incredibly.
Combat Style: Gin doesn't fight head on straight away with everything he has. He takes time and thinks and tests the enemies strength, and when his done with that. He attacks with a combination of incredible speed and powerful Hado. He only uses his Zanpaktou when necessary, and when he does use Ryuu he turns into a relentless machine. Losing all thoughts he attacks in a berserk rage. He turns all emotions off until his opponent is dead. Thus the reason why you shouldn't make him mad.

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Zanpakuto name: Ryuu
Zanpakuto Spirit: Ryuu
Spirit Appearance: Ryuu
Spirit Personality: Ryuu is the complete opposite of Gin. He is short tempered, blood thirsty and only thinks of himself. He craves to fight and tries to talk Gin into some. He absolutely hates it when he isn't used in a fight and tells off Gin for not using him later. Ryuu always wants to finish a fight bloody but doesn't get to too often. Even so he respects Gin and thinks of them as partners in the art of killing. There is no doubt Ryuu is a warrior soul. Yet he accepts Gin as being on par with him.
Dormant Appearance: Ryuu's dormant appearance is simple. A wakizashi with a purple and gold hilt. It isn't as decorated as many of the other Zanpaktou's, but Gin doesn't care and neither does Ryuu. His only interest is soaking his own blade in blood. Ryuu's blade is only about 30 cm long and basically a pinky wide. His sheath is just plain black but it isn't seen very much. Since that part is hidden in Gin's robe.

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Shikai Call: Shou Issai! (Destroy Everything!)
Shikai Appearance: Ryuu's appearance stays the same in his Shikai form.
Shikai Abilities:

Extending Slash
Gin increases the length of Ryuu by 10x the original 30" with incredible speed, and at the same time Gin slashes his opponent with the long blade. Creating a attack that can hit from 9" ft away. After the blade hits the 9" ft it suddenly vanishes into yellow dust, and the wazikashi turns into its dormant form.

Extending Mirage
Gin repeatedly shoots his opponent from close range. The attacks are so quick they create afterimages. Thus creating a fury of fake and real attacks. Also the dust that is released by Ryuu when his afterimages disappear, will blind you and if exhaled lethal to the body system. The afterimages last only about 4 seconds. Even so that is plenty of time for the next 6 -7 attacks.

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Bankai Call: the name/phrase that triggers your second release. This section is for Captain Class Characters only, if you are not applicable for Bankai -- at the moment -- leave this section blank, or delete it entirely.
Bankai Appearance: how it looks when it is released, remember, it doesn‘t have to change form.
Bankai Abilities: all applicants may have up to 3 abilities.
Edited by L.A.R, Aug 8 2010, 03:33 AM.
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1) Don't just take a canon zanpakuto without really changing anything.
2) You cannot have custom techniques.
3) You cannot have Shunko and Counter Reiatsu on the same character.
4) You're good at everything and your only listed strength is your sword? Um...No.
5) You will get a fifty foot shikai when I get a wolverine level healing factor. Translation: Somebody will have to get Kazu VEEEEEEEEERY sloshed.
6) Pick a division.
7) Actually describe your second shikai ability...Because, right now, that sounds like an excuse to mod a hit. Or at least it sounds like you think it sounds like a legitimate excuse to mod a hit.
8) The bare minimum a captain does not make.

I know you're not done...But I honestly don't care to wait for you to put more work into that zanpakuto when the basis itself is flawed.

And I feel obligated to tell you, I've personally denied captain applications better than this.
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:S Okay...Well I know its shoddy but its the base of the bio cause it was late last night and I wasn't really in the mood for thinking...but anyways I'll get back to editing..Also I thought I was allowed to have custom Kido Techniques...Thats what it said on the character sheet..
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Custom Kidou. Not custom techniques.
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Ah ok

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Okay so I've done the things you said to edit and also my shikai is different to Gin's instead of pulling it back it turns into dust which I was going to use for my Bankai which isn't going to happen :/
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Shunpo, Hanki, and Counter reiatsu are techniques. what you have listed under your techniques are kidou... ;>.>
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:S Arg lol umm so how am I spose to have 7? Or does the techniques go with my Hado as well
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"L.A.R"
 
Kidou: Shunpo (Flash Step):
A highspeed technique that allows the user to travel long distances with their spiritual power. As the name states its done within a step. Is said to be an extremely hard skill to learn and master to those below captain level.

