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PokeBound; And how!
Topic Started: Dec 13 2008, 02:55 PM (208 Views)
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(I'm having an issue with finding the music I need on youtube, and I guess it's easier if I used youtube for it, so for now the parts won't have musics)

I need some practice writing, and I didn't want to see the idea die already, and I have some awesome stuff planned out for it, so I decided to write Pokebound. Which was Super's and BK's idea. Now you know why it never happened.

What was their idea? To make an EB (Well, moreso Mother 3) and Pokemon crossover fanfic-with-pictures. I think BK recently made up a snazzy nickname for it, but I forgot what it was. After the first day of seriously talking about it on YIM, the two of them kind of stopped thinking about it. But they made this big deal about it on the first day and made a couple preview pictures in the spam board on TTD. Ever since then, I've bothered them about whether or not they were making it. Eventually I just asked them about everything they had planned out and began to work on it by myself.

The actual story starts in the world of Mother 3, where Porky is freed from his eternal prison by the forces of the legendary Pokemon. Eventually, this one stroke of luck for him turns into a huge amount of power over both worlds. Thus begins the adventure of a few heroes from the two worlds to stop Porky's tyrannous power once and for all. ... Again.

Hey that actually sounded kind of cool

Umm I don't really edit these parts after I've written them, just to keep myself from obsessing over making it perfect. So if it's a little awkward sometimes... just say so.

ONE LAST THING I expect no one's going to reply or anything until I've made it apparent that I'm continuing this, as that's how it always is wherever I go, so I'm not really going to pester you to comment or read everything like Top.

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Part 1



After everything was said and done, Porky was still trapped inside the Absolutely Safe Capsule. Some info for those who don't know: The Absolutely Safe Capsule is, well, absolutely safe. It can't be penetrated. Of course, the person inside is absolutely safe, but everyone on the other side is also safe, as it cannot be opened AT ALL after someone's in. So Porky, as evil as he is, was unfortunately stuck in there for the rest of his apparently eternal life.

Obviously he was going a little bit insane by this point:

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Porky: First Ness, now Lucas. It always... *Wheeze* *Cough* happens when I'm taunting them. It was worth it, though. Even though I'm stuck here forever, at least I'll live forever and they won't! HA! Hahahaha! Hahaha!

Porky's laughing was interrupted by some strange, rending sound being made from somewhere.

Porky: ... What's that noise?

No answer. ... Until all of a sudden, some kind of hole was appearing in the ASC. ... Sort of.

Before Porky could think aloud about what was going on, a very large and pinkish monster roared at him furiously. As it charged up some sort of beam attack, it was blasted back by something else that was quite powerful. Porky would normally be frightened by this, but he was already stuck in an impervious ball, so he had nothing to lose.

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He looked through the whole and saw a whole new, funky dimension. He couldn't help but think of Giygas when he saw it. He looked to the right and saw the pinkish monster fighting off a blueish monster, and doing about as well as the blue one did. To his left, a strange human-like creature was running up to him and pulled him out quickly, not regarding Porky's old age as much of a problem.

Lucario: Stay back. In fact, get away as soon as possible.

Over where the two monsters were fighting, there was an explosion.

Lucario: That means now!

Lucario shoved Porky away toward some stairs that Porky just noticed were there. He ran down, strangely not that bad considering his physical age, only far enough so that Lucario couldn't see him.

Porky: Hahaha. ...I wonder if, maybe...

Lucario was busy trying to get the two to stop fighting, which wasn't working very well at all.

Lucario: You guys! No... seriously! Cut it out! This happened in a movie already, you know!

Porky tried to call out to Lucario to tell him, "Watch out!", but he was hit from behind with the pinkish monster's tail, knocking him back almost to where Porky was.

Lucario: Why did Dialga and Palkia have to be the ones that get angry all the time? The masters of time and space are really almost... childish.

Lucario ran back to where the action was. Porky's ears figuratively perked up as Lucario was talking.

Porky: Masters of time and space, eh? Why, that sounds most... *Cough* *Wheeze* *Wheeze* interesting! Lessee...

Porky got up and slowly went over to Lucario, who was being pushed back from a blast close to the area that the rip in space was at.

Porky: Hello, there. What's your name?

Lucario: I'm a little busy here, you know. Urk...

