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Jae Aug 9 2010, 10:30 PM Post #1
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crap...i posted this in the wrong place! sorry :|
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mocha Aug 9 2010, 10:46 PM Post #2
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where did u mean to post it? that's the end? i was all ready to get into a good long drama. was about to get popcorn and everything. :(
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Jae Aug 9 2010, 10:51 PM Post #3
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oh i thought this part was for chatter XD i guess this is the right place lol.
yeaaa thats where it ends lol. sorrrry! i dont think i could make it longer
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mocha Aug 9 2010, 11:02 PM Post #4
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oh ok. i thought you were referring to the story. i started the chatter thread and moved the posts for you.

sure you could have made this longer. there was a lot more story you could have squeezed in there, before she came to her senses and went back home to mom.
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Cinamun Aug 9 2010, 11:13 PM Post #5
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Okay I love the descriptive detail you used in telling the story! I was cold right along with her (especially with the 'breath' you could see coming from her lips in one of the pics. AWESOME). That was a good one Jae, you have a knack for storytelling and should definitely consider a part two :D

didn't you know we're story fiends around here? LOL

I liked it! I could feel the girl's pain!
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mocha Aug 9 2010, 11:16 PM Post #6
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I was cold right along with her (especially with the 'breath' you could see coming from her lips in one of the pics. AWESOME). That was a good one Jae, you have a knack for storytelling and should definitely consider a part two :D

didn't you know we're story fiends around here? LOL

I liked it! I could feel the girl's pain!
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we are indeed story fiends 'round here.
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Jae Aug 10 2010, 12:00 AM Post #7
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awww thank you ladies :D i was actually pretty nervous about posting it. i'll try to come up with a second part. i just need to learn to not be so lazy
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Raheem Aug 10 2010, 12:29 AM Post #8
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it was a great read just like i knew it would be Jae... but i agree... there needs to be a sequel! lol and i think the pictures were awesome too i dont know what you talkin bout
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Khalil Aug 14 2010, 10:59 AM Post #9
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GURL !! I was looking forward to more too!
I love how you write, so descriptive and clear :yes:
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Jae Aug 14 2010, 11:46 PM Post #10
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:$ thank you so much guys! . ive been trying to think for the past few days of how i could make a part two, but nothing is coming up :|
one of my biggest issues is that i can never stick to something long enough to actually finish. blegh
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jalice21 Oct 16 2010, 09:47 PM Post #11
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I love your style of writing and so far I am just hooked on it. Jae, you're simply good at writing suspense :D
Edited by jalice21, Oct 16 2010, 09:55 PM.
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