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| Tweet Topic Started: Mar 17 2009, 09:08 PM (77 Views) | |
| Juliet Burke | Mar 17 2009, 09:08 PM Post #1 |
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OOC: Here, we used episode 315 (my favourite, hehe) to make an RP. Please use it as an example...you can also make up your own stories :)...as Kate and I did this in e-mails I will post who wrote what and we will continue from where it is. (Juliet is in red and Kate is in yellow) Juliet: The wind caressed my face, I could hear birds, I knew I was outside, without a doubt. Stupid Others and their stupid ideas. I felt the pressure of the little knife I had in my pocket leave. I lifted my hand quickly and grabbed Kate’s hand. “What are you doing?” She asked. I moved my eyes from her face to the knife and back to her face. Did she really think I was that stupid? “What am I doing here?” I asked keeping my tight grip on her hand. “I don’t have a clue, so let me go.” She asked again. I loosened my fingers and let go of her wrists. She looked at me. I sat up and looked around. We were most definitely lost. I heard a little scratching and turned to look at Kate. She was trying to pick the handcuff lock. Should I tell her I had the key in my pocket? “We need something smaller.” I said matter of fact. She shot me a look. I knew this would be a long day. Kate: I woke up outside. Birds were chirping and the last thing I remembered was being gassed. God! I hate the Others. I could kill them. Wait! I'm handcuffed to someone. CRAP! Its that blonde, Juliet. I think. She grabed my hand. ''What are you doing?'' She looked at me from top to bottom with a weird expression on her face and asked. ''What am I doing here?'' ''I don't have a clue so let me go!!'' I replied. She loosened her grip and eventually let go of my wrist. As soon as she looked away, I started trying to pick the lock but she looked at me again and said: '' We need something smaller'' What a smartass. Who does she think she is? I'm the fugitive here I think i know how to pick a lock. I look at her with an 'I hate you look'. Juliet: We finally stood up. I never got why Ben had handcuffed us together, I think I hated this as much as she did. "We have to hurry, you're people dragged us here, I can follow the trail back to your camp." She said. "Kate, it's not a good idea." I said. She looked at me with a death stare. She picked up a walking stick and she dragged me along with her. Someway, our conversation ended up on Jack. She though she knew him, ha! I knew all about him. "I know his age, his height, weight, date of birth, blood type...what do you know about him Kate?" I asked. She looked at me. "Are you screwing him?" She asked with a smile. "Do we have to talk?" I asked. "Nope." She replied with a smirk. We kept walking in silence. Night came fast, we were walking in the dark. "Kate, I think we should stop! it's about to rain." I said. "No! If it rains, I'll lose the trail." She said pulling on my arm. I pulled her back, stubborn bitch! The thunder rolled and the rain started pouring. She gave my arm another tug. I pulled her back. "I hope you're not going back for him." I said. She turned and looked at me, she was pissed. "WHAT?!" She asked. "I hope you're not going back, for Jack." I said. She looked both shocked and pained. "Because I saw his face when he saw you and Sawyer, he was hurt...so I really hope you're not..." I started, but I couldn't finish it as I recieved a blow to the face that threw me down. She had punched me. The handcuffed pulled Kate down when I fell. She was now on top of me and punching me in the face. I threw her off as best I could with the handcuffs. I stood up and pulled her along. I placed my foot on her stomach, threw myself to the ground and threw her over my body. I felt a pain in my arm, of course! Stupid handcuffs. She rolled me onto my stomach and crossed my arm underneath me. "Are you done?" She asked as she pulled on my arm. I yelled out as I felt the pain go throught my arm. "Are you DONE?" She yelled again, pulling. This time I heard a 'pop' and felt a horrible stabbing pain under my shoulder. That bitch had dislocated my shoulder. I yelled somemore. "Oh, my God!" She said getting off, "I'm so sorry, I didn't mean..." she started. Then she got quiet... Kate: We finally stood up. I didn't trust her. I was sure she was somehow still working with the others no matter what she was saying. I knew I could find a trail and go back to the Others camp but will she wanted comme with me. Oh, well if she doesn't, I'm just going have to force her! ''We have to hurry, your people dragged us here, I can find a trail back to your camp.'' I said. I saw her think a little before she replied and I'm pretty sure she was making this up for some reason, probably for us not to go but whatever. ''Kate, it's not a good idea.'' She finally said. I looked at her and just starte walking, dragging her beside me. Somewhere along the way, I had no idea how, but the conversation turned to Jack and I argued that I knew him way better than she did. ''I know his age, weight, DOB, blood type... what do you know about him Kate?'' She asked. How dare