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The Chronicles of Eralene and Graciel; My shot at letting my world be free.
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Dec 29 09, 12:09 AM
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Hi, I know I'm new here but I've been searching for a place to let my world that I've been creating go free, and well heres a place I can try. Please give me a chance.
Maps Eralene:  Graciel, The Floating Continent: 
Note that Graciel was created first So i added a location guide to the map itself, But Eralene cannot fit on there so i Give you a location guide for Eralene here.
Eralene Location Guide And the music that would play there if it was a game. Just click the name of the Location for the music that plays there. 1. Roseiron, the Humans Stronghold2. Mount Visgard, Home to the Knights Training School3. The Machi City, Saperas4. Trent, the Ancients tomb5. The Selkie city, Pelior 6. Atrius Labs, The Homuculis Home7. Kirin, a ruined city left with ancient secrets8. The Elven City, Tu'DeAbrin9. Ruins of a city deserted long ago, Cairus10. Alteas Pass11. Morros, A desert Oasis, and a known site for Ancients pact making.12. Kurumi Caves, Inside lead to worlds unknown13. The Selkie city, Amantis14. The Elven City, Idelin15. Yolem Volcano, A site of Ancient Pactmaking.16. A Land of Ruins, Kaderum17. Ra'Elurum, a wasteland like no other, portal to another world is located here.18. Mazeria Base Camp, An exploratory Base19. Ma'Te'Ordia, The Ancients Caves20. Mount Gu'therebas21. The frozen Shrine, Macal22. A island surronded by fog, Ki'tetras
And now for the Races in this world.
Races ElvesGeneral Appearance From the forests they come, nature has blessed them with superb hearing, and the ability to heal others, they are also gifted archers. and aswell as that they can call upon nature to help them battle with the power of geomancy. SelkieGeneral Appearance They are agile, strong, and Well versed in the battle arts. They usually use weapons they can fight artfully with. Such as a Spear, dual daggers, or even their fists and feet. Ther have a heigtened sense of smell, and awarenss due to the whiskers on thier face. The fact that they are so agile come with a drawback, they have low stamina and are not good at taking a hit. They usually live along the coast. HumanGeneral Appearance  Extravagant outfits for the win! Lol The race that dominates nothing, they have thier single fortress. Roseiron, but they are also everywhere in this world. They specialize at nothing, and cannot use magic unless they find, or create a soulstone. However they will not be told except to the privleged. But thier are clues to other ways scattered among the world. HomunculiGeneral Appearance As they transform all the time they can look however they want, be creative  The failed creations of scientists long ago. Their Bodies infused with a soulstone, magic has been sealed from them, in turn they are able to transform into any shape they wish, beast, person so be it. But if they try to go "too big" thier could be detrimental results. AesirGeneral Appearance  Yes i realize there isnt and gems but on one wrist, that just the best pic i could find that shows how they dress and stuff They are the creatures of the sky continent Graciel. They have a Crystal at each wrist and one upon thier head, the crystals give them immense magic power. But in turn it saps most if not all of thier physical strength. They are able to use teleporation magic aswell. Also for the immense power of magic theey hold, using a healing magic on any other race, the pure power of it would surely tear apart at them and be useless likely causing greater pain. MachiGeneral Appearance They have bladed hands and feet, they cant grip weapons but the upside is that they have armored body and superb vision. Surpassing that of any other Race. They are very small, but not very agile, usually grow at most to 3 feet tall. The fact that they have armored body, and bladed hands and feet. Along with thier small size, they are often underestimated, but be warned, they are known to be able to move things far larger than they are. AncientsGeneral Appearance As it is said there are tribes who still follow thier own paths, and the ancients are one of those tribes. They are a group of summoners summoning all manner of beast, golem, even demons. They make a pact, each summoning having a different affect on thier body. They are well recognized y all manner of tattoo covering thier body, each one signifying a different pact. This does not mean that other races cannot summon, this race is just gifted in the summoning arts.
And now for what I've seen on alot of RP's, a character Rubric.
Name: Race: Age: Gender: Height: Weight: Build: Appearance: Weapon of Choice (if any): Personality: Background:
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Dec 29 09, 12:46 AM
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Name: Kama I'mati Race: Selkie Age: 16 Gender: Female Height: 5'2 Weight: 113lbs Build: Slender, Well toned. Appearance: She has Long ruby red hair, with emerald eyes that are the purest ever seen. She has a golden Necklace with a Ruby about the size of a Quarter in it as a gift from her mother. She wears a tubetop, that fits perfectly. And a pair of shorts that has a lightly armors skirt running around the back and Leather armguards along her forearms. She wears sandals and keeps a Gemmed knife strapped to her ankle. Weapon of Choice (if any): Spear, Her knife. Personality: Friendly, always second guessing herself. Background: She is a Selkie that was born into a family who trained guardians. Also known as Mercenaries, she wished to explore the world and see all there is, so she trained harder than anyone soon becoming a legend in Amantis. but this was only because of her lineage, When her parents died due to thier house burning to the ground. She knew it was no accident and began on a search for the truth.
