| Grodus Rising; Epilogue: Rise of the X-Nauts | |
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| Sneezier | Nov 23 2008, 12:10 AM Post #21 |
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Luigi Approves!
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Put in General Birdross and his battalion in later chapters. To refresh your mind, he's a Jegan's MK. II pilot, his weapons are Bladed Revolvers that shoots either Bombshell Bills or lasers that are powerful as a .50 cal bullet. His Jegan is customized in blue paint with a Mechanical Birdo head. He has plenty of Jegan squadmates with him. His battalion doesn't need a commissar yet he brings them as mech pilots. He hates Vafudor and demons in general, alot because his wife was killed by one. His melee weapon is a SWDF version of the Star Beam Sword. Edited by Sneezier, Nov 23 2008, 12:30 AM.
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| Subsourian | Nov 23 2008, 09:02 AM Post #22 |
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Top, both of your characters are actually perfect for the current situation. I can actually explain them.And Sneezier, there's actually a situation where I was going to use either Sub or Sneezier, but remembered they were in Oddtastic. So Birdross would be perfect. I just need a name for a ship he owns. |
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| Sneezier | Nov 23 2008, 11:53 AM Post #23 |
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Luigi Approves!
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His ship is named "Twilight of Hope", a Minerva-class battleship and carrier. It can up to 40 mechs, 60 fighters, and a large battalion. It is armed with turbolaser cannons, proton torpedo ted launchers, missles, rocket anchors, and a Combo cannon with 2 claws. |
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| Subsourian | Nov 23 2008, 12:17 PM Post #24 |
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How many ships does that gundam site have? But that'll work perfectly. And now, NEW PART! CHAPTER 1-3: The Gad Instillation FAHR OUTPOST – CENTRAL INSTILLATION BARRACKS Deep in the main complex, the remaining SWD forces crowded around one of the few functional barracks. Many of them were shoddily bandaged; some were bedridden from battle wounds. Medics and makeshift doctors went around from man to man, doing their best to sustain their lives, some ending in failure. The entire room was barely lit, the power running on emergency generators. The mayor paced around, in sheer shock of what had happened. The X-Nauts had come out of nowhere, their defenses were offline, and the forces they had left were makeshift. He knew it was a matter of time before they raided the central complex, and attempted to obtain the knowledge locked inside Fahr Outpost’s mainframe. “The situation is dark indeed, mayor.” Sister Maya walked up from behind the mayor, full combat gear. ”Sister Maya… I’m sorry. We have failed in our defense. They outnumber us, and it is only a matter of time-“ ”Have faith, mayor! For in the darkest times, a single light shines brighter than ever before! Pull back your men deeper into the complex, do not attempt to engage the enemy until reinforcements arrive.” Sister Maya ignited the energy in her Holy Blade, and held it to her face in a salute. “I will meet this scum head on, and kill every one of them.” FAHR OUTPOST CENTRAL COMPLEX – NORTHERN LABS The five walked slowly through a massive complex of research tables, computers, and labs. Behind them, an escort of X-Nauts, followed by several technicians moved, keeping their guard up. Large tubes lined the walls, each containing some creature in freeze. “Could this be…?” Paper muttered, looking about the complex in awe, “Is this the famed Gad Instillation?” “Gad Instillation? What the heck is a Gad Instillation?” Asked Christopher. “Elvin Gad is Star World’s leading scientist in the several fields,” responded Eli, “When he was younger, it was rumored he worked for the SWD on projects for the betterment of the military, which, in return, gave him the materials to work further on his time travel research. There were a few files leaked that pointed him to working in a special lab designed specifically for his military research, but it was kept quiet by the SWD. This place was named the Gad Instillation, and still holds some skepticism on what exactly was inside.” “And this is it.” Said Paper, “The projects, the schematics, the advanced technology, it has to be here.” ”So the X-Nauts are after tech? Are they trying to build a new mech?” said Amphy, skipping about. “Hey guys, I think I found something!” Christopher picked up a small faced block, with an electronic device floating