Porky: "A little busy here you know"? Hahaha... I hope that's your name, 'cause otherwise that's no way to treat someone as important as me. Should I just call you "pig's butt" for short?

Lucario: Just what are you talking about?

Porky: A little busy here you know, I don't think it's going to matter. You said these two monsters were the masters of time and space?

Lucario: Uh... Yes?

Porky: Well, I like to be the one to get important things like this first. Enjoy your time in... *Wheeze* *Cough* *Wheeze* the Absolutely Safe Capsule!

Porky quickly shoved Lucario into the rip in space, which he had been noticing was shrinking in size. He heard Lucario yelling something, but he was too full of laughter to notice or care.

Porky: Hahahaa! Spankety, spankety!

He turned around to face the two monsters, who were still fighting in a generic fashion. They didn't really seem to notice the lack of Lucario, either.

Porky: ... Now then. You two will listen to me, understand? ... I have the power and backing of Giygas with me. I don't think you'd... *Cough* *Wheeze* like to deal with that, would you!

Strangely enough, they stopped. They seemed curious as to what Porky was going on about.

Porky: Good. I'll need a bit of help with the place I'm in, so-

Dialga suddenly roared at Porky, and flew away like a magical pony. Woooo

Porky: ... Okay. You seem to be listening, so I guess you're staying. Which one are you? Space? ... *Wheeze* *Cough* *Cough* I definitely remember you being the one that sort of freed me from the Absolutely Safe Capsule, so you must be the space one!

Palkia's expression didn't change. It almost seemed as if it were under some kind of control. (... What?)

Porky: That blue thing... It said something about Dialga and Palkia. I guess you're Palkia, 'cause you're pink, but I don't think that's going to fly around here. I'll call you...

CHAPTER 1: Unfamiliar Territory (no that's not Palkia's name)

Lucario took a good look at his surroundings, paying attention to any detail he could possibly notice. He was... in some kind of capsule.

Lucario: Well, this is just great. I should have seen that coming! ... I pretty much just ruined the fate of the universe with that one. Not only that, but I don't even know where I am because of this stupid thing I'm in.

He started hitting the wall as hard as he could, to break it and/or because he was mad at himself. After a few senseless beatings against the wall, the aching pains told him he wasn't getting through it anytime soon. He grumbled about his situation some more (the repetition is probably getting annoying by now) and turned around toward the side he came from.

Lucario: What's this? Spacial Rend?

He noticed a kind of wavy part to the wall, an indefinite state of matter or something. It didn't seem like anything natural, not even in this world that he just got onto. And he didn't even see anything yet, besides the capsule thing. He concluded it had to have been that tear from before, when Dialga and Palkia were having it out in battle and Porky got roared at.

Lucario: Interesting. Perhaps I could just...

Lucario tried touching the affected area a bit to test it, and it seemed fine. He took a step back, crouched a little, and leaped right through the wall, landing ungracefully on some regular ol' grass. He stood up and dusted himself off.

Lucario: Whew. It worked... although, perhaps it shouldn't have, for my sake...

He took another, actual look at his surroundings. Mostly, it was a lot of grass and a worn dirt path or two. Then there was what looked like a village over to his left, with houses and such. It didn't seem terribly frightening or futuristic, so he figured the inhabitants of the planet were tolerable and maybe even friendly. To his right was a cliff with a path up it, and some more boring, green grass. Other than that, he could see a river and an arced wooden bridge to cross it with, leading him to believe the inhabitants were also very civilized. And quaint.

Lucario: Can't be too careful, now... I'll keep my distance for a bit.

He turned away from the village and carefully searched the area, to keep himself occupied until he had a plan.

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That's pretty much where Lucario's going to stop being the only one being focused on, if you're wondering.
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AMAZING JOB, UNFAMILIAR TERRITORY!

But anyway dang I thought Lucario was trapped forever. :[
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sorry man

IF ANYONE'S PAYING ATTENTION TO THIS, HERE IS THE NEXT PART I AM POSTING

RIGHT NOW

BECAUSE I'VE ALREADY RUINED MY CHANCE TO MAKE A TABLE OF CONTENTS

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Inside his house up on the hill, Wess was panicking about the loud rending noise from a few minutes back. He was getting all the Thief Tools ready just in case.

Wess: Duster! Get over here, you moron!

A guy with a limp that kind of smelled bad and looked like a bum came running over obediently as quickly as he could.

