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Hi, Cicada Nights,

I'll be critiquing Paris today. He is temporarily denied pending edits.

You still make mention to Paris living in Seattle at a few points in the profile. Can you correct these for me?

Make sure each paragraph has line breaks, please.

Make these edits and I'll see you on the second pass.
Brandon Baxter is holding it all together. -- Keep it secret, keep it safe.
Kasumi White is writing her story. -- She could do this.

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