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| Sneezier | Dec 13 2008, 07:27 PM Post #1 |
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Luigi Approves!
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No....this is not the Metal Wars Climax I often mention all over the place. These are collections of stories that are written by anyone besides Sub and me. About the Metal Wars: This galactic conflict is one of the most devastating and deadliest conflict in the history of the universe. There are more than two sides, an alliance between the YB, SWDF, Galactic Federation and other nations, the feared Metal Army, Orks, Vozhon, Necrons, X-Naut, Space Pirates, and others. The Metal Army ultimate goal is roboticize and anihilate the universe's organic and floral populations via committing numerous attrocities in the name of machine superiority. Billions were killed and millions were roboticized by the Metal Army alone thanks to their deadly weapons and dreaded roboticizer camps. Table of contents (and list of stories) -A Snifit's Vendetta: Part 1 -A Snifit's Vendetta: Part 2 -First Contact Part 1: The Lost Moon Filler story: Zaku Zaku Hour -Episode 1: The Iron Legion -Episode 2: Interview of a Rock Star Edited by Sneezier, Jan 25 2009, 01:05 PM.
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| Sneezier | Dec 20 2008, 09:03 PM Post #2 |
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Luigi Approves!
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A Snifit's Vendetta: Part 1 Lt. Karnorne "Lead Mask" Shotlight October 14, 2008 Crenovgrad, Sovtania, Rustonia System (Mid Rim) 4th Shock Army (SWDF) As the Snifit's eye open bechind his worn out mask, he saw bodies of his late comrades and dead Galactic Federation Troopers. Four eyed Kyroniks ("alien crows" in Sovtanian) peck on his exposed robe on his armor until it takes flight. He's in a dried up fountain that is now the Metal Army's dumping grounds during the city's massacre. A futuristic city lies in ruins with swarms of Messala and Babi fighters flying over the bombed-out city. A few Gouf Rangers in Copper Legion colors are standing near the fountain with a GAZuOOT in Tank Mode rolling by. One of the Goufs walked over the fountain and shoot the surviving soldiers that struggled to move with his wrist machine gun. fortunatly for the young Snifit, he was spared from being shot in the mask as the said Gouf flies out of the fountain. Karnorne regains a bit of his strength as he get on his belly and crawl forward then he cough out his round bullets. One of the corpses moved, a GF Trooper with a cracked visor, a bleeding right hand, and a nova beam sniper rifle, and put his left index finger on the lower part of the visor. GF Trooper: *In a Russian accent* Shhh..... I need your help. This trooper is Sergeant Venin Cheznov, a veteran sniper. He then crawls on his belly too, he gestures the leutenient to follow him. Karnorne decides to follow his surviving ally because this is the only chance to avenge his comrades. Sgt. Cheznov: Do what I say, and we can avenge this massacre. They stopped so they can see a few Metal Army troops patroling the street in front of them. A few Dom Brutes with large Mega Fists, Gouf Rangers chatting about something, and Zaku Troopers at a corner playing chrome DS Lites while of them is drinking Gasoline Gin, a robot's prized drink. The sarge then rest, sitting behind the fountain's bear scupture. He gave the sniper rifle to the snifit. Shotlight attach his rifle to his mask's snout so doesn't he have to use his hands. Sgt. Cheznov: Take my rifle and watch the street. As he said that statment. They both peered at an oncoming roofless staff car, the Qubeley Guard as the driver and a Gelgoog General as the only passenger. The staff car stopped at a corner and they both got out. The nearby Zaku Trooper saluted at their superior. The snifit wanted to send a nova bolt into the general's smug but he realised that his rifle contains no energy for ammo. Sgt. Cheznov: That pig nosed cyber cyclops is General Gelnog, architect of Crenovgrad's misery. He is responsible for the murder and roboticization of men, women, and children alike. Not just this city but throughout the motherworld. For three days, I have hunted him. For three days, luck has sheltered his dammed life. Sniping is like hunting any other animal. Fire at the wrong moment and your chance will be lost. Shotlight was getting impatient because the general is entering of what's left of an office building. He muttered a swear because he lost the opportunity to kill the wretched machine for his attrocities. The sarge shooked his head because Shotlight was impatient. Sgt. Cheznov: Patience my friend. If