Counter Reiatsu:
Utilizing your own spirit power to increase your defense similar to the Arrancar hierro technique. It was first utilized to our knowledge by Zeraki Kenpachi who claimed he was unable to be cut. This was due to the fact that he utilized a skill developed by him known as counter reiatsu. This technique when refined enough is able to block pure spiritual based attacks. This has been noted when Kenpachi took a Getsuga directly and come out with no damage. It is also able to nullify the effects of kido due to them being comprised of the casters spiritual energy. In turn this technique gives the user a similar invulnerability to normal melee attacks which can be noted as Kenpachi was unable to be cut aside from if the enemy’s spirit power was high enough. The end result of that is the zanpakuto merely coming to a stop on the surface of the user’s skin. This is not hierro in that it does not condense spirit energy into the skin it merely builds a layer around it acting as a barrier. In short this technique protects the user from kido, zanpakuto based spiritual attacks and melee attacks if the users spirit power is higher than the opponents.

Hanki (Reverse Demon):
This technique nullifies an opponent's Kidô spell by hitting them with a perfectly opposite surge of energy. Yoruichi uses this against Soifon's Flash Cry.
These three are all Techniques, not Kidou. They belong in the "Techniques" section.


"L.A.R."
 
Name: Geki (Strike)
Number: 9
Type: Binding
Element: None
What is it?: A light suddenly flares outwards, after the insanely long incantation is completed, which engulfs the target to completely freeze them for a few seconds. It’s a full body immobilization, it is broken by a rise in the target’s spiritual pressure.
Activation Command/Chant: "Disintegrate, you black dog of Rondanini! Look upon yourself with horror and then claw out your own throat!"

Name: Shitotsu Sansen (Beak-Stab Triple Beam)
Number: 30
Type: Binding
Element: None
What is it?: Three beams of light are created, lancing out of the user’s hand to slam into the opponent, often used to pin them to a certain surface. The beams themselves are six feet in length, and fire forward towards three key places- each of the shoulders and the waist.

Name: Enkosen (Arc Shield)
Number: 39
Type: Binding
Element: None
What is it?: A kido that describes the creation of a shield, nothing more than condensed reiatsu. The shield is resilient to attacks comparable to offensive kidou of the same number in a completely balanced situation, but shatters if hit by multiple attacks by stronger ones.

Name: Tsuriboshi (Suspending Star)
Number: 37
Type: Binding
Element: None
What is it?: Simply the creation of cushions of spiritual energy, each suspending star is a cushion for falling objects, anchored to a certain point by a “rope” of spirit particles. Generally a safety net, it requires no chant, but full concentration and must be maintained throughout the duration of its existence.
These four are Kidou. They are in the right place.


"L.A.R."
 
Techniques/Abilities:Name: Shakkahô (Shot of Red Fire)
Number: 31
Type: Hadou
Element: Fire
What is it?: A red orb of energy is concentrated in the user’s hand as they chant, creating a sort of grenade floating within their reach. This small period of charge time has a great payoff, however, as the orb created is a potent concentration of energy. It shoots off at high speeds to the target, exploding in a great blast of fire and forced, with a ten meter range and a three meter blast radius.
Activation Command/Chant: “Ye lord! Mask of blood and flesh, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Inferno and pandemonium, the sea barrier surges, march on to the south!"

Name: Byakurai (White Lightning)
Number: 4
Type: Hadou
Element: Lightning
What is it?: By concentrating reiatsu at the fingertip, the user draws forth a great deal of their reiatsu, causing it to course through their body. From there, the energy is converted into a white lightning at the origin of its use, a fingertip, and fired out in a beam about two inches in diameter, with a fifteen foot range. Although energy has piercing properties, it should be understood that they are limited, especially when foregoing the usual attack command, but it remains a dangerous technique due to the sheer voltage it shoots through the target.