Name: Mizu Tsura Race: Elf Age: 29 Gender: Female Height: 5'7 Weight: 136 lbs Build: Light, almost Frail Appearance: I used the chara generator :U)  Weapon of Choice (if any): None, she uses Geomancy mostly. Personality: Kind, quiet, shy. Background: An elf from Idelin, she has been quiet and shy most of her life. the rest is to be revealed...
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Dec 29 09, 12:58 AM
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Out in the forests around Amantis she was training, and working at the same time. She had be recruited to hunt a panther that had been attacking people leaving Amantis on foot. The reward was rather large, Fifty thousand gold would last her a good few months. She came to a clearing and sat down upon a stone. she drank from a canteen at her side. and rested, the humidity and heat taking its toll. then she heard a slight growl, and the wind blew whislting rustling the leaves around her. A snap of a branch and a panther came flying out towards her. "Damn." She said quickly grabbing her spear. She swung it up at the panther cutting its nose, as it stopped and jumped back. "Thats right, I mean Business you damn panther." She pulled the knife off her ankle grabbing it firmly in her hand spear in the other as she put herself in a battle position.
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Lenna Suzaka
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Dec 29 09, 10:12 AM
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(Wait... is this joinable? Just asking :D. If so I'll join later. Just kinda busy at the moment. Also Selkies: Favorite race in CC. Just wondering why you didn't involve the Yukes or anyone else.)
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Dec 29 09, 11:15 AM
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(never played FF:CC ,more than a few hours at a friends house And i only played a Selkie and I added my own spin to them I think. And yes its joinable ^^ Also im adding pictures of the races so you can get an idea of how they look.)
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Lenna Suzaka
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Dec 29 09, 6:18 PM
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(Awesome!!! Okay I'm going to join, but still a little busy. Will work on it within the hour)
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Dec 29 09, 7:33 PM
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(Two comments. I KNOW you got an image from FFXIV. Two... you used an image that is very popular with a certain someone on this forum. Three, well... uh... yeah, hope you approve.)
Name: Jari (Yari) Grandier Race: Human Age: 19 Gender: F Height: 5'7" Weight: 140 Build: Slightly built (for a female) Appearance: Chestnut with emerald streaks define her hair. Her eyes are a calm brown, though fiery with passion when need be. She has two tribal tattoos laced down both arms. She wears a forest green (somewhat puffy) vest over a black cotton tank top. She also dons a pair of slacks that are somewhat loose. They're also white laced with green vine markings on the sides. Equipped on her hands are a pair of fingerless leather oak gloves. Sports a pair of dangly small obsidian earrings and a ribbon to tie her hair from the base. Weapon of Choice (if any): Spear? Maybe? We'll see where this go. Personality: She is completely NOT a spaz. I am, but that's not the point. Just kidding. Either way, she is rather serious about most subjects, and tends to have a hard time lightening up about everything. She has a fondness for cute little puffy looking creatures. Background: A runaway soldier seeking peace and quiet... eh not saying mysterious, but it shall be unfolded.
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Dec 29 09, 8:14 PM
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(Lol i never claimed the images to be my own and yes i got an image from FFXIV which i just found out about today lol, Which image is very popular? And welcome to the RP I guess :P)
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Dec 29 09, 8:49 PM
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The panther blasted forwards and just as the panther reached out to strike she swung her spear cutting one of its fangs. She launched herself into the air while the panther was diverted to the pain of having a tooth cut. She landed behind the panther gracefully, as The beast realized it spun around, but as it was spinning she thrust the spear forwards impaling it right in the side of the rib cage, a perfect hit. The panther Roared in pain and swung its claw once before collapsing to the ground. "Done." She said as she removed her spear. Then she began to cut off one paw as proof of her victory and the key to her reward.
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Dec 29 09, 8:55 PM
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(Ha, I've seen that pic for the Aesir race somewhere before >.> Anyway, onward to the profile!)