we shoot now, the robots will kill us instantly and our fountain will be our grave. The Sovtanian Trooper gave Shotlight all of his magazine clips for the sniper rifle. Shotlight then load one into the rifle. Sgt. Cheznov: Hold your fire. Wait until the fighters fly overhead, their engines with drown out your shots. Just then the Babi Fighters flew overhead just like the Sovtania GF Trooper said, the engines sound like mechanical shreiking banshees which make Lt. Karnorne a little frightened. Sgt. Cheznov: Shoot!! The Snifit then use the sniper rifle to pick of the robotic troops. The Doms falls down dead, same for the Goufs, the Zakus exploded because one of them drank gasoline gin. Just then, a Dalek decended in the middle of the intersection with a robotic dog named a BuCUE with it. Karnorne panicked a little but he managed to snipe them with the remaining energy. The snifit took off the rifle from his mask, he felt a little satisfied. Those soulless machine deserved to be killed and have their rusty corpses be dismantled. The sarge then pull out his regular standard issue carbine onto his left hand. Sgt. Cheznov: Excellent aim, comrade. Your a natural hunter. Now, we must close for the kill. Both of them jumped out of the fountain and hide behind the staff car. A GAZuOOT in walking mode moves along with Gelgoog Elites and Goufs with flamethrower snouts. Sgt. Cheznov: Damn, we have to take a detour, follow me so we don't get spotted by the armoured patrol. The two soldiers dashed to a nearby bar and leaped inside through a broken window. Some of the chairs are on fire while the others are just simply broken. The Sovtania sarge explained about his hometown's bar. Sgt. Cheznov: This place once filled with happy conversations of friends and lovers. Thanks to those mechanical monsters, it's no longer a happy place. Mark my words, Comrade...One day, things will change for the better of us. We will take the fight to their planet, to their people....to their blood. To be Continued Edited by Sneezier, Dec 24 2008, 12:30 PM.
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| Subsourian | Dec 20 2008, 10:44 PM Post #3 |
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Blander
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That story has Sub's seal of approval. I'll make one soon, probably sometime during the week. I'm ahead of schedule on my other story, so I guess writing on another topic would do me good. |
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| Sneezier | Dec 23 2008, 09:02 PM Post #4 |
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Luigi Approves!
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A Snifit's Vendetta: Part 2 As the two soldiers sneak around the urban streets of the once mighty Crenovgrad, Cheznov explain about sniping tactics and comparing it to hunting. The Snifit wished that he has some earplugs, this guy won't shut up yet his lectures might be important. Cheznov: The robots' programming are not very different to an animals instincts so a sniper must take advantage of the prey's habits and instincts. Just then, a sniper round whizzed toward the duo, it grazed the sarge's right shoulder which only causes a small cut. Cheznov clutched it in pain. Cheznov: Auuugh, sniper! We have to find cover! They leaped into a window of a war-torn apartment which smelled like burning sulfer for some reason. Cheznov: That mechanical bastard almost got us, we have to take out that sniper or our skulls will be filled with lead. This is now a sniping duel, winner lives, loser dies. Shotlight nodded, he knew that snipers are deadly for any opposition no matter what. The veteran GF Trooper and the novice SWDF soldier moved to the second floor, the half floor was blown away by Dom Brute Bazookas and miniguns. Cheznov: The shot came from the building with the Metal Army banner, get ready to take him out. He fired a few shots from the window to the other building so the opposing sniper can shoot where the sarge is at. The snifit is ready to pick off the enemy. He notice a glint from a scope. He fired a single shot, the beam pierce through the monoeye sensor, the enemy sniper falls down dead. The snifit took off the rifle from his mask. Cheznov: Ha ha ha, good hunting comrade. I'm sure the patrols heard those shots so we better get outta here. The duo run down back where they came from, they can hear clanking footsteps, whirrs of hydralic joints, grinding treads of a GAZuOOT, and tires rolling. A patrol platoon is surrounding the apartment. The Trooper and the snifit hide near a window, hoping that won't get caught. The BuCUE watch dogs outside is picking up their scent, the Ultra Dalek skim along the stained metal