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| Akaai | Jun 8 2009, 09:00 AM Post #1 |
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Name: Sazaku Norimune Alias: The Metal Demon Age: 25 Race: Norimune [Waiting For it to be Accepted] Appearance: Ethnicity: Japanese Hair: Silver (Due to Clan Trait) Eyes: Blue Body: Athletic His favorite clothing includes black gloves, a long-sleeved black shirt, and a black vest with several hidden pockets. The vest has the Uchiha Clan Symbol on the back. Also wears jeans with a few extra pockets. The jeans are made with a stretchable material that allows him to fully utilize his flexibility. He carries most of his tools in his vest and pant pockets. As for footwear, Taisei thinks open-toed shoes are a liability, so instead of wearing traditional sandals, he wears black combat boots with steel toes/soles. Taisei also wears a hooded black cloak. However, he keeps the hood down except during bad weather, and usually takes it off when he fights. His headband is worn around his head. He also wears a long black, white and gray scarf that is wrapped around his neck all the time. Personality: Sazaku is calm and quiet as opposed to being arrogant and loud, more than likely due to his shattered past in which he was nearly killed by his own mother. With his emotions shattered, Sazaku turned into a deadly strategist and analyst without emotions to cloud his judgement. This meant he would complete the mission regardless of the peronal cost. Sazaku has felt love before, however due to his handicap does not know how to express his love in return, which bring many to believe he is heartless when in retrospect he does feel, simply not how to express these feelings to others. Powers: 1) Norimune - Kaneseitan [Metallic Birth] Spoiler: click to toggle 2) Norimune - Tanto Seisei [Dagger Creation] Spoiler: click to toggle 3) Kenjutsu (Swordsplay); Basic[/]b Spoiler: click to toggle History: Sazaku was originally born to a father who was not a Norimune, however a swordsman instead. His father, greatly skilled in Hand-toHand Combat even though he was not a Norimune, was an extremely powerful figure, and thus, taught his son early within age, of the Hand-to-Hand Combat Skills. Hand-to-Hand Combat was an indoctrinated stance of Kenjutsu (Swordplay) trained to those of the Norimune clan in part responsible to their belief that to forge a great weapon, one must know how to use that weapon. You see, there was a special power the the Norimune Clan possessed that equally rivaled even the power of the Marquess Satetsu, each member of the Norimune clan was able to withdraw energy-embedded iron from their body from the Energy Points that were dispersed amongst the body of a person, and were able to form various swords with ease. This gained them the nickname the 'Sword-Dancer Clan' as there were even a few who were able to manipulate the Energy in each sword to manipulate the sword itself. Sazaku could only dream of such power, though he was to be the heir of the Clan. That was, however, then his mother who he had little knowledge of appeared before the boy and his father. Sazaku's mother, Motoko, had joined another side, and as her mission, was ordered to kill both Sazaku's father Takashi, and Sazaku himself. Takashi and Motoko, the boy's mother and father, fought as Takashi sent Sazaku away, however Sazaku had not gone far away when his mother had killed his father, impaling Takashi with many Norimune blades. Bloodied from the skirmish by his father's blood, Sazaku's mother motoko set towards the boy, when Sazaku's cousins attacked her. She defeated the two, decapitating the two easily, however this had given Sazaku enough time to, along with his Uncle Tatsurei, retreat from the scene. Sazaku began learning under Tatsurei's guidance. Ever since the horrors that befell Sazaku, he has sealed his basic emotions off, masking them as he had absorbed such horrors and could not properly cope with them at the time. This did not stop Sazaku, however, from learning all he could, as Sazaku had a voracious appetite for knowledge, which has lead Sazaku to the point he is now, with only two goals he wishes to complete; gain strength and slay his mother so he could slay her and bring balance and order back to his clan which he has been forced to see wane. He gained strength and was called a prodigy, as Sazaku joined higher Classes within one year of joining his High-School and Two years later becoming a 13 in University Level Classes and passing them with ease. At the age of fifteen, right after the Final University Exams, Sazaku faced his mother only to have her tell him how proud she was of him, however she still had to kill him. Merely nodding, Sazaku lashed out with his Metal Dagger at his mother, only to have it blocked and shattered completely. If it hadn't been for Tatsurei stepping in, he would not have been able to defeat her. Edited by Akaai, Jun 9 2009, 11:37 AM.
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| Zachariah | Jun 8 2009, 01:40 PM Post #2 |
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You need to have a full appearance, as it said: one or two paragraphs please. Your history appears to be incomplete, you mention his mother attempting to murder him yet the history makes no mention, let alone how he would have gotten to Everten. Especially since much of the history seems to take place prior to modern history. You state in his history he knows hand to hand skills and swordplay, yet both would count as powers in themselves. |
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| Akaai | Jun 9 2009, 08:09 AM Post #3 |
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Hand Skills and Swordsplay. 1) Hand Skills: Hand Skills is basic knowledge of Fighting. I refuse to think of it as power, It is not a power. Every fighter knows a basic uppercut or a right hook, Actually, Everybody knows some basic punches and kicks. 2) Swordsplay: I can see this as a Power but, could I have it with the one I have now? Sazaku, My RPC, isn't a Swordsman, just a Modified Human. Some of his Techniques he will learn need him to have basic Swordsplay Skill. 3) Everything Else: Will edit once at home. I'm at Work and the Keyboard can't be changed of French so its hard. |
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| Zachariah | Jun 9 2009, 02:04 PM Post #4 |
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1.) Yes but hand-to-hand combat training is just that. Youve been trained so you have better skill. Anything beyond the basics would count as a power as we cant have people running around with 50 different martial arts. 2.)In that case do what I would do and word it into the description of the power somehow. Though master level swordplay would be seperate mind you
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| Akaai | Jun 10 2009, 02:28 AM Post #5 |
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1) It isn't a true Martial Art. It's just kicks and punch. 2) Basic Knowledge of Swordsplay include; Lunge, Parry, Attack and Defend. As his father was an Master Swordsman, Sazaku holds a Technique called Tora Benkou. Tora Benkou is a sword Technique used to remove the opponents of their weapon, being and Gun or a Sword, followed by a low swipe kick. |
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| Zachariah | Jun 10 2009, 01:34 PM Post #6 |
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Well see that breaches the 2 power/abilities only rule. Which is why Id suggest somehow implementing the training aspect in some other ability. |
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| Akaai | Jun 10 2009, 06:34 PM Post #7 |
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Will do. I am now going to change my Character to a full time Swordsman. I will continue working on the Norimune Race and when it is accepted I will kill this RPC and create another with the Race |
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| Zachariah | Jun 10 2009, 08:16 PM Post #8 |
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lol you wouldnt HAVE to kill em but hey char deaths ARE interesting well just tell me when youve edited this one to how you want it.
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