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Kieo Shards: And the Ancestral Sabers; Not even half the story
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I just decided to put this up and see how it goes. BAsically this is one of the orgins of my username. But I got this story from somewhere else, or something else from long ago and branched off of it. I worte this when i was 10-13 so if it's basic and sloppy it's because it's not edited

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My History Report
Past: On our continent of Animalan exist six countries. The six countries are Bunnal, Junral, Famog, Ramor, Kragode, and Daimora each ruled by different animals. Bunnal the country of forests and plains is ruled by bunnies. Junral the country of desert and savannas is ruled by kangaroos. Famog the country of prairies, forests, and hills is ruled by ferrets. Ramor the country of a sea of rainforests and mountains is ruled by monkeys. Kragode the sea port country is ruled by their merchant council that has one elder or something but it doesn’t have a king or anything. Daimora the country mountains, woods, and grasslands is ruled by lions.
All the nations but Kragode hold a sacred seal that holds much power; and there are the sacred shards and some other stuff (Hakol I could use some help). Bunnal holds the bunny seal of courage. Junral holds the kangaroo seal of faith. Ramor holds the monkey seal of wisdom. Famog holds the ferret seal of vision. Daimora holds the lion seal of power. Together with the help of Kragode the countries waged war against the evil demons that attacked their beloved continent. The six countries fought the demons with the power of the seals. They fought one of the Demon Lords, Demontras, and seized his power and split it among the seals giving the seal of power most of the soul. The Ani-Dema War which is what it was called happened about 450 years ago on the our continent.
Present: Today there are many rulers to this land. The forested landscape of Bunnal ruled by the bunny King Dieo the Mighty Knight (that’s my dad’s title correct?). The desert dunes of Junral ruled by the kangaroo Queen Desrta the Shirring Sword. The forested mountains in Ramor ruled by the monkey Progmas (next time we meet during class you need to tell me what one of those is), King Malon the Wise Mage. The hilled valley Famog ruled by the ferret King Halen the Piercing Bow. The seaside port country Kragode smallest of all nations ruled by merchants their high council whose main leader is Governor Ploro the frog (he doesn’t have a title just Elder or Governor right?). The mountain country of Daimora ruled by the lion Emperor Dranclaw the Great General.
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Hakol if you could correct anything I’ve messed up please let me know, my father really wants me to do it well, and I haven’t been able to practice or do anything.
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Prologue
In the country of Bunnal at Bunnal Castle: “Attack!” yelled a solider protecting the castle, “It’s the Daimoran army they’re attacking the castle!”
“The Daimoran army attacking us?” said the king on the throne; his shaggy blue hair met his beard. He had soft eyes which sparkled in the light with a shade of blue. He also one of his ears pricked up and the other one had a downward angle to it, “Why would the Daimoran army attack us? We’ve been in truce with the country and peaceful towards them for over 120 years.”
“Your highness,” said the soldier that ran into the throne room gasping for air,
“Your highness they’re inside the castle. You can hear them marching and doing battle with our men.”
“I see, Torno,” said the king without even seeming phased by the news, “Take my son Kieo and leave Bunnal immediately and work to find Bieo and Clieo. But first go and head to Famog, King Halen might know something of this.”
“Yes sir,” said a bunny with light brown hair and black eyes. He rose up quickly and grabbed his pony.
“But, Father,” said a smaller bunny similar looking to the one on the throne got up looking shocked at what his father had just said. Like his father he had shaggy blue hair and sparkling blue eyes. This bunny had ears which pricked up, his garments were simple for a prince and he had some armor on; he also had a sword strapped to his side, “I don’t want to leave I want to stay and fight with you. You know I’m a strong sword user.”
“I know you’re a strong wielder of a sword but still. Take him now Torno!” yelled the king. Torno mounted his pony took Kieo and galloped out of the throne room, Kieo yelled for Torno to put him down.
Minutes later entered four Daimoran warriors. Then entering the room along with the warriors came three more animals.
“Dranclaw what is the meaning of this,” demanded Bakieo rising from his throne and pulling out a lance the size of a deer.
“….,” Dranclaw murmured as he motioned to his soldiers for them to leave the throne room.
“I believe it is too late for you Dranclaw, and you two, you’re to blame for this the two of you,” said the king with a sudden glow in his eye while he jumped at Dranclaw with his lance in hand…..
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