Wess: Didn't you hear that noise? We have to stop anything from harming our village again! Hurry up and take a look out there!

With a sigh, Duster ran to the door and looked outside. Seeing nothing out of the ordinary, he walked at a brisk pace down the hill, in case his dad was looking. Another quick look around...

Duster: Nothing here, either. What could have happened?...

For a second he thought he heard something in Matt's yard a little to the south of him, but he dismissed it.

Duster: Probably just a squirrel... or something. ... I wonder if it was Porky.

Duster took a peek through the window on the ASC. His heart skipped a beat when he noticed Porky wasn't there. He was about to bolt for his house when he noticed some wavy part of the ASC. He was considering taking a good look at it. ... Then he bolted. He figuratively flew up the hill, through the door, and to the basement where Wess was still waiting.

Duster: You won't believe it! P-P-Porky's... gone!

Wess: How did he get out of there?!

Duster: I don't know, I ran straight back here to tell you!

Wess: You didn't look for him?...

Duster: Well... Uh... No.

Wess seemed... a little upset. Frustration was written all over his face, but he tried not to explode from it.

Wess: Argh... We don't even know where he is, or how he got OUT of there, and you're concerned with making sure I know that he's gone? Now I'm going to have to make up for your stupid mistakes...

Duster: Uh... There was another thing that I noticed. On part of the capsule, it was sort of... wavy-ish. Ooooo.

Wess: Oh. ... Hm. Maybe it's not too late to find Porky and stop him from causing trouble again. Lead me there, now!

Duster felt a little crappy inside from the verbal abuse, but went out the door with his father anyway. After going down the hill and up to the capsule, Duster looked around the whole thing to find that wavy part he had seen earlier. He remembered he was looking through the window when he saw it, so he walked behind it, and...

Duster: Here it is. Is there anything we can do with it...?

He tried touching the affected area, but his hand went right through. He jumped and quickly pulled his hand back. Wess... slapped him in the back of the head.

Wess: Luckily for you, this dimensional rip seems to already be closed. It looks like it's still sort of there, but there's actually a large tear in the ASC. Don't do it again.

Duster: I wonder what could have done that... Maybe we should stay away.

Wess: ... If we did that, Porky would definitely get away.

Duster: Well, yeah, but something that could break something that's supposed to be absolutely safe must be stronger than anything we've ever seen...

Wess: Trust me, if Lucas, Kumatora and Boney can turn the tables on Porky's reign, then we can handle a little exploring into the unknown.

Duster: So... How are we supposed to get in?

Wess: I thought I explained it enough before, but... Back up and don't look. This is embarassing.

Duster backed up and looked the other way, and eventually when his subconscious recovered his memories from long ago, Wess was already doing this.

Wess: ... Okay, well, let's go. Don't go forgetting what I told you... again.

Duster's expression showed he was a little troubled as his father climbed carefully into the hole. His thoughts raced through his head for a few seconds; paranoid thoughts, worried thoughts, and maybe even disappointed thoughts about what his father was saying. But, not to keep him waiting, Duster pressed on and hopped in the hole.

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Duster landed on some invisible floor in a funky dimension, and felt a little disoriented from the illusionary background. Wess shook him by the shoulder and snapped him out of it.

Duster: Whew... Thanks.

Wess only looked straight towards something, waiting for Duster to look too.

Duster: What? What's over there...?

Duster looked in that direction, and saw a large pinkish monster staring at them. Next to it was Porky, smirking confidently.

Duster: P-Porky!

Porky: That's right! I hope you... *cough* *wheeze* *wheeze* weren't expecting me to stay put for eternity! As fate would have it, losers like you are on the receiving end of Murphy's law.

Duster: You knew something like this would happen?

Porky: Duh. Of course I did. By the way... have you met my friend, here? It freed me using its own raw power. All by itself. You know what they say... *cough* anything's possible!

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Duster: Uh... Actually, I don't.

Wess walked off a bit as they were talking, closer to the hole he and Duster had recently danced through. Porky turned to Wess when he got close enough.

Porky: Anyway, I hope you aren't planning on going back to Tazmily to warn everyone. You might be a bit... *wheeze* *cough* disappointed.

Wess: And that means?

Duster: The hole's right there, anyway. We haven't forgotten where it is.

Porky: It means you aren't going to Tazmily.

Duster: Oh.

Wess: ...

