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Topic Started: Aug 27 11, 11:07 PM (251 Views)
Tressimir
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Love Is Over

I have not been one for bitterness,
Not to hold against one a slight.
But after being lost in a shroud of darkness,
My eyes finally see light.

An eternal King on an eternal throne,
But for how much longer?
Though I try to resist the hand of grudge,
The fiend in my heart grows stronger.

Love is over.

I anticipated a time of joy,
What I received was a crippling pain.
Like the hate of a man suffering the whip,
My emotions turn black once again.

An eternal King on an eternal throne,
But for how much longer?
Though I try to resist the hand of grudge,
The fiend in my heart grows stronger.

Love is over.

Stop me now, before it’s too late,
And my agony takes the form of life’s bane.
Before the beast from within me
Unleashes a shower of crimson rain.

An eternal King on an eternal throne,
But for how much longer?
Though I try to resist the hand of grudge,
The fiend in my heart grows stronger.

Love is over.

Love is over.

Love is over!
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Nyup
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Ahh . . . Do I detect a look of disapproval in your eye? Tough beans buddy, 'cause that's the way it's gonna be
u suk
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RaeMina
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Let me be your sword and your shield
I can only derive that you are jelly, eleca~ >:3
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Nyup
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Ahh . . . Do I detect a look of disapproval in your eye? Tough beans buddy, 'cause that's the way it's gonna be
RaeMina
Aug 30 11, 2:20 AM
I can only derive that you are jelly, eleca~ >:3
Of what?
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Tressimir
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Personification

Loved Joy and Hilarity,
Met Fear as they walked away.
Spent years with her as my shadow,
Until her sisters got ahold of me.

Misery and Agony,
Gave scars that haven't healed.
The only thing holding back death,
Was Hatred keeping me alive.

Spent some time with Solitude,
Whose lessons I held near and dear.
And for a while Tranquility,
Was the one who kept me company.

But as time went on and seasons passed,
I met a friend in Jealousy.
And we would have raged at all the rest,
If two others hadn't distracted me.

Love and Lust, the closest of twins,
Hard to tell one from the other.
Even while they guided me,
I was led astray by dark Despair.

Years later I thought myself free,
Of all those who sought to bind my heart.
But no man is an island,
And I stand against them one more time.

Two who had until now stood apart,
Derision and Sheer Terror array themselves against me.
Reason and Logic have all but left me,
And my sole ally Malice is a double-edged sword.

I don't know the outcome of this conflict,
Whether or not I will or can succeed.
Will I reunite with fleeting Equilibrium?
Or finally succumb to Madness and Death?



I am aware this poem doesn't rhyme, but there's no law saying I have to make them do so. So I didn't.
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RaeMina
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Poems don't need to rhyme anyway~

Though I think this might be of some help for you? 83 It's called, the Seven Deadly Sins of Poetry, aka common pitfalls for beginning poets
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Tressimir
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Can't open it, wrong format.
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RaeMina
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Ah, well I'll just have to find it again XD

Right here
Edited by RaeMina, Dec 8 11, 3:32 AM.
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