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Bloody Rain; The darkest RP in the history of ToaP
Topic Started: Jun 22 09, 8:15 PM (815 Views)
Blaze Gamma
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Two years ago

I walked down the road silently. In front of me, a chapel. House of God. I licked my lips as a black cat ran in front of the door, into traffic. A car stopped, the cat darted away. I stepped inside. I was wearing a hoodie, and I was sure no one outside had seen my face. This time would be no different than the last eight. The last thing they were to hear would be a song.

I licked my lips. I could practically taste the woman's blood already. I opened the door and walked into the chapel. It was empty. I had expected this. I stepped, each step made a small creak, despite my bare feet.

Creak.

Creak.

Creak.

I started to drool. I'm going to kill her. She's so beautiful. A woman of god. An innocent lamb. I'm gonna kill her. I'm gonna kill her and taste her blood. I thought as I got to a door. I opened it.

There was a hall with a few windows and a few doors. Out one of the windows was a woman. She was twenty three and absolutely gorgeous. She was a sister of the church, and that made me want her that much more. She sat in the garden out the window, blissfully unaware that I was coming.

I began to sing softly. "Twinkle twinkle little star..."

I opened the door. How I wonder what you are..."

I pulled a knife from my pocket. "Up above the world so high..."

I began my approach. "Like a diamond in the sky..."

I licked my lips. I was only feet from her now. "Twinkle twinkle little star...

"How I wonder..." I stabbed the knife into her back while covering her mouth. She struggled, but it was all over for her. "What... You... Are." I sang as I twisted the knife in her back.

I saw the tears in her eyes. Eyes that were desperately asking, Why? What have I done to deserve this? I smiled.

After a moment, her eyes glassed over. I set her down and pulled a needle on a narrow tube from my hoodie's pocket, along with a few bags. I Put the end of the tube in one of the bags and stabbed it into her neck. The blood started flowing nicely. I filled one bag... Two... Three...

I took the first bag and started sucking on it. Her blood was nice and salty, yet a little metallic. So wonderful.

I began to fill another bag.
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* Knock knock*

Laurence pounded on the front door of Brian Alabastre.
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I woke up. "Who's there?" I asked tiredly, getting up and quickly hiding my stash. There were 3 leftover bags of blood in my refrigerator from the night before. I quickly put them behind a bottle of fruit punch. "I'll be just a minute."

Nobody had ever knocked on my door before. I lived in what could be called a teenage orphanage. Nobody looked over us there. We were just given money each week for food, a fridge, and a bed. I opened the door. "Can I help you?" I asked.
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" Officer Laurence Kieth. I was wondering if I could ask you a couple questions? May I come in."
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(((CUT TO THE CHASE!!!)))

"Huh?" I asked, putting on a confused face. "About what?" This guy didn't look too bright. No one had ever suspected me. I bet that the man just got in an accident and I'm a witness. "I'll do anything I can to help you, Mister Kieth?"
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" I just need to use your phone for a second."

Laurence stepped into the house.

" Have you ever been a fan of murder mystery?"

(Must have awesome build up)
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Can I just say that blood has little nutrients, and if you drink enough of it then you will get very sick.
You could also get diarrhea, before you get sick.
Stomach ache - duh.
Not to mention parisites and Virus' passed on, these include AIDS, Malaria, Hepatitis.


~Just thought you should know~
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(((I know this, and there is in story explanation. God knows he doesn't drink all the blood. And he does eat, as will be explained shortly)))

"What, you mean like novels?" I asked. "I don't really read much. Don't have the money to buy books, and I don't like libraries..." I looked at the man dully. He looked a little dense. There's no way he can know anything. "Are you done? I don't want to talk to you."
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" Oh, I just need to use the phone."

Suddenly a profile full of pictures dropped from his coat. Pictures from the <insert name here murder> serial case sprawled across the floor.

" Can you pick those up for? I'm not as young as I use to be."
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"There's a phone at the end of the hall. I don't have one." I said, looking down. I saw the photos sprawled across the ground. The officer didn't see my eyes widen. I slammed the door in his face and ran to the window. I tried to open it. It wouldn't open.
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In his mind, Laurence knew he had his man.