sidewalk toward the window. Shotlight felt that the cold hands of fear clutching his body. The Ultra Dalek, covered in layers of energy sheilding and silver copper markings, became more suspicious. Just then, the sirens blared while the twin lights on the Dalek's head flashed like crazy. Ultra Dalek: LIFE FORMS DETECTED! COMMENCE MAXIMUM EXTERMINATION! Cheznov: Chyort, that overgrown pepper shaker found us, hit the chrome! Both of them dive toward the chrome floor. Flame Goufs spit out huge streams of fire through the windows. They crawl underneath the flames. A book case caught on fire and fell on the duo but the wall prevent it from crushing them. They got up from the burning furniture and tackled a nearby stairway. The apartment is collapsing around them by the fire, lasers, and spiker rounds. They manage to reach a large window, the snifit jumped out of the building first then the sarge. Shotlight landed on his face which cracked his right mask lens and injured him. An explosion behind the sarge sent him flying and crashed into a wall. A Major Dalek and an Ultra Gelgoog Elite followed by a Flame Gouf ran to the group. The Gelgoog kicked the GF carbine out of Cheznov's hand and use the same foot to rub it on the sarge's visor. The Dalek looked at Shotlight to make he won't do any sudden moves. The Flame Gouf spit out flames at the air to make sure it's working properly. Major Dalek: YOU TWO ARE EMTERMINATED BY FIRE! Shotlight felt that this is the the end for him and his partner, not only he lost the chance to assassinate the Gelgoog General, he won't be able to see his sick sister at Lunatropolis at the Star World's moon. Just then, blue plasma shots tear though the robots, the sheilding won't handle barrage and all of them drop dead. Many GF Troopers and SWDF soldiers help the two to get up on their feet. One of them is a Hammer Bro dressed in Commisar armor. The SWDF troops have mass produced arm-blasters, new standard issue weapons that replaced the obsolete and unrealiable lasguns. Commisar Bro (Sten): *Light british accent* Is that you Lt. Shotlight, I thought you are part of the dead at central square execution. Sgt. Cheznov: We was among them but not one of them. A magikoopa used his healing spell to cure all injuries and refresh their bodies. Although their bodies are relieved, their armor is not. The sarge looks at his right hand, it's no longer bleeding. Sgt. Cheznov: Ahhh, I felt so alive. Someone give me a sniper rifle. A GF Trooper gave Cheznov a nova beam sniper rifle along with spare magazine clips. The sarge then put away his carbine back into his holster. Sgt. Cheznov: I thought I won't be able to snipe again but fate must have been kind to us. Commisar Sten: We're about to assault the communication post east of here. Sgt. Cheznov: Good, such a move that will prevent the machines from calling for help. Shotlight and I will provide sniper support from above. Wait 'til you hear the sounds of dying robots. Commisar Sten: This way troops, we will take our positions and strike when either sniper fire the first shot. The sniper duo climb up the broken escalator up to the walkway. They stopped near a monorail station near a wrecked bullet train. The duo take their positions. A platoon of Metal troops is guarding the the post, many Zaku Troopers, Daleks, and Gelgoogs along with a few Goufs are guarding the entrance. Cheznov: Hold your fire. Do you see those red Goufs with large fuel tanks? You must choose your moment of pulling the trigger, shooting at it cause the tank to explode and take out nearby soldiers. Shotlight saw the Flame Gouf standing near a squad of Gelgoog Elites, the bane of GF Troopers and SWDF soldiers. He fired a nova beam at the the Flame Gouf's tank. The said robot exploded, three of them are obliterated while two of them are sent flying. Minor Gelgoog Elite: What the hell did that come fr-*Is shot by a plasma bolt* The firefight started while a volley of plasma fire caught the platoon by suprise. Dalek: SUPRISE ATTACK! SUPRISE ATTACK! PROTECT THE COMMUNICATIONS POST AT ALL COSTS! Cheznov: Ha ha ha. Excellent shot Shotlight. Provide sniper cover for our comrades below. The joint forces of SWDF and GF are shooting down the defenders. A Bob-ulk jumped off a rooftop and landed on a large group of Daleks and exploded, causing alot of damage to the Metal side. A few Dom Brutes came out of the post, two of them shout out the dreaded word that causes everyone to shudder, "banzai". The Banzai Doms charges with drill lances and beam sabers. Cheznov managed to take one down by shooting it at the monoeye. Cheznov: Chyort, Banzai Doms, don't let them kill our comrades! Both of them shoot down the suicidal Doms from