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| turbotaxer | Aug 16 2008, 10:17 PM Post #1 |
The Mr. Saturn of Mercurious
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-Prologue- This is the story of the four destined ones who fought great evil and struggled through seemingly impassible obstacles to fight to save the universe and everything in it. This story begins with a young man struggling with school... |
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| turbotaxer | Aug 16 2008, 11:42 PM Post #2 |
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The Mr. Saturn of Mercurious
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-CHAPTER 1- The teacher was walking around, staring at the papers as the scraping of pencily furiously at work could be heard. Other than the pencils, the room was silent. In the room, one student had put down his pencil and stared nervously at a blank answer paper. For Tre, the midterm testing was the most terrifying experience that he ever went through in his life (not that he ever went through anything very terrifying). He just got so nervous that he forgot what he had learned in class. Tre just couldn't remember what the answers were, and if he did, he would be frozen with the fear of getting the qwestion wrong. He stayed like this until the end of the period, with a blank paper to turn in. Tre put his test in the incomplete pile, and miserably ambled off to the door until the teacher impeded his progress. "Where do you think you're gonig? That's the third straight day you have turned in an incomplete test! you should be ashamed of yourself! Even Jethro got more questions done than you! Come on! A hillbilly is doing better than you! You used to be such a good student... what a shame..." After being interrogated by his teacher, Tre went down the hall to go to the library to finish his test. Just as he rounded the corner he quickly skidded his bulky mass to a stop The sports jocks were in the middle of the hall, which was not good for Tre. They didn't like him and Tre always tried to avoid them in fear of getting into a fight, but this time they were at the only way out. Tre slowly walked by hoping that the jocks wouldn't notice him, and he walked right by with no problem. Just as he was at the door and feeling felieved, a sharp blow hit him in the back of the knees and sent him sliding on the ground. "Got ya, stupid!" exclaimed Spence, one of the jocks, who apparently led them. "I don't want anything to do with you! Just go away!" cried Tre, as he picked himself up off the floor. "Not gonna happen! Get him!" ordered Spence. "This is going to be worse than the midterm..." thought Tre as he got charged at. Edited by turbotaxer, Aug 17 2008, 12:59 PM.
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| Jonno | Aug 17 2008, 04:14 PM Post #3 |
 
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Lookin' good! That must've been a pain to go and add all of that on the Wii, tt. |
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| ZeldaFreakFan | Aug 20 2008, 03:35 PM Post #4 |
 
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He typed that up on the Wii? lmao, I just had an awesome idea! The "Wiiboard"! XD It's basically a keyboard that works with the Wii. Anyways, I like it so far! =) |
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| Zantok | Aug 20 2008, 03:45 PM Post #5 |
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Actually ZeldaFreakFan, I have found that if you plug in a USB-keyboard into the Wii, it will actually work! However, it only works on the Internet Channel. No where else. |
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| Jonno | Aug 20 2008, 05:41 PM Post #6 |
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Yeah... He basically only has the Wii for that stuff.  The "Wiiboard"... I have a feeling a third party is actually selling a USB like that that advertises 'WII COMPATIBLE' at the top. Don't know if its Opera Browser only though... |
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| turbotaxer | Aug 22 2008, 05:08 PM Post #7 |
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The Mr. Saturn of Mercurious
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Thanks Zantock! Maybe if I use a keyboard, I will be able to write out chapters in less than 5 hours!  (that is how long it actually took)
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| Jonno | Aug 22 2008, 05:15 PM Post #8 |
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Seriously? Gawd. |
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| Zantok | Aug 22 2008, 09:41 PM Post #9 |
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The Mainer of the Random Button
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5 hours?! Wow! I'm glad I could help you out man. I definitely wouldn't have the patience to type on the Wii for 5 hours. I'd give up after 5 minutes! |
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| turbotaxer | Sep 20 2008, 04:51 PM Post #10 |
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The Mr. Saturn of Mercurious
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-Chapter 2- Hidden in the oceans, beyond the high mountain peaks, through the dense fog, there lay a peaceful valley island, secluded and empty. From the high, shielded edges, to the bright, colorful meadows in the valley that blow in unison to the gentle ocean breeze, there is no life and all remains uniform. Only a lifeless body in a sitting position ruins the stillness. Right then, as if reacting to an emergency, the eyes spring wide open and it starts breathing the sweet air of the island, acting asif waking up from a permanent hibernation. Now, the unifoformity of the island disappears. The wind starts thrashing the flowers of the meadows. The serene quiet transforms to rolling thunder as thunder clouds start invading the peaceful sky. Then, as if appalled by the disorder, the body springs up to life. This creature is a human, but slightly different than the rest. It... he has been transformed by tragic events, made stronger mentally by being beaten and abused by cruel fate. As the island was falling in to chaos before him, he knew. "It is time for us to fulfill our duties now," thought David. As he takes one last look at his peaceful valley, torn apart by disorder, he starts running for the edge of the island. Freeing his last happy memory from his mind, he gets ready, sprints, and jumps off the island, crumbling behind him. |
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