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Kusuwake, Shiro; Special Jounin (Rapidz)
Topic Started: Apr 24 2010, 03:38 PM (484 Views)
Rapidz

In-game name: Kusuwake, Shiro
Aliases: The Blue Coated Traveler (BCT)
Key: Rapidz
Character Age: IC and OOC Age 23
Attitude: Average
Ninja Type: Ninjutsu Specialist, High tier Taijutsu(Clan techniques based off of Fuuinjutsu)
Current Character Rank: Special Jounin (B)
Current number of Jutsu: 9 (Not including the 5 basic jutsu)
Current Character Village: Konohagakure
Current Character Organization: None
Current Elements: Water & Earth
Time Spent over skip: Over the two years Shiro's time would be spent firstly learning to produce a fully powered Daibakufu. After this promotion may come his way and he would take up a new squad of Genin which would slow down his learning progress on his new jutsu, Doryuudan. After all this he would then move on to furthering his progress with elemental jutsu, trying to increase his mastery with the water element to new heights and start work on a new jutsu. Shiro's progress would also be held back slightly as he pitched in with the rebuilding of Konoha, although his earth style jutsu would speed up the process and give him some practice with his overall mastery of it at the same time. There was few things that he was aiming to do but they were all pretty big things. One was to become one of if not the greatest water style user ever. Another was to live up to everyone's expectations of him being a skilled Ninjutsu user and the last were those that he was striving to equal, if not better. The first was Seig, the young prodigy missing ninja. And the second was the Akatsuki leader himself, Nenshou. Although his water style was already at a high level he knew that if he was going to beat them, he would have to further himself in more than just one area so because of this he stopped his training with the water wall technique and moved on to more helpful and challenging jutsu that would aid in his fight to better the two elite shinobi...
Requested Rank: Jounin (A)
Requested Jutsu: Suiton: Daibakufu No Jutsu (A)(Full Development), Doton: Doryuudan (B)(Full Development), Suiton: Suijinheki (B)(75% Developed) & Any A ranked jutsu (25% Development)
RP Sample:
From the notes he had made and what he had seen over his years he knew that the technique was said to be an 'A' rank jutsu. It was an offensive ninjutsu, ranging from1-30 metres, so the distance was moderate. Reading this information Shiro would also remember back to the day he saw Izabelle with the man teaching the orange haired boy and remembered that the information that the notes provided matched what he saw when that same man yelled Great Waterfall Technique and the same when Dasuke showed him the technique. He continued to read on about the technique. He found that the technique was actually a technique that allows the user to make a spiralling vortex of water from the moisture in the air or from a large body of water. The vortex then proceeds to explode from the top in the form of a wave. The user can also control the direction the wave travels in.

The first thing that he decided to work on was the chakra control and chakra distribution that was required to produce the technique. Shiro went out to the forests that were about 30 minutes from Konoha’s gates. While he was there he went to the centre of a nearby large body of water. He placed his hands into the ram seal, the seal that was mostly known for focusing chakra. Shiro stayed completely still on top of the water as he began to concentrate his chakra immensely. He began to concentrate on what the chakra distribution section of the water vortex jutsu required to be produced correctly. Shiro spent hours on end, moulding his chakra to fit the requirements of the jutsu. But when he had hit his limit he would step off of the waters surface for a while to gather his chakra back before starting to train again.

After heading home for the day Shiro would return back to the exact same spot that he was at the day before. He quickly ran to the centre of the large quantity of water within the forest. He stood still and placed his hands in the ram seal. He began to generate his chakra and mould it into what he thought was needed for the jutsu. He began to inhale and exhale very slowly, until suddenly he took one deep breath in and held it. He released it extremely slowly, but continued to generate his chakra. He done this for the rest of the day, he wanted to get as familiar as possible with the chakra based side of the jutsu before moving on to the next step, especially as this jutsu had a high ninjutsu and chakra control requirement to perform properly.

Day by day Shiro was becoming more experienced with his chakra control and the distribution required getting the correct balance of spiritual and physical side of chakra. However Shiro wasn't quite there yet he still had a bit more work to do. Having this in mind, Shiro set out for the forest once again. He travelled for what was He reached his destination and immediately jumped onto the moderate mass of water and formed the ram seal, for what he wanted to be the final time. He began to concentrate his chakra, trying to get the perfect balance once again. Shiro imagined a diagram of his physical and spiritual chakra leaking from his body and mixing into the water below him in his head. As he done this, the water below him began to bubble, as if it was boiling over, but it was only bubbling in a straight line, about 10 metres wide and 5 metres ahead of him rather violently. It wasn't the end of the day, but the strain of working hard without the appropriate amount of rest was beginning to take its toll on Shiro fatigue levels and stamina. For this reason Shiro decided to turn in early and get, what he thought to be, some well earned rest.