" Everything okay in there, son?"

He shouted through the door.
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(((GET ON WITH IT! THIS IS A FREAKING PROLOGUE!)))

I continued to tug at the window to no avail. Why won't it open!? I thought. In a panic, I kicked the window.

"AHHHHHH!!!!" I exclaimed, falling over. I hadn't been wearing shoes. My foot was now covered in glass, and I wasn't going anywhere. "No... Fuck, fuck fuck... No..." I said.
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Laurence rounded the corner of the house.

" Sorry, but only criminals flee, sir. I'm going to have to bring you in."

He placed him in handcuffs and into the back of his cruiser.
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And so I was captured...

The following weeks were a blur of trials and me being shipped to and from jails. Eventually, my sentence was decided. I would have been executed, were it not for state law disallowing it.

Life in prison with no hope of parole, solitary confinement.

I didn't know how long it was that the white box was my home. All I knew of was the food, soap and toilet paper coming through a hole in the door. I didn't know how long it was like that.

I had been in there for almost a year when I saw another human being. I didn't know what was happening. I was handcuffed and dragged out to a room. I was showed pictures of a crime scene. They asked me questions. I answered them. They put me back. A week later, they came back. Apparently I had helped them solve a slew of unsolvable murders. They took me to another crime scene. I said what I thought.

So on it went from there. They paid me in hot dogs.

Today was another day like that.

~Present~

I stepped out of the front door of the prison. Outside there were protesters. It wasn't anything new to me, of course. Every time I came out they were there. I was led into the cruiser with handcuffs on my wrists. In the front seat, two officers were talking. One was new. I'd never seen him before.

"Is this that kid?" The newbie asked.

"Yeah. Creepy isn't he?" The older officer replied. The car started moving. "Killed 19 people before he was caught."

"Holy hell... Isn't he the one who did that dam killing two years back?"

"What? THe one where five little girls were hung off a dam with their blood drained and used to write some children's song right next to them?"

"Yeah, The Itsy Bitsy Spider... He ran water over their corpses to..." The young officer said. "Why are we even taking this freak along?"

I didn't look up. They could call me whatever they wanted. Freak, Murderer, it didn't really matter to me.

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Laurence sat in his office. He through the file on his desk.

" When is this case going to be over."

He said to himself.
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"SIR!!!!" A young officer frantically ran into the office, breathing heavily, his eyes wide with excitement.

"Another death today!!!!"
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"We're taking him along because this case has been pretty much unsolvable." The older officer says. "Something only he seems to be able to do... He can read criminals just by looking at their crime scenes. He tells us their next move to the letter."

"That's... Impossible!" The younger officer said.

"It's true." I said in a small voice. Prison had all but killed my vocal cords.

"Shut up, convict." The older officer said to me.

I shrugged and looked out the window. We were in the city now. We drove past the church where I last killed. "Good times." I said softly.

The younger officer started reading a file. "Wow... His parents were killed? He was found covered in their blood?"

"Yeah, he's an odd case. Don't worry about that stuff now, and try not to throw up when you watch him work."

"Huh?" The younger officer asked. "Why would I..."

"You'll see."
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" Goddamn it. What is officer?"

Laurence asked.
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"I don't know sir. A man's entrails... just shoved into his eye sockets!!!" He distorted his face in thought as he continued.

"Half the body was burned. He looked rather young, mid teens in all honesty sir."

"Daddy!!!" A small voice cried out as a little girl, dressed in summer clothing, ran up to Laurence. "Hi Daddy!"
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The car stopped. The officers got out and opened the back door. Two men in shock armor accompanied me out of the back. They weren't there to protect me of course, only to protect everyone around me. I looked at the corpse. "Hm?" I crouched over it and poked at a wound.

"What the hell is he doing!?" The officer asked as I stuck my finger in my mouth. "Oh... My god!" He said, throwing up.

"Hmm... This person has killed before." I said. I was never briefed, of course. They just dragged me out, told me to look, and gave me hot dogs.
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