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Can he do it!?
I vouch for Tennen 6 (100%)
I do not vouch for Tennen 0 (0%)
Total Votes: 6
Should he get?
Should Tennen get Raikyuu? (lighting ball) 1 (16.7%)
Should Tennen become a Chuunin? 4 (66.7%)
Should he get neither? 1 (16.7%)
Total Votes: 6
Paidful, Tennen; Can this Genin do the impossible!? become Chuunin?
Topic Started: Apr 24 2010, 11:44 PM (313 Views)
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In-game name: Paidful, Tennen
Aliases: The Serpent of Mist =P
Key: Rents
Character Age: 15 (Before TS)
Attitude: Average
Ninja Type: Taijutsu Specialist
Current Character Rank: Genin
Currently known and performable Jutsu: Bunshin no Jutsu, Henge no Jutsu, Kawarimi no Jutsu, Suimen no Waza, Shunshin
Current Character Village: Mist
Current Character Organization: N/A
Current Elements: Lighting
Time Spent over skip: He spent a great deal of his time trainning, seeing all his peers become Chuunin before his eyes outraged him.
Requested Rank: Chuunin
Requested Jutsu: Raikyuu (Was RPly trained to use it by Tazuki)
RP Sample:
- RP for making a fake leg (An RP I did before I got rezzed)
cTwo days after his accident, he knew he'd need to work weeks or maybe even months on end to create his new leg "I need materials..." he said feeling weak but still determined, he slowly slid out of bed, grapped his crutch and grabbed a large bag. He made his way to the door "I better get this over with now..." he said as he opened the door and staggered onto the dirt path from his house. Taking almost twice as long then usaully he made his way to the woods, he dropped the bag onto the ground smiling "this'll be alot harder..." he firmly gripped his Kunai and stared at a small tree "Buhbai...." he said smiling. He then threw the kunai at the center of it making a hole, he then took out several shuriken inbetween each finger in both hands, he through them near the hole he had created weakening the tree. He then hoppled over to the tree "take this ya sap.....oh god did I just make that joke?" he said punching the tree causing its trunk to snap in two "without both legs I can't get a running start..." the tree came tumbling down to the ground with a crash "I gots to get ta choppin' " he hobbled over back to his back and picked it up and carried it closer to the tree. He dug inside the bag and revealed a large axe, he rested the axe on his shoulder for a moment or two. He moved the axe down from his shoulders and gripped it tightly while holding it infront of him, he pulled the axe up over his head and swung down at the trees trunk almost cutting it completly in half, he pulled the axe up above his head once more and swung it down again completing his cut. He repeated this late into the afternoon until he chopped each and every peice small enough for his bag, he stacked it neatly within the bag and hauled it onto his shoulders "Arrrrgh..." he groaned resting on the crutch he brought with him "So tired..." he said as he struggled with each and every hop all the way to his home. As he made his way home he past a local shop that sold general items "man I wish I had money to buy crafting supplies" he said as he rested his head on his crutch, feeling fatigued he didn't notice the crutch was losing it's footing and he fell to the ground with a thud. The shop keeper went outside to see if he was alright "h-huh...your that kid that got his leg cut off...what are doing here carrying all that stuff?" he said in a calm voice. With one hand Tennen easily pushed himself upward "give me a hand" he said well off the ground, the shop keeper helped him up to his feet. The two started having idle conversation "So thats why you have all that wood..." he said before abruptly turning away and opening his shop door "wait here.." he said walking inside, Tennen waited for a few minutes until the man walked back outside. He was holding a small box "This is on the house" he said "Just show me where you live and I'll give you these krafting supplies" the shop keeper smiled "Thanks....lets go.." he said as he start hobbling down the path to his house. Tennen opened up the door and went inside, he dropped the bag on the floor and sat on the bed with a sigh "Here,," the shop keeper said tossing Tennen the box "thanks again..." he said as the Shop Keeper waved goodbye and left "Wow...this is great..I'm one step closer to getting back in the game" he said smiling.