to its side. ”I wouldn’t-“ Eli started for the box, when Christopher flipped it on, and its eyes began to light up. “Like, totally. I know. I know, she- Wait, the ended two months ago! Where am I? Who are these losers?” The box looked around at the group surrounding her. ”We’re part of the X-Naut’s Conscripted Regiment. I’m Eli.” Eli motioned towards himself. “The gangster wannabe is Christopher, the annoying one is Amphy, and the nerdy one is Paper.” “Like, whatever.” Said the box. “They called me Teen Angst. I’m, like, here. And I dunno why. And what’s with the red fur coats? Is this, like, the 80’s?” “Can we break it? Please?” Christopher muttered. “Everyone down!” Litera shouted from ahead. A stream of bullets blasted around the group. Up ahead, several SWD had set up a stationary cannon, which they continued to fire. Eli fired a fireball at the fortified position, which missed, and phased out on the blast-resistant walls. ”Like, shoot them or something!” Shouted Teen Angst. “Shut up! We’re TRYING!” Christopher screamed over the fire. Amphy jumped over one of the tables and shot a bolt of thunder at the group, which deflected off the wall due to the odd angle of which it was shot. The bolt blasted around the room, until it hit one of the tubes on the wall, which began to light up. ”SUBJECT 826-B: REPTILLIAN CREATURE IN PERFECT CRIOSTASIS. EMERGANCY SURGE PROTECTION ACTIVATED. DEFROSTING NOW.” The tube slowly opened, and a cloud of smoke plumed out, and the outline of a large, agile creature could be made out by the naked eye. The creature promptly vanished, leaving no trace. “What was that all about?” Eli shouted, only to hear the stationary emplacement silenced. “Bring it down! Bring it do-“ The SWD trooper was cut short, as if he was being impaled by some kind of blade. A high pitched roar sounded through the complex, and a black Velociraptor stepped out into the light, blood on his tail and mouth. “Who the heck are you?” Christopher said, his voice serious, but shaky. “My name’s Ripvor. You all freed me from these mushroom-headed freaks and these bomb people, so I guess I owe you all a favor. You pay?” “Yes, we do indeed.” Litera said, his voice as steady as usual, “You’re welcome to come along, if you so wish. We will introduce you to our commander as soon as we have finished our operations here.” ”Good.” Ripvor simply put it. The group walked over the felled SWD troops, and moved further into the complex. “You mean we’re, like, letting this black leather freak help out? I mean, like, look at his sense of-“ Paper covered Teen Angst’s mouth with a rag, and carried her forward with the rest of the group.” FAHR OUTPOST CENTRAL COMPLEX – SEVERAL ROOMS FROM THE MAINFRAME The X-Naut group, with their newly acquired allies, moved to a large, empty room. The sides of the room were made almost completely out of computers, but the rest of the room was a dome of durasteel, the kind used in starships. “We are almost there. Let’s get moving.” Litera motioned everyone forward, when the door on the other side opened up. The short Toad, armed with a large, runed pistol and a glowing blade stepped out. Eli whistled, nodding his approval, “Well, we got ourselves a hot one.” ”In the name of the Church Protectorate, you all are sentenced to Inquisitorial Death on the count of interference with the workings of the Protectorate. Now, throw down your arms.” “I take it that’s means I’m not going to be getting your number?” Eli mused. “Eli, shut up.” Muttered Litera. Sister Maya shot a beam of light at the group, which blasted them into different parts of the room. Ripvor jumped at Sister Maya, claws extended, but was blasted back by a light bolt to the chest. Ripvor rammed against the wall, and slumped to the ground. Paper threw a grenade at Sister Maya, which blasted her back, ramming her into the side of one of the computers. ”Yes!” shouted Paper, but in his gloating, a light bubble appeared around him, freezing him in place. Litera armed his canister rifle, and fires at Sister Maya. The shots bounced off of her armor, as she charged toward Litera with her energy blade put at her side. She jumped at Litera, but was tackled in mid-air by Ripvor. The two rolled on the ground for a while, until Maya sliced Ripvor off him, blasting him back. Christopher pounced on Sister Maya, and energized his body. She struggled as sparks shot off her armor, but grabbed Christopher by the tail, and threw him to the side, still unable to control the feedback from his electrical shots. Amphy looked at Maya, then looked at Teen Angst, still on the ground, talking on her cell phone. He shrugged, and threw Teen Angst at Maya, who bashed her in the back of the head. “She did it!” Amphy pointed