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Circle with the Devil; A few of my poems
Topic Started: Oct 5 11, 10:26 AM (200 Views)
Kasai Haru

Oh Hai, i'm new here and while I'm still just lurking and getting a feel for things I do want supply some content, I enjoy writing poetry so I figured I'd share a little.
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Circle with the Devil
A dance with the devil
Circles with pure evil
A loop with true despair
Fire inhaled into your lungs
hatred filled eyes
burning fire that was your hair
True evil has entered
And the ultimate form of despair begins
And I'll be there
for the bitter end.
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This following one was created during a "Writers challenge" amongst a small group of friends, we challenge each other to write outside of our normal habitat I was given the point of view of a hooker, it does have some minor adult language and the subject matter makes some people uncomfortable so i will add a spoiler tag to it:

Untitled: Dolly
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I'd just like to clarify his one was inspired by a movie I saw, not current political events

Freedom
The illusion of freedom
Sweeps across humanities eyes
A dream, a falsehood
created by the morally bankrupt
freedom created by the backs of slaves
the blood of the young
the hate of another for our personal ways
a perpetual loop
The question lies in the illusion its self
Is it worth fighting for a lie?
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Anyways I hope you enjoy them, sorry for how rough they are grammatically, I have dyslexia even though I've worked very hard to overcome it my grammar is something i'm still very much working on.
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novatrigger777
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I like you. You have a long way to go before you can be deemed the evilest on the board, but I like your writing. I'll call you kiti no kao.
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Lenna Suzaka
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*claps* Noice.

The hooker one is actually my favorite. It seems to vent a lot of emotion to the reader, to make them really think about it. Your play on words is excellent as well.

By the way, you don't have to put spoiler tags on anything. We are... pretty damn crude.

After all, I wrote Fuzzy Wuzzy. In the worst way possible.
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RaeMina
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Pft. You're all crude, but I didn't used to be. You have corrupted my once pure and endearing mind~ ;~;

Welcome to the Herd, Haru~ Despite my innocent nature, Dolly was my favorite. With a more concrete setting rather than a general topic like Freedom, it made it more interesting to read and look at
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chibiske
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Considering i can't do a lick of poetry, Noice.

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