Name: Xizar Race: Homunculi Age: 23 Gender: Male Height: 6' 1" Weight: 150 Ibs Build: A little more slender than average but just by a bit. Appearance: (Note: This is going to be what he looks like most of time since he's a Homunculi) Medium length jet black hair, with the hair on the back of his head longer than the rest, reaching below his neck line. Xizar has two crimson streaks running down his head right behind his ears, making him very distinguishable. Xizar's eye color usually changes depend on his mood, but the neutral color is brown. Wears brown worn-out shorts and a black collared shirt along with arm gauntlets and leg protectors over his boots. When around strangers, he can literally flip up his collar then pull it up into a hood to cover his face. Weapon of Choice (if any): A large two-handed sword. Personality: Half serious or half joking, depends on what's going on around him. Xizar is usually on topic and determined on his mission or current situation. Shy and quiet at first but opens up very quickly if you spend enough time with him. Background: A Homunculi who was fortunate enough to be found and taken care of by a scientist who knew much about Homunculi. But it's not as nice as it sounds: The scientist used Xizar in his research to better understand Homunculi. Now he has sent Xizar on a mission which will test his strength and loyalty to him...
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Dec 29 09, 8:57 PM
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(Yay another person! )
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Dec 29 09, 8:58 PM
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A clap emerged from behind. "Good job." A face beamed full of subtlety. A shrouded woman hopped from the tree, walking towards the other girl. "A panther, huh?"
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Dec 29 09, 9:03 PM
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"Hmm, Yeah, I hope your not here to steal my bounty though. That Ended badly for the last one." She said never taking her eyes off the paw until it was fully removed. As she finished removing the paw she wrapped it in a cloth and tied that to her side, and re-sheathed the knife to her ankle. She got up and slowly looked at the Woman before her, She hadn't seen her before.
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Dec 29 09, 11:04 PM
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About a mile or so away from where Kama and Jari were, an Aesir woman was running through the forest, sprinting as fast as she could. She shrieked as she duck, dodging the greatsword that nearly cut down a tree beside her.
"I don't like this as much as you do, but you can at least make it easier for me by not running away." Xizar said in the most calm voice, completely contradicting his intense pursuit of the Aesir. The woman then found a cliff in front of her. "Oh good. You stopped." The Homunculi said, raising his sword up in a fighting stance as the Aesir prepared a spell...
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Dec 30 09, 2:41 PM
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"Well... I am a little upset by this outcome. No, I was passing by. Mind if I have the remains?" Jari asked rather abruptly, her eyes glancing down at the panther. "Judging by the looks, you don't need it. I'll even pay you a little."
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Dec 30 09, 3:00 PM
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Let me be your sword and your shield
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(Sounds interesting, yes. Mind if I tag along? I'll be working on a profile in the meantime)
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Dec 30 09, 4:05 PM
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(Go ahead and join RaeMina, the more the merrier!)
"Go ahead and take them, I just need this paw to get my reward." Kama said with a slight smile. "So may I ask why you want the remains?"
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Dec 30 09, 4:21 PM
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"Well you see..." The woman presented her sleeve, which was completely tattered as if through a reckless event.
"I've only wore my own clothes out. And as of late it's becoming rather chilly. The meat, I heard, is rather tender when cooked," was all the woman said as she began to dig through the body with her spear, slicing chunks to wrap up in the hide she skinned.
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Dec 30 09, 6:02 PM
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"Ahh, Well, If you need new clothes, I might be able to help you out a bit. Amantis is near here, just about a days walk south. And when we get there I can probably get you a free nights stay at the inn." Kama said fully smiling now.
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Dec 30 09, 11:15 PM
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Name: Ma Fae'La Race: Ancient Age: I was thinking that Ancients are long lived, but her mind set is the equivalent of a 20 year old Gender: Female Height: 4' 7"(I think they're short? If not, let's just go with it) Weight: 103 lbs Build: Thin, very light frame Appearance: Grayish skin, no hair, yellow eyes. She only has two tattoos: One is on the back of her left hand, similar to a paw print. The other runs along her right shoulder and twists and rolls as a stream of water down and around to her elbow, although it looks a lot like feathers. She wears brown leather cuffs on her wrists and ankles, a simple leather bodice with some stitching for decoration, a wrap that covers her legs and ends around mid shin. Weapon of Choice (if any): Physical weapon is a brass capped staff made from a dark colored wood, with white markings along the sides that don't signify a pact. Otherwise she uses summons, mostly those of beasts. Personality: Very curious and likes to find out answers. A preferred Pacifist. Likes to talk to herself, except when she is extremely focused. Background: A new summoner, she is currently traveling to form pacts mostly because it is a fascinating process to her.
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"Well, this is a lot harder to find a panther around here than I thought," Ma Fae'la spoke aloud to herself, gripping her staff as she shuffled through the brush. "If the panther has been attacking those leaving Amantis, then I should have seen it by now. And quite the ways out of town as well." Fae'la continued through the brush until she found herself in a small clearing, with nothing else in sight. There was a flat rock not too far from where she was. "I suppose it would be a good time to rest, then. Perhaps if I'm a sitting duck, he will come to me instead."
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