she ask me that? For one thing, I knew Jack would never fall for her but just to make sure, I asked: ''Are you screwing him?'' I could see that this clearly was an unexpected question and knew the answer without her telling me. Now I knew, I knew Jack better. I knew what he liked in real life not something I read off a piece of paper. ''Do we have to talk?'' Juliet asked. Sure as hell, we don't!!! ''Nope'' I replied while laughing in my head. We just kept walking in complete silence FINALlY!! I couldn't get her annoying voice out of my head! Night came really fast, faster than I had expected and I really wanted to get back to their camp but apparently, she didn't because she then said: ''Kate I think we should stop! its about to rain.'' That's exactly what she wanted, for us to stop and for me to lose the trail so we couldn't get back to their camp. God, I hate her! ''No, if it rains, I'll lose the trail'' I repled while I pulled on the cuffs so that she would follow me. She then pulled me back, I pulled back even harder. I am so tougher than her. I could take her anyday. ''I hope you're not going back for him'' she said. ''WHAT!?!'' I asked. "I hope you're not going back, for Jack." She said. I looked at her in shock. "Because I saw his face when he saw you and Sawyer, he was hurt...So I really hope you're not..." She said. WHAT!!!! Was she serious? I reacted without thinking and punched her as hard as I could right in the face. When she fell I fell too because of the stupid handcuffs. I just kept punching her when we hit the ground. She then put her foot on my stomach and fliped me over her body. I landed over her head. That really hurt. The adrenaline was rushing through me and I felt no pain. All I knew was that I wanted to hurt her and hurt her BAD! I took her arm that was cuffed and swung it behind her back, forcing it so it would hurt her. ''Are you done?'' I asked. She screamed like a little girl but I didn't hear her. All I wanted to do was hear her say she's done. I repeated louder. ''ARE YOU DONE!?!'' I forced on her arm harder. I heard something pop. I must have broken a bone or dislocated her shoulder. She was screaming in pain and agony. It then hit me, I had really hurt her. To my surprise, I felt really sorry and I was now close to tears. ''Oh! My God!'' I said softly. I got off her and released her arm. ''I'm so sorry!!, I didn't mean.'' I added. Juliet: I kept yelling bloody murder, my arm hurt like hell. Kate was quiet and was looking around. I heard metallic, machine-like sounds and clicking. The monster! I couldn't tell her I knew what it was. "What is that?" I yelled. "Run." Kate said pulling me up and running in the jungle pulling on my 'good' arm. The clicking was getting louder and we were running for our lives. God! I had never had to run from that thing, but I sure wasn't going to stop. I followed Kate, not that I had any choice. My shoulder was still killing me. I kept my arm close to my body to try and move my shoulder as little as possible. God! This hurt! "In here!" Kate said pulling me into a hallow tree. We sat down and looked around. The monster was still coming. "What is that?" I asked. Kate slapped her hand over my mouth to shut me up. I placed my hand over hers. I knew the monster was coming and I was scared. We heard the clicking and then a light, a bright light. The monster went away. "What was that?" I asked Kate again. "I don't know." She said. "Sorry about your shoulder." she said again. Maybe she was actually feeling bad about it. "Don't flatter youself, it's happened four times already." I said as I got more settled. I knew we'd be spending the night. My should was really killing me. No matter how many times it had happened, it still killed me. "Take my hand." I told Kate. "What?" She asked. "You took it out, you're gonna help me put it back in." I told her. She looked at me with shocked eyes. "Maybe we should wait..." She said. "No! Right now it feels like there's a thousand pieces of shattered glass under my shoulder, it's hurting me." I told her, "now, take my hand, twist and push up." I told her. She approached me and took my hand. As I took a deep breath in, she pushed on my arm and I heard it pop back into place. I yelled as the pain went through my arm. Kate sat back again. "Do you want to take turn for watches?" Kate asked. I shook my head. "Nothing's in here, except for that thing, we'll be safe here." I said. I wasn't going to walk stay up all night, my shoulder still hurt. She looked at me. I knew she had questions and I also knew she knew I had the anwsers |
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| Kate Austen | Mar 30 2009, 07:03 PM Post #2 |
