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Rae's NaNo '11; I changed the game XD
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Topic Started: Oct 9 11, 12:20 AM (265 Views)
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RaeMina
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Oct 9 11, 12:20 AM
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Let me be your sword and your shield
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I've changed plans. This new story I'm completely excited for~
Old Idea What originally started as a co-op with Nova is gonna be my NaNo attempt this time around~ What I envision for this topic is you help me make sure I have all my bases covered by asking questions that hopefully I wouldn't have thought of otherwise in my development process. Here's a one sentence elevator pitch: A fantasy ocean-punk with two main characters, one a deaf dancer with latent abilities and the other a badass normal pirate on a revenge streak. Each has their own storyline which interact and conflict at certain points, with the dancer's holding the main focus.First Beta Paragraph Her wrists flicked upwards, Dahnya slowly raised her arms above her head. With pointed toe, she drew her foot around in a circle and turned her back on the musicians. She ignored all the eye contact could as she stared ahead, and started her dance. She watched for any sign that she was off tempo. The tapping of an audience member's feet, a bob of the head, especially the energy of the crowd. She could feel a mix of pleasant surprise and amusement, however the amusement could have been because of the novelty of seeing a Rrarryo'mihn or someone thinking about what they could do to her once she was alone... Dahnya stopped her thoughts there and focused on her movements. She pulled her arms in slow swirls and circles in front of her, swaying her hips in the rhythm of the song. She span slowly in a circle, making eye contact with Kyam as she did. He bobbed his head in time with the strumming of his cyolah.
Edited by RaeMina, Oct 15 11, 2:02 PM.
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chibiske
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Oct 9 11, 11:48 AM
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Bollacks
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NaNo is that 50 000 word competition right?
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RaeMina
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Oct 9 11, 7:55 PM
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Er, yes~ Though I was hoping someone would ask a question about S'Garra so I can get some stuff in print instead of floating around in my head >>
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Shadow501
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Oct 9 11, 8:58 PM
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3/8/11--One Year of Dragon Age II
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>.>; Uhhh... sounds good? Got anything done that we can readz?
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RaeMina
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Oct 9 11, 9:00 PM
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Uhm, a beta first paragraph I'll dig it out in a few...
ALSO STORY STRUCTURE. It's eeeeeeverywheeeeeeeere
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Shadow501
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Oct 11 11, 7:47 PM
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3/8/11--One Year of Dragon Age II
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>.>
*Taps foot*
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RaeMina
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Oct 12 11, 11:00 PM
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Well, I don't have a name for the world, but I do have a conlang! The language is called Rra'hon, pronounced with a short trill in the Rr and a guttural H.
Rra'hon is the only language the dancer speaks. Her name is Dahnya, and she's a Rra'gya, one with latent magic powers. The pirate, whose name is Victor Aban, speaks a little bit of Rra'hon, but just enough to understand basic speech.
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