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Triton the Triceratops; He be a bad ass! *SHOT*
Topic Started: Apr 17 2010, 09:09 AM (361 Views)
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Section I - you, the player

What you go by: K-Chan

Gender: Female

Is this your first time RPing?: No

Romance, Yuri or Yaoi RP okay? Specify: I’m fine with it in moderation, I’ve never done Yaoi or Yuri before but I’m sure I’d like it ^^

How/When to Contact You: I’m online as often as I can be (normally all day during the week) though you’ll most like find me at my DA page http://darkrisingstuff.deviantart.com/ Just note me if you wanna RP with me.

Do you have any rules/preferences: Not much just use good grammar (or the best you can manage)


Section II - your character
Answer the following about your character. If you have a character image, include it with your application.

Name: Triton the Triceratops

Nicknames/Alias: Tri

Gender: Male

Age: 28

Birthplace: Some abandoned bunker in the Land of a Million Lights

Residence: Where ever the road takes him.

Occupation: Bounty hunter

Marital Status: Married his husband Decc is his fellow Bounty Hunter

IQ: Pretty high for someone who never finished high school.

Height: 6’ 3”

Weight: 310

Species: Triceratops

Alignment (hero/neutral/villain, or in-between): He sides with the highest bidder

Aspirations/Dreams: To someday quit Bounty hunting and live happily with Decc

Fears: Spiders (Mobian or otherwise), heights, seeing Decc get hurt or killed, Chihuahuas (again Mobian or otherwise)

Abilities/Skills: Above average strength, sewing, cooking, hand to hand combat, defensive moves, can turn his head 300 degrees due to a ball and socket joint in the base of his skull and can make control collars (control Collars are items he uses to suppress his opponents powers or abilities, thus making them easier)

Special Abilities/Attacks: He can gore people with his eye horns which are about three feet long

Weakness: He’s not very agile, that’s Decc’s job, can’t swim, and is pretty easy to catch off guard

Likes: Decc, when he gets to play the good guy (if they pay high enough), reading when he finds the time, salad, veggie burgers, diet soda, singing, poking fun at Decc

Dislikes: Playing the bad guy (even if the pay is high), when someone tricks him, being mocked

Family and Friends: None that he knows of his mother left him when he didn’t hatch with the rest of his siblings believing him to be a dud

Rivals: Other bounty hunters

Enemies: Not that he knows of

Fur/Scale/Feather Color: Deep crimson, with a pale peach belly

Skin Color (i.e. muzzle, arms): Pale peach belly

Eye Color: Dark hazel

Hair/Quill Style: He has a frill that serves as a shield and spines going down his back

Nose: No visible nose

Ears: No visible ears

Tail: Thick and about two feet long

Other bodily features: N/A

Any Piercings/Tattoos/Scars/Birthmarks?: Scars on his hand so he wears gloves to hide them

Attire: Black or dark navy blue vest, black gloves, black shoes with electric blue streaks

Items/Weapons: Switch-blade, his bare hands, and control collars

Any vehicles?: His own two feet, a cheap broken down car

Back Story: Triton was a late hatcher, he hatched three and a half days after his family left, though he was found by a kind Overlander who took care of him. The Overlander was a Bounty Hunter by trade and taught Tri everything he knows about how to be a bounty hunter. After about fifteen years with his mentor/“father” he left to make it out on his own, that’s when he met Decc and found out that he found males more attractive than females.

That was when Decc confessed that he was the same way and their love grew from there. Now a days they work for whoever pays the highest and often bicker though they make up soon after. Both just want to end up getting a large sore and live in the lap of luxury instead of paycheck to paycheck.
Edited by K-Chan, Apr 17 2010, 09:59 AM.
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...victory. yay.
Looking pretty good. Original enough. Here are the bits I find questionable.

- IQ is vague. School smarts has nothing to do with IQ. It has to do with learning ability and brain function. Look here for more information, and give me a more definitive answer: http://www.increasebrainpower.com/iq-scale.html Even if he's never been tested, give me a range of Average, Above average, Below average, etc.

- Height and weight for a dino does not match up. If he is 6'3", that's a lot of dinosaur. Big the Cat is more fat than muscle, and at 6' 6", he weighs nearly 600 lb. So even if your character is lean, you need to leave regards to muscle mass (especially for a bounty hunter).

- Also, height and horn length seems to be a bit imbalanced. Three feet is very long and awkward for someone only about 6ft tall. Since the tail is only two feet, that makes little sense. I would swap the lengths. Two-foot-long horns seems long, but not impossible.