at Teen Angst, just as a bolt of light magic shot him to the side. Sister Maya looked around the field, most of the attackers downed, several still standing. She looked toward Litera, and smiled, seeing him as the last able target. She took her runed weapon, aimed at him, and- Behind her, an ice beam blasted her to the ground, freezing her armor against the durasteel. Eli appeared from thin air, just deactivating his cloaking spell. ”I suppose this’d be a bad time to ask you out?” Eli mused. ”You dare mock me? By the Light, you will be purged!” Litera came up beside Eli, and sprinkled a powder on the incapacitated Maya. She promptly passed out, alive, but asleep. “All opposition has been neutralized, Admiral. Everyone is OK. We have secured a route to the mainframe.” Admiral Stalvick’s voice came back through the com. “Excellent. I will be joining you shortly. We have called some support ships to evacuate us. You have done your job well, men. Let us hope this trip was worth it…” FAHR OUTPOST MAINFRAME – SEVERAL HOURS LATER Stalvick stood before a massive computer, data flickering on the screen. Three technician X-Nauts worked the terminals, downloading data onto their own, personal computers. Stalvick himself checked several of the files. “CHAOS EMERALDS: These gems emit a strong anti-matter signature, each emitting one separate but equal to the other seven. These energies, once brought together, emit a signature of near limitless energy. There are only eyewitness accounts to confirm this, as these gems have not been studied simultaneously in a laboratory setting…” Stavlick sifted through the data, somewhat annoyed on his results. He looked through, until he caught a glimpse at the end. “…Further information on these gems is inconclusive. Doctor Ivo “Eggman” Robotnick is currently known to have the largest cache of information on these gems. However, due to his hostile nature, these results have yet to be published.” “Eggman…” Muttered Stalvick. If they couldn’t locate a tracker for the gems, they could at least find a lead on where to find one. “Get what data you can. We’re returning to the armada. Grodus should be satisfied.” TO BE CONTINUED IN CHAPTER 2-1: FLEET OF THE X-NAUTS |
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Nov 23 2008, 12:49 PM Post #25 |
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Just one little note: “Gad Instillation? What the heck is a Gad Instillation?” Asked Christopher. If the word after the quotations isn't a name, it's not capitalized. I think. Hooray! That was great. Now I actually have a past for Ripvor. ;o I just, uh, would need to know what it is. Hey wait didn't you say that you needed guest stars to give you what they would name a ship if they had one or something, or am I crazy? Well of course I am, but that's not the point. Oh and when are you going to have a table of continental contents? |
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| Subsourian | Nov 23 2008, 05:23 PM Post #26 |
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Eh, I didn't know myself. I did notice it, but I couldn't tell either way. ![]() And I was going to have it where the SWD captured him and put him in cryostasis for research purposes. How long is up to you. And I can't get this forum to link to a specific post, so I can't make a table of contents... ![]() And yes, you are going crazy. But I did ask to have people name ships for each character. It's not a big deal. Sorta. |
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| Warlyte | Nov 23 2008, 06:23 PM Post #27 |
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Really? Because something in the top-right corner of each post looks like a link to me! |
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| Sneezier | Nov 23 2008, 06:28 PM Post #28 |
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Luigi Approves!
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This site has alot of pics of the Gundams, the ships, and other stuff. |
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| Subsourian | Nov 23 2008, 07:18 PM Post #29 |
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Blander
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I knew that. ![]() I take that back, then. I'll work on it now. |
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Topmonhit
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Nov 23 2008, 08:37 PM Post #30 |
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Doesn't really matter how long, I haven't had anything planned for him to have done before this. Anyway, if Ripvor had a ship it'd be named Raptor and Teen Angst's would be named "Totally". |
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