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| Tweet Topic Started: Aug 9 2010, 10:30 PM (112 Views) | |
| Jae | Aug 9 2010, 10:30 PM Post #1 |
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crap...i posted this in the wrong place! sorry :| |
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| mocha | Aug 9 2010, 10:46 PM Post #2 |
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where did u mean to post it? that's the end? i was all ready to get into a good long drama. was about to get popcorn and everything.
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| Jae | Aug 9 2010, 10:51 PM Post #3 |
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oh i thought this part was for chatter XD i guess this is the right place lol. yeaaa thats where it ends lol. sorrrry! i dont think i could make it longer |
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| mocha | Aug 9 2010, 11:02 PM Post #4 |
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oh ok. i thought you were referring to the story. i started the chatter thread and moved the posts for you. sure you could have made this longer. there was a lot more story you could have squeezed in there, before she came to her senses and went back home to mom. |
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| Cinamun | Aug 9 2010, 11:13 PM Post #5 |
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Okay I love the descriptive detail you used in telling the story! I was cold right along with her (especially with the 'breath' you could see coming from her lips in one of the pics. AWESOME). That was a good one Jae, you have a knack for storytelling and should definitely consider a part two ![]() didn't you know we're story fiends around here? LOL I liked it! I could feel the girl's pain! |
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| mocha | Aug 9 2010, 11:16 PM Post #6 |
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![]() we are indeed story fiends 'round here. |
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| Jae | Aug 10 2010, 12:00 AM Post #7 |
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awww thank you ladies i was actually pretty nervous about posting it. i'll try to come up with a second part. i just need to learn to not be so lazy
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| Raheem | Aug 10 2010, 12:29 AM Post #8 |
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it was a great read just like i knew it would be Jae... but i agree... there needs to be a sequel! lol and i think the pictures were awesome too i dont know what you talkin bout |
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| Khalil | Aug 14 2010, 10:59 AM Post #9 |
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GURL !! I was looking forward to more too! I love how you write, so descriptive and clear
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| Jae | Aug 14 2010, 11:46 PM Post #10 |
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thank you so much guys! . ive been trying to think for the past few days of how i could make a part two, but nothing is coming up :|one of my biggest issues is that i can never stick to something long enough to actually finish. blegh |
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| jalice21 | Oct 16 2010, 09:47 PM Post #11 |
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I love your style of writing and so far I am just hooked on it. Jae, you're simply good at writing suspense
Edited by jalice21, Oct 16 2010, 09:55 PM.
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thank you so much guys! . ive been trying to think for the past few days of how i could make a part two, but nothing is coming up :|
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