- Control collars: What do they do? What are their powers, their limitations? What material are they made of? That sort of thing. (Are they the ones from Archie No-zone?) I have to ask for any device like that, as it can be very powerful in the wrong hands.

- If he doesn't like working for the villain as a bounty hunter, why does he do it? Are times hard? Where do his morals and financial situation begin, end, and overlap?

- "Both just want to end up getting a large sore" I think there is a typo there. |D
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Oh okay I'll fix it and repost it. The edit timed out on me ^^;
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Section I - you, the player

What you go by: K-Chan

Gender: Female

Is this your first time RPing?: No

Romance, Yuri or Yaoi RP okay? Specify: I’m fine with it in moderation, I’ve never done Yaoi or Yuri before but I’m sure I’d like it ^^

How/When to Contact You: I’m online as often as I can be (normally all day during the week) though you’ll most like find me at my DA page http://darkrisingstuff.deviantart.com/ Just note me if you wanna RP with me.

Do you have any rules/preferences: Not much just use good grammar (or the best you can manage)


Section II - your character
Answer the following about your character. If you have a character image, include it with your application.

Name: Triton the Triceratops

Nicknames/Alias: Tri

Gender: Male

Age: 28

Birthplace: Some abandoned bunker in the Land of a Million Lights

Residence: Where ever the road takes him.

Occupation: Bounty hunter

Marital Status: Married his husband Decc is his fellow Bounty Hunter

IQ: Above average

Height: 6’ 3”

Weight: 310

Species: Triceratops

Alignment (hero/neutral/villain, or in-between): He sides with the highest bidder

Aspirations/Dreams: To someday quit Bounty hunting and live happily with Decc

Fears: Spiders (Mobian or otherwise), heights, seeing Decc get hurt or killed, Chihuahuas (again Mobian or otherwise)

Abilities/Skills: Above average strength, sewing, cooking, hand to hand combat, defensive moves, can turn his head 300 degrees due to a ball and socket joint in the base of his skull and can make control collars (control Collars are items he uses to suppress his opponents powers or abilities, thus making them easier)

Special Abilities/Attacks: He can gore people with his eye horns which are about two feet long

Weakness: He’s not very agile, that’s Decc’s job, can’t swim, and is pretty easy to catch off guard

Likes: Decc, when he gets to play the good guy (if they pay high enough), reading when he finds the time, salad, veggie burgers, diet soda, singing, poking fun at Decc

Dislikes: Playing the bad guy (even if the pay is high), when someone tricks him, being mocked

Family and Friends: None that he knows of his mother left him when he didn’t hatch with the rest of his siblings believing him to be a dud

Rivals: Other bounty hunters

Enemies: Not that he knows of

Fur/Scale/Feather Color: Deep crimson, with a pale peach belly

Skin Color (i.e. muzzle, arms): Pale peach belly

Eye Color: Dark hazel

Hair/Quill Style: He has a frill that serves as a shield and spines going down his back

Nose: No visible nose

Ears: No visible ears

Tail: Thick and about three feet long

Other bodily features: N/A

Any Piercings/Tattoos/Scars/Birthmarks?: Scars on his hand so he wears gloves to hide them

Attire: Black or dark navy blue vest, black gloves, black shoes with electric blue streaks

Items/Weapons: Switch-blade, his bare hands, and control collars

Any vehicles?: His own two feet, a cheap broken down car

Back Story: Triton was a late hatcher, he hatched three and a half days after his family left, though he was found by a kind Overlander who took care of him. The Overlander was a Bounty Hunter by trade and taught Tri everything he knows about how to be a bounty hunter. After about fifteen years with his mentor/“father” he left to make it out on his own, that’s when he met Decc and found out that he found males more attractive than females.

That was when Decc confessed that he was the same way and their love grew from there. Now a days they work for whoever pays the highest and often bicker though they make up soon after. Both just want to end up getting a large score and live in the lap of luxury instead of paycheck to paycheck.
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You don't have to repost the entire profile.. just answer my questions. I still didn't get an answer on these two, though:

- Control collars: What do they do? What are their powers, their limitations? What material are they made of? That sort of thing. (Are they the ones from Archie No-zone?) I have to ask for any device like that, as it can be very powerful in the wrong hands.

- If he doesn't like working for the villain as a bounty hunter, why does he do it? Are times hard? Where do his morals and financial situation begin, end, and overlap?

I just would like you to expand and explain his motives, feelings, and limitations a bit, is all. These two should help with that. Also, were you applying to use him in-game or just creating a profile for the Lobby stage?
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