Welcome Guest [Log In] [Register]
We hope you enjoy your visit.


You're currently viewing our forum as a guest. This means you are limited to certain areas of the board and there are some features you can't use. If you join our community, you'll be able to access member-only sections, and use many member-only features such as customizing your profile, sending personal messages, and voting in polls. Registration is simple, fast, and completely free.


Join our community!


If you're already a member please log in to your account to access all of our features:

Username:   Password:
Add Reply
Cloud Cities - Intro and discussion
Topic Started: April 25, 2009, 10:38 pm (1,425 Views)
Emil Ichbin
Member Avatar

The short guide to writing posts in this rp:
Actions go between *s, in PRESENT TENSE.
You put the name of the character speaking in front of what they are saying. The name goes between <>s
You don't put the spoken text between quotation marks.
OOC (out of character) comments go between []s. Try and keep these to a minimum.

Like so:
*Jingleboy gets out of his house, and finds a hen on his car*
<Jingleboy> That's a mighty fine hen.
<Hen> Bok bok
*Jingleboy then uses a karate chop to stun the hen, and puts it in his bag to fry later.*
[Ha ha! See how he keeled that chicken? Class!]
Edited by Emil Ichbin, May 7, 2009, 8:08 pm.
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Emil Ichbin
Member Avatar

Sorry for doublepostan.
Say, Vangar, how does Van know about Morton having a gun? I thought he hid his pistol in his coat prior to meeting Van, so it should be impossible to know, unless he's assuming; Or if I missed something along the way.

Quotan:
Quote:
 
*Gun on the ready, he starts to walk through the corridors, looking for signs of life. He hears the sound of footsteps, so he ducks between some support beams, and watches as Kayli and Van drag themselves through the wreckage. He can't see them too well, but he can tell they're humans*
<Morton> Survivors, I see. It'd be good for now if I made contact... no reason for them to see this, though *with that, he hides his pistol in his coat, and walks out into the open*
<Morton> Hello? Who's there?
Edited by Emil Ichbin, May 19, 2009, 1:05 pm.
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Vangar
Member Avatar
Like a boss.
My mistake I'll fix the post.
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Emil Ichbin
Member Avatar

S'arright, thanks!
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Jingleboy
Member Avatar
I want it all.
Madole, with regards to this post: The humans and Mirions are at least 20 minutes away from the wreckage, as they escaped in the time it took to ship to explode (20 minutes). Thus, for Qanzlo to go back to the crash site, he'd need to have gone back quite far. Even then, the dawn engines just then had exploded, making the area a potential hazard, and Seeb wasn't blown THAT far.

Could you either edit your post, taking these segments into account, or delete related parts? Thanks in advance.
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Madole
Member Avatar
this will experence technical difficalties forever.
okay I edited the first post but I want to delete the other one so uhm..where the delete icon?
Edited by Madole, May 22, 2009, 11:34 pm.
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Squeaky the Zepa
Member Avatar
Can I help you with something?
It's next to the edit button, just click it for the appropriate post.

Well, unless Pixel disabled deleting posts, but I don't think she did. I can delete the second for you if you'd like though.
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Madole
Member Avatar
this will experence technical difficalties forever.
please do cause I don't seem to have it :(
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Squeaky the Zepa
Member Avatar
Can I help you with something?
Done, also deleted Emil's post immediately afterwards since it didn't have any RP content and was referring to a no longer existing post. Hope he doesn't mind, :awesome:
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Emil Ichbin
Member Avatar

'Tis coo
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Jingleboy
Member Avatar
I want it all.
Thanks, Madole. ;)
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Madole
Member Avatar
this will experence technical difficalties forever.
no problem
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
imortalservant
Member Avatar

MUST JOIN..... LOL
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
PixelMage
Member Avatar
★★★★★
Well, make a character bio and then once I've approved it, you can go on ahead!
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
imortalservant
Member Avatar

Yea im working on that... its kinda difficult i am trying to stay in touch with what you already have set up. and i just watched starwars so i just wanna make every character a Jedi and say screw it ha ha ha. But have no fear, i wont
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
1 user reading this topic (1 Guest and 0 Anonymous)
Go to Next Page
« Previous Topic · Roleplay Board · Next Topic »
Add Reply