Porky: Not even going to put up a fight, are ya? *cough* ... Oh well. Later, potater. ...s.

As if on cue, the pinkish monster raised its claw for a moment. It started to glow pink before striking both Wess and Duster with staggering force, sending them into another dimensional rip to who-knows-where.

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Wooooo I take forever

Okay, I lied. Lucario's going to be the focus again in the next part. ... It's not going to go well for him.
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nooo lucario

Anyway this is great so far. I like the writing style, it's less thinking than novel-type and prettier than script. I should go play some Motherbound games so I can understand stuff though. :[
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The format is still weird.

I thought the description was saying "Wess" at first.

grumble grumble
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Dec 24 2008, 04:28 PM
The format is still weird.

I thought the description was saying "Wess" at first.

grumble grumble
It's like that for me when I'm writing it. :o

Anyway when I do the next part I'll bold the names when it's someone talking and see how that goes
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I'm glad I posted that as a note to myself. :o

Anyway, after several weeks, I say to you, "ta-da!"

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Lucario: Huh? That was weird.

Lucario stood up after spending the last few minutes just sneaking around someone's yard, hoping to avoid suspicion. Although he hadn't seen anyone the whole time he was there.

Lucario: I bet if anyone heard me, they'd mistake me for... a Pachirisu or something. Perhaps that's a good thing...? I don't know.

He was going to take a minute or two to ponder the possibilities, but he suddenly shook his head to snap out of it.

Lucario: I could've sworn I heard someone near that... thing I was in at first. ... Arceus, I should've looked when I had the chance.

Lucario reluctantly started off toward the area by the capsule again and took a quick look around, just to be sure. Still no one around. Strange.

He then had an impulsive thought. He walked slowly, carefully across the bridge and into the main part of town. For some reason, he started feeling better, and adventurous.

Lucario: Hey, you know, this feels kind of nice. I can probably get back to Dialga and Palkia without any problems.

Starting to speed up a bit, with a little hop in his step, he ran around the town to find what creatures lived there in the first place. He was still a little too nervous to just go and open the doors, but running along the paved ground and the green grass was nice anyway.

From the north of town, unbeknownst to Lucario, there were a few people getting frantic over seeing a new monsterous creature running around Tazmily, as if it was looking for something. It reminded them of the past, which was something they were not about to relive.

Abbot, Abbey, and Ollie were discussing about how they should go about getting rid of the beast.

Abbot: You know, it has huge spikes on its arms. We can't risk getting too close...

Abbey: But we have to get it out of here somehow... and Lucas isn't here, nor Flint.

Ollie: We could really use them right about now. Either way, we have to get it out of here before it sees someone...

???????: What's going on?

From Cross Road came Lighter, carrying his signature large lumber over his shoulder. With him was his son, Fuel.

Fuel: We were just getting some stuff we left at Jackie's.

Abbot: Lighter! Thanks goodness you're here! There's a possibly... very big problem here.

Lighter: What is it?

Ollie: Out of nowhere, some creepy blue human-like thing ran in here from over the bridge. We don't-

Abbey: Actually, it was sort of dog-like.

Ollie: It was kind of both. Like a chimera, I guess...

Lighter: A what!?...

Abbot: We don't know if it is one or not, but we're afraid it's going to start opening doors soon. Obviously, we can't really fight it off or anything...

Abbey: ...And Flint and Lucas aren't here. Would you please get rid of it before it causes more trouble, Lighter?

Lighter nodded to Fuel and smiled a bit.

Lighter: Of course. Anything I should watch out for?

Ollie: It has spikes on its arms and chest, but that's about it. Go teach it a lesson!

The other four, including Fuel, stayed back and cheered Lighter on as he walked into the middle of town. After a minute or so, though, the townsfolk were getting impatient at Lighter's tactics. He... wasn't moving.

Instead of giving chase, Lighter simply stood there to wait for the beast. Fuel whispered from afar, but to no avail. Lighter continued to wait and anticipate, smiling at his friends' impatience.

This tactic seemed to work; Lucario didn't notice for a bit, but when he saw Lighter, he got into a fighting stance and inched closer. He attempted to move slowly around Lighter and try to flee to the area over the bridge, but...

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Next part will probably feature music and Lucario getting hit with large lumber. Look forward to it!
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I love it when Lucario gets hit with large lumber
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Every time I see those lines I keep thinking it says large number.
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