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Circle with the Devil; A few of my poems
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Topic Started: Oct 5 11, 10:26 AM (200 Views)
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Kasai Haru
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Oct 5 11, 10:26 AM
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Oh Hai, i'm new here and while I'm still just lurking and getting a feel for things I do want supply some content, I enjoy writing poetry so I figured I'd share a little. -------- Circle with the Devil A dance with the devil Circles with pure evil A loop with true despair Fire inhaled into your lungs hatred filled eyes burning fire that was your hair True evil has entered And the ultimate form of despair begins And I'll be there for the bitter end. ---------------- This following one was created during a "Writers challenge" amongst a small group of friends, we challenge each other to write outside of our normal habitat I was given the point of view of a hooker, it does have some minor adult language and the subject matter makes some people uncomfortable so i will add a spoiler tag to it:
Untitled: Dolly
Spoiler: click to toggle I'm just your dolly for your viewing if you have the money i can fullful your sadistic fantasies Control me, kiss me, fuck me and bleed your sorrow into me Behind closed doors we can have fun Show me your humanity, show me your desperation For enough i can give you a piece A piece of a false fantasy a false reality, Your dispare is my affair. -------- I'd just like to clarify his one was inspired by a movie I saw, not current political events
Freedom The illusion of freedom Sweeps across humanities eyes A dream, a falsehood created by the morally bankrupt freedom created by the backs of slaves the blood of the young the hate of another for our personal ways a perpetual loop The question lies in the illusion its self Is it worth fighting for a lie? ---------------- Anyways I hope you enjoy them, sorry for how rough they are grammatically, I have dyslexia even though I've worked very hard to overcome it my grammar is something i'm still very much working on.
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novatrigger777
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Oct 5 11, 10:34 AM
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Surpreme ruler of eleven heavens
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I like you. You have a long way to go before you can be deemed the evilest on the board, but I like your writing. I'll call you kiti no kao.
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Lenna Suzaka
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Oct 5 11, 11:53 AM
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*claps* Noice.
The hooker one is actually my favorite. It seems to vent a lot of emotion to the reader, to make them really think about it. Your play on words is excellent as well.
By the way, you don't have to put spoiler tags on anything. We are... pretty damn crude.
After all, I wrote Fuzzy Wuzzy. In the worst way possible.
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RaeMina
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Oct 5 11, 3:04 PM
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Let me be your sword and your shield
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Pft. You're all crude, but I didn't used to be. You have corrupted my once pure and endearing mind~ ;~;
Welcome to the Herd, Haru~ Despite my innocent nature, Dolly was my favorite. With a more concrete setting rather than a general topic like Freedom, it made it more interesting to read and look at
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chibiske
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Oct 5 11, 8:46 PM
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Considering i can't do a lick of poetry, Noice.
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