After waking up the next morning Shiro sat down at his desk, the chair creaking slightly and Shiro making a slight grunting noise as he lowered himself down due to him still being stiff from the training. He looked down to the notes as he slowly drifted his eyes down towards the hand seals for the technique that he was striving to learn in a suitable and respectable time. An average look came onto his face, not being too phased by the amount of hand seals that was required to perform the jutsu, and already knowing about them from Dasuke teaching him, it was merely revision. The jutsu consisted of 18 hand seals that were printed on the notes. Those seals were…Tiger, Ox, Monkey, Rabbit, Ram, Boar, Ox, Horse, Monkey, Tiger, Dog, Tiger, Snake, Tiger, Ox, Monkey, Rabbit, and finally Bird. The amount wasn't too extensive but it was quite a lot to take in, especially as it was an A rank. Shiro stood up from the chair as he looked down to the book. He then formed the tiger seal as he began to mould his chakra to a lesser extent to when he trained out on the water. He would take in a slow breath and shortly after he exhaled as he said to himself "Alright, lets do this, I'm almost there I can feel it."

Shiro slowly rolled his legs over the side of the bed, moaning slightly. He then hoisted his body up so he was sitting upright. Letting out a huge yawn, he stretched upwards and outstretched his arms, bringing them outwards and then finally down back to his side. After this he moved his neck, from side to side, small clicks and pops being made from moving his stiff joints. Shiro then propped up out of bed and returned back to his desk once again. He read through the notes he made about the hand seals once more to refresh the seals to his memory.

Kusuwake, Shiro stood up, taking in a slow breath. He then exhaled as he said to himself "Alright, lets do this, I'm almost there I can feel it." Shiro then began to do the seals, but very slowly. He said to himself "Tiger, Ox, Monkey, Rabbit, Sheep, Bo---!" Suddenly, his hand slipped, he was trying to focus entirely on the chakra control, but he also had to focus on the hand seals. It was this reason for his failure this time round. Shiro continued to do this back and forth, sometimes getting closer to the end and some times messing up around the third seal. Shiro continued to do this for the next couple of hours, trying to master the needed concentration to use the slight chakra control and hand seals at the same time. This type of training had an awfully large impact on his fatigue, as he was still exhausting his chakra by using the hand seals and the hand seals affecting his chakra flow. Due to this fact, and the fact that he didn't want to over do his training, he turned in for the night.

Kusuwake, Shiro went outside to the edge of the village, on top of the mountains of Konoha. So that he could concentrate on the hand seals of Daibakufu that were taught to him briefly by Uchiha Dasuke, he decided to focus more on the hand seals than the chakra control and the merging of both skills resulting in the final jutsu being performed. Shiro slowly shut his eyes, breathing calmly as the hot dessert air blew through his hair and flailed his loose clothing. He would then say quietly, motioning his hands in time. "Tiger, Ox, Monkey, Rabbit, ram, Boar, Ox, Horse, Monkey, Tiger, Dog, Tiger, Serpent, Tiger, Ox, Monkey, Rabbit, Bird!" He had done all of the hand seals correctly, or so he thought. He had actually mixed up the tiger seal with the ram seal, even though he had said it correctly. But nevertheless, the determined ninja made a promise to himself that he would continue to train until he could form the seals in quick succession. He repeated the process many times throughout the day, each time becoming faster and more accurate. He was so close to achieving what he set out to grasp by the end of the day, but the heat was just too much for him to handle, and blisters were beginning to show up on his hands. Noticing this, he decided to stop and return to his house for rest. He put some healing ointment on his hands and then wrapped his hands up in a few bandages as he lay down to sleep.

It was now almost coming to the end of Udaras break from his other village duties. Having the fact that it would be an insult to him body and the village for not pushing himself to the max in mind, from the moment he awoke, he was up, fresh, dressed and back up on the mountain of sand within the hour. Once on top of the mountain, he inhaled slowly and then exhaled. After this he began to practice his hand seals once again. By now he could already produce the hand seals from memory, and at a moderate speed, the only thing left on his list that was related to his hand seal mastery with his new technique. Shiro quickly whipped his hands out to the side, outstretching his arms. He would then let out a small breath and shut his eyes. Then suddenly he performed the hand seals in perfect succession and with great speed; Tiger, Ox, Monkey, Rabbit, ram, Boar, Ox, Horse, Monkey, Tiger, Dog, Tiger, Serpent, Tiger, Ox, Monkey, Rabbit, Bird! His hands appeared to be a large flurry and blur. He continued to do this for the next 30 minutes before he decided to go home, knowing that he could now rather easily apply these hand seals in battle effectively.