stabbing their fellow troops in the gut. The joint strike force enter the communications post. The snipers can hear death cries of robot and explosion from inside the post. Cheznov: Our comrades are in the building so they don't need our support. It's time to close in for the kill! The pair ran to the nothern side of the post, they are at a good sniping position, a position where they can assassinate the Gelgoog General. Cheznov: Hold your fire, we are too close to reveal our position. There is nothing we can do for our comrades. Their sacrifice will not go in vain. The death of General Gelnog will be just the beginning. *Points at the communications post* Look ahead, the building adorned with holoflags. Gelnog will soon be in our sights. The sounds of battle will flush him out. A few robots came out of the building, one of them is the general himself, the other is a Qubeley Guard, and the others are Daleks with sniper gunsticks. The Qubeley Guard tell him to stay behind a pile of metal crates. Cheznov: Chyort, he's not alone, put a nova bolt into his bodyguard's head. I'll deal with those pepper-shakers. The snipers took out the bodyguard and the Daleks that were protecting the cowardly general. They waited for him until he was on the move. Shotlight fired another nova bolt at the Gelgoog's head. The head fractured by the beam, sending microchips, pieces of AI, and sensors all over the place. The body tripped and fell, the vengence is satisfied. Cheznov: Yes, you are a true marksman, Shot-*Is interrupt by an explosion* The blast almost sends the snipers flying out of the walkway. Even though they have suceeded, they must escape from the enemy. Cheznov: They are coming for we must go. They dashed on the walkway, running from angry robots. Gouf Rangers fly up over the walkway, trying to take down the snipers but Cheznov shot down the Goufs. They approach the river. Cheznov: Into the river, Shotlight, it is our only chance. They dive into the river. The water felt cold, cold as a snowman's touch. The liberation of the Federation mid rim world, Sovtania, was a huge sucess when Crenovgrad was freed from occupation and SWDF and Federal reinforcements arrive at the planet. Unfortunatly for the Copper Legion, they lost half their forces on the planet. As for Lt. Shotlight and Sgt. Cheznov, they survived the whole ordeal and lived to fight another day. This will be the turning point of the Metal Wars. End Transmission Edited by Sneezier, Jan 3 2009, 01:32 AM.
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| Subsourian | Dec 23 2008, 09:29 PM Post #5 |
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Blander
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Yay! Happy planetary liberation! That actually fits in with my idea of a "turning point," a blitz of troops by the Federation. I'll get on a part soon. As soon as I finish this next chapter of my current story. And come up with a story idea.
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Topmonhit
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Dec 23 2008, 09:29 PM Post #6 |
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The type of format is weird. At least, I think so. Well, not weird, but how do you tell when it goes from talking to descriptionorzing? I mean, if you bold it... blah blah blah I'm 86 parts ahead of schedule, Sub. What about you? |
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| Sneezier | Dec 23 2008, 09:36 PM Post #7 |
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Luigi Approves!
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It's my own writing style, combining the standard format with script format. |
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| Subsourian | Dec 23 2008, 09:47 PM Post #8 |
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Blander
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Just one chapter ahead. ![]() I actually like the format. I prefer typing it in novel format, though. It just gives me more control over the tone and mood of how they speak. |
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| Warlyte | Dec 24 2008, 02:48 PM Post #9 |
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Capsule J2
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I'm like a month behind. But it's possible that 9000 will still get finished... just not by Christmas. And the format seems sort of messy to me, really. |
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Topmonhit
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Dec 24 2008, 04:19 PM Post #10 |
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That's just Sneezier's grammar. ;o |
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