wakes up in a daze tossing and turning "Argh!?"he leaned upward abruptly, he looked down at where his leg should be "D-damn..." he said looking at the stump just under his kneecap "Well...I guess I'll start now seeing that I can't sleep an' all.." he said looking at a table holding freshly cut wood. He leaned over the side of his bed and grabbed a box, he set it on his night stand and opened it. He grabbed a small carving knife and jammed it into a fresh peice of wood "I've gotta alot of work to do before I can think about trainning again.." he said as he easily pulled the wood near him. He held the blade tightly, he slowly started carving the side of the fresh peice of wood he stabbed ealier. He worked tirelessly carving out a crudely made shen ".....this'll do for this part for now"


wakes up in a daze tossing and turning "Argh!?"he leaned upward abruptly, he looked down at where his leg should be "D-damn..." he said looking at the stump just under his kneecap "Well...I guess I'll just have to make a new one.." he said looking at a table. He would take out a kunai from his holster, he jammed it into the table smiling "I've gotta alot of work to do before I can think about trainning again.." he said to him easily pulling the table neat him. He held the blade tightly, he slowly started carving the side of the legless table. He worked tirelessly carving out a crudely made shen, "This will work for now.." he said placing it on another nearby table, He then started work on the portion the remainder of his leg would be placed "Damn...I'll need Chida to connect this or it'll fall off during battle" he said as he finished carving the peice to fit the shen and his stub. He slowly got out of bed and hobbled outside, he then picked up a crutch to aid him while walking "Where the hell is Chida" he said barely able to stand from another night of craving and adjusting.


slid himself back into his bed, he put his blanket over himself and sighed "I hope I can do this....Uni is so much better then me and its hard for him to create his jutsu.." he said pulling out a box full of tools he had bought while in town "I need to finish this leg and sand paper it so I can atleast train. Then when I finally master my Jutsu....it'll feel like I have a real leg...I won't actually have a real one...but it'll actually feel like it!" he said holding back tears. He pulled the two parts of the leg onto his lap, he then grabbed a carving knife and a large peice of wood "Time for the foot" he said as he started carving it out, he spent hours carving it not caring the size of the foot all he cared about was that he could keep his balance. He finished up the crudely made leg at around 9 o'clock he set it aside one a table and sighed "I think I can just about finish the joints by twelve.." he said. He pulled out two small wooden peices "I need to do this perfect...if i mess up it'll take me longer to create that Jutsu.." he said as he started one of the peices. He worked through the night making sure the two peices fit thier respected places "Almost...done" he said feeling fatiqued, he firmly placed the rounded joint into it's place on the foot which connected to the shen "Finally!" he said placing a joint at the top of the shen connecting it to the point where the remainder of his leg would go. "Now...its time for a real challenge..." he said pulling out a scroll from school of handseals "I'm going to atleast be able to use this Jutsu in battle in the next month or so.." he said putting the newly constructed leg by his bedside and the scroll on his night stand.


walked outside with his newly made leg "Its time to finish making that jutsu..." he said patting down his pants to make sure his fake leg wasn't noticible "Its crude and I need to sand the shit out of it..." he said walking down a dirt path towards the forest "Finally I can train at almost full potential at least". He neared the forest he grinned "I'll master this jutsu....I'll master it in a month" he thought to himself pulling out a small scroll, he sat down and started reading the scroll. He constantly read over every single handseal and its effects on one's chakra, he went over each and every handseal to see how it effected appearence and how it effected physical objects. He picked twenty different handseals to use "I think this'll be enough" he said as he practiced each of the seals in a specific order until he perfected them "now for the hard part.." he said getting up. He started concentrating heavily, he started circulating his chakra within his fake leg like he would for water walking "Fake flesh no Jutsu!" he yelled doing the twenty hand signs in succession. A thin layer of chakra formed over his fake leg, his chakra started to mold himself in the for of his missing left leg "Alright..." he said sweating heavily from the strain of the jutsu. He concentrated his chakra heavily within his leg, he then atempted to take a step "Arrrgh.." he groaned as he manipulated the fake leg to move "One small step for Tennen...a leap for Ninja everywhere.." he mumbled as the Jutsu's effects wore off.

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