Now that Shiro had completed his fluency training with the hand seals for the new jutsu, it was now time to incorporate his new achieved skills with his hand seals and his new found mastery with his chakra control over the water element. With this in mind, he eagerly set out for the forest. Shiro arrived at the forest, and the large body of water. He abruptly jumped up onto the water and landed without the water even sending out a single ripple. Next he then made the tiger seal as he began to force and mould his chakra, mixing in his spiritual energy with his physical energy at about 70%physical to 30%mental shared out. Once he had moulded his chakra successfully he went on to perform the hand seals.

He took in a small breath and shut his eyes, trying to remember the sequence of hand seals required for the jutsu. Shiro quickly snapped his eyes open as he done a quick flurry of hand seals in order and at an amazing speed saying the names of the hand seals to aid him in his memory for remembering the right ones. “Tiger, Ox, Monkey, Rabbit, Sheep, Boar, Ox, Horse, Monkey, Tiger, Dog, Tiger, Serpent, Tiger, Ox, Monkey, Rabbit, Bird!” After he finished the hand seals he said "Water style! Water Vortex Jutsu!" The water below him began to bubble and discombobulate. The water slowly began to rise up and begin to spin around in a large circle. It was only able to get to about 40% completion, the water dispersing as it began to fill in the centre of the circle before he lost concentration and the jutsu failed. Doing this jutsu for the first time took a lot out of him and he decided that he should rest up to 100% so he could get as much practice as possible in tomorrow.

Shiro, now back at 100%, decided to set out to the forest on the outskirts of the wind country. He began to breathe slowly as he started to walk over towards the large mass of water, a determined look in his eyes. He didn't waste anytime once he had placed himself on top of the large body of water, he immediately formed the tiger seal as he began to form, mix and mould his chakra. He began to infuse his spiritual and physical energies, to adjust what type of chakra would be produced. Shiro then took in a large slow breath as he quickly began to form the hand seals required in quick succession. The seals he performed were; Tiger, Ox, Monkey, Rabbit, Sheep, Boar, Ox, Horse, Monkey, Tiger, Dog, Tiger, Serpent, Tiger, Ox, Monkey, Rabbit, Bird. After this the water began to rise up just in front of him. The circle of water was almost complete, the circle was spinning incredibly fast and it was now totally filled with water, but he lost his concentration. The water immediately dispersed and dropped back down into the water. He let out a slight grunt from his frustration, but he quickly calmed his self and started the process again. After he repeated the attempt about 4 times he became totally fatigued and was almost forced to return to the village.

Shiro quickly jumped out of bed quickly setting off for the forest, it took him slightly longer due to his slight fatigue, but he was still motivated by the fact that he was almost able to complete the jutsu yesterday, he was confident that he would be able to produce the jutsu efficiently. Shiro slid onto the water with great fluidity as he quickly propped his body upright and went straight into the tiger seal to mould his chakra. Within a split second he had moulded his chakra and was ready to go onto the hand seals and he certainly didn't leave any time at all. He quickly said "Tiger, Ox, Monkey, Rabbit, Sheep, Boar, Ox, Horse, Monkey, Tiger, Dog, Tiger, Serpent, Tiger, Ox, Monkey, Rabbit, Bird!" As he said this he would do the hand seals accordingly. As he done so the water beneath him bubbled for a matter of seconds and then quickly snapped up and began to spin in a large circle, about 4 metres wide in front of him. Suddenly the water began to wave inside the sphere of water for a second or two, but then suddenly a large mass of water began to torrent from the centre of the circle, the torrential wave lasted about 5 seconds and went about 20 metres, the torrent of water being about 15 metres wide. It wasn't viewable due to his facemask, but he had a large smile on his face from the progress of his new jutsu over the last few weeks. With Shiro happy about his progress, he decided to take off the rest of the day to recuperate his already accumulated injuries.
Edited by Rapidz, Apr 25 2010, 10:50 AM.
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Meian, Shinzei

Shiro should totally get Jounin or Special Jounin , Nice app is well :)
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Rents
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He's already Special Jounin I thought, but meh.

-Vouches- I hope you get Jounin Rapidz

-Nack
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Kieechi

- Vouches- Simply he do to much.
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Kurapika
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-Vouches bcuz he 1337-
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Caritien

Very nice -vouches-

Hope you get what you want ^_^
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Exman33

o.o dat jizz is to long like an effin story
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