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Viewing Single Post From: Ryan Jinn
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DarkSlayer1331
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Jun 2 2009, 07:46 AM
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You just need a few more sentences added on to your Background. Your second sentence is actually part of the first sentence with the way it's worded. The way you have it, there would be a comma, not a period separating the two. Could you add a bit more to your background please?
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