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Kate: She Kept yelling and it was kind of getting annoying but I didn't want to tell her to shut up since I was the reason she was in this much pain and then I heard it the mettalic sounds of the Monster. '' What is that??'' She asked stupidly, even though I suspected she knew about the monster. I wasn't going to argue with her now! '' Run!!'' I yelled and pulled her off the ground to make her run. While running I could hear the clicking sound the monster made. It was getting closer and closer to us. As soon as I spotted a hollow tree I yelled: ''In here!'' And pulled Juliet in with me...not that I had a choice. Once in the tree we sat down and Juliet asked me again: ''What is that?'' I slapped my hand on top of her mouth just to make sure the monster wouldnt here us and then there was just light, after the light was gone so was the clicking from the monster so I suspected that it was probably gone. '' What is that'' she asked me for the third time, so I finaly told her ' "I don't know'' That's when I saw the pained expression she had on her face, so I added an appology. ''Sorry about your shoulder.'' The thing that really surprised me was that while saying this I really was Sorry! ''Don't flatter yourself, it's happened four times already.'' She said in a kind of rude voice which I didn't blame her but it made me feel a little less sorry! ''Take my hand.'' she said. I was completely shocked, what did she want me to hold her hand? ''What?!?'' I asked confused. "You took it out, you're gonna help me put it back in." I looked at her for a moment, very confused that she would trust me enough to help her relocate her shoulder. ''Maybe we should wait..'' I said thinking that Jack could probably make this less painful for her and once again to my surprise she said: "No! Right now, it feels like there's a thousand pieces of shattered glass under my shoulder, it's hurting me. Now, take my hand, twist and push up." She said as she approached me and took my hand. I took a deep breath, preparing myself for what I was about to do and just like that with a POP it was over. She yelled obviously from the pain. "Do you want to take turn for watches?" I asked while sitting back down. She just shook her head and said "Nothing's in here, except for that thing, we'll be safe here." I didn't object to this as I was very tired and I wanted to sleep! Then she said: ''I know you must have a lot of questions, I just wanted to let you know that I'll try my best to answer them.'' She was right I did have questions but I wasn't so sure she would answer them truthfully because they were quite personnal, probably not the questions she thought I was going to ask in fact. ''How do you feel about Jack? '' was the first thing I couldnt hold back so thats what I asked her. She looked both shocked and not very surprised all at once, that confused me. Edited by Kate Austen, Mar 30 2009, 07:03 PM.
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| Juliet Burke | Apr 4 2009, 12:32 PM Post #3 |
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"How do you feel about Jack?" Kate asked. That made me think, how do I feel about Jack? "He's a great guy, he's very nice, he's a great doctor..." I trailed off. I wasn't going to tell her I loved him, I loved him more than anyone in the world. I wanted Jack, I needed him. I felt a familiar lump in the throat and tears filled my eyes. I turned away from Kate. "Are you okay?" She asked. I could hear the smile in her voice. "I'm fine." I said. Stupid Kate, making me realize my feelings. I picked myself up and looked at her right in the eyes. "What about you, Kate, how's your love life?" I asked, "I know for a fact youve been married, what happened?" I asked her. Her green eyes seemed shocked and mad. I smiled inside, I had hit a sensitive string. |
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| Kate Austen | Apr 4 2009, 01:03 PM Post #4 |
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He's a great guy, he's very nice, he's a great doctor..." she went on and on about Jack and not about what I had asked for. I wanted to hear her say that she loved him, just to make it real for me, to finally be able to let him go. Even though I loved Sawyer I couldn't deny that I had feelings for Jack and I wanted them gone! To my surprise Juliet's eyes started to water up and she turned away from me. ''Are you okay?'' I asked with a smile but not a smug smile, for some reason I felt sorry for her...for some reason, I wanted to actually comfort her...until she asked me: "What about you, Kate, how's your love life? I know for a fact youve been married, what happened?" I was both shocked and really mad all at once because not only did she know what had happened, she was only asking me this to hurt me and before I knew it my eyes were filling up with tears as I thought about him because I had really loved him more than Sawyer or Jack for that matter. But because I had stupidly killed my step father, I was forced to break his heart and to run AGAIN!! By that time I was tired of running but I had to for his safety. ''You know what happened!!'' I said. '' You know that I had to run away from him and you think you're so much better than me and that you actually deserve Jack!!! But I deserve him so much more than you, I'm the one who lost my best chilhood friend, I'm the one who had to leave her husband for him not to lose his job and I'm the one who was in a plane crash that landed me here!!!'' I was breaking down now tears and all. I couldn't see her face but I hoped that I had at least hurt her a little bit. |
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