Name: Sôkatsui (Blue Fire, Crash Down)
Number: 33
Type: Hadou
Element: Fire
What is it?: The sister technique to demon art 31, a blue glow of energy is concentrated in the user’s hand as they chant. Upon completion, a sort of missile violently fires from their hand. This small period of charge time has a great payoff, however, as the orb created is a potent concentration of energy. It shoots off at high speeds to the target, exploding in a great blast of fire and forced, with a twenty meter range and a five meter blast radius, also firing out a beam of blue flames for five meters after impact.
Activation Command/Chant: "Ye lord! Mask of flesh and bone, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Truth and temperance, upon this sinless wall of dreams unleash but slightly the wrath of your claws."

Name: Sôren Sôkatsui (Twin Lotus Blue Fire, Crash Down)
Number: 73
Type: Hadou
Element: Fire
What is it?: Essentially a doubled version of #33, this spell fires two shots of blue fire with greater potency than the single-shot variety. Range is increased to fifty meters, with the blast radius now spanning fifteen, and the after-impact beam of energy released piercing outwards for twenty. Each shot is independent of one another, though the enhanced potency is only achieved if both projectiles hit. replenished.
Activation Command/Chant: "Ye lord! Mask of blood and flesh, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! On the wall of blue flame, inscribe a twin lotus. In the abyss of conflagration, wait at the far heavens.
These four are Kidou, not Techniques. They belong in the Kidou section.


In your application at the moment, in total, you have 3 Techniques and 8 Kidou. You may have 4 Techniques, and 7 Kidou. Please move your techniques and kidou to the right places, as indicated above, get rid of one of your Kidou, and pick another Technique.
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Done
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Um...Rank?
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I wouldn't mind 3rd seat but if i can possiblyget 9th division vice captain then that would be great
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You need to make a decision on what rank you're going for, and modify your application accordingly. Counter Reiatsu is available only to Captain-level characters, and Shunpo and Senka both require at least a Vice Captain rank.
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Well since Baku disinergrated all hope of getting the captain rank I'll go for Vice..
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Shunpo (Flash Step):
A highspeed technique that allows the user to travel long distances with their spiritual power. As the name states its done within a step. Is said to be an extremely hard skill to learn and master to those below captain level.

Senka:
A technique using shunpo to attack the opponents back aiming for their hakusui. (Requires shunpo)

Counter Reiatsu:
Utilizing your own spirit power to increase your defense similar to the Arrancar hierro technique. It was first utilized to our knowledge by Zeraki Kenpachi who claimed he was unable to be cut. This was due to the fact that he utilized a skill developed by him known as counter reiatsu. This technique when refined enough is able to block pure spiritual based attacks. This has been noted when Kenpachi took a Getsuga directly and come out with no damage. It is also able to nullify the effects of kido due to them being comprised of the casters spiritual energy. In turn this technique gives the user a similar invulnerability to normal melee attacks which can be noted as Kenpachi was unable to be cut aside from if the enemy’s spirit power was high enough. The end result of that is the zanpakuto merely coming to a stop on the surface of the user’s skin. This is not hierro in that it does not condense spirit energy into the skin it merely builds a layer around it acting as a barrier. In short this technique protects the user from kido, zanpakuto based spiritual attacks and melee attacks if the users spirit power is higher than the opponents.

Hanki (Reverse Demon):
This technique nullifies an opponent's Kidô spell by hitting them with a perfectly opposite surge of energy. Yoruichi uses this against Soifon's Flash Cry.


As it stands, you can't have any of these. Shunpo, Senka, and CR aren't allowed to third seats, and Hanki is only for hand to hand combatants...Which you are not.

Can you rewrite your strengths and weaknesses with...Things that aren't about your personality?

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Extending Mirage
Gin repeatedly shoots his opponent from close range. The attacks are so quick they create afterimages. Thus creating a fury of fake and real attacks. Also the dust that is released by Ryuu when his afterimages disappear, will blind you and if exhaled lethal to the body system. The afterimages last only about 4 seconds. Even so that is plenty of time for the next 6 -7 attacks.


Um...No. Why? It does three things. Afterimages, blinding dust, and poison...Hell, only the blinding dust is actually legal for a shikai tech. Also, exhaling is breathing out...;>.>
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Lol didn't look at the skills much xD and hmm I'll take away the dust cause I want to use it for my Bankai and np I'll do that now and umm I'll change it then
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