| Grodus Rising; Epilogue: Rise of the X-Nauts | |
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Topmonhit
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Nov 16 2008, 10:12 PM Post #11 |
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Iono. They just split up. I think the reason was they got separated and either Grodus or the Shroobs blamed each other for the plan not working and they just didn't want to work together anymore. I mean, there was only like 3 or 4 Shroobs. The only reason they were any use to Grodus was Princess Shroob. |
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| Sneezier | Nov 18 2008, 12:22 PM Post #12 |
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Luigi Approves!
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I'll have some of my characters joining. Name: Sneezier Species/Appearance: Kirby/ Lime green Kirby with a red plumber cap and blue sunglasses. Age: 23 Gender: Male From: Popstar (26th century) Bio/Personality/Whatever Else: Sneezier is a geneticly enhanced Kirby from the 26th century, the son of Prof. Rupert Von Snifin, and the twin brother of Sally Snifin.His genes are artifically enchanted so he got cat-like reflexes, a very skilled pilot on par with an ace, and to be able to use the power of chaos.The reason he gets enhancements because his father is forced to make a superweapon out of a Kirby.The Plasma Wisp President, Plasmoc, wanted to control him but he disobeyed Plasmoc. He enrages the president and tried to escape with his family and sparked a planetary civil war between Popstar loyalists and the Popstar Liberators.The war cost his parents. After the war, he went to the 21st century so he can show and patent his inventions and modernized Star World.The reason he wanted to go back in time because he wanna prevent anyone with evil ambitions to cause harm to the innocent.He loves to build mechs (Mecha to other people),giant pilotable robots and other things.His powers are long forgotten.The genetic enhancements he received has a drawback, it messes up his speech and grammer. His genes are left unawakened until the time is to unleash his power. Name: Sally Species/Appearance: Kirby/ Light blue Kirby wearing a silver plumber cap or a archalogy Age: 23 Gender: Female From: Popstar (26th century) Bio/Personality: She has the same past as her twin brother, Sneezier but she decided to stay in the future wither her godfather, Yoshinsky.Unlike Sneezier, she perfers using artifacts as weapons and is a bit smarter than her brother.She a bit spunky and seems to humiliate her foes with her tattle with a holograpfic encyclopedia.She hated the misuse of powerful artifacts such as the Choas Emeralds for evil. She is obsessed with chocolate which is ironic when some people teased Sneezier about his chocolate sniper rifle. |
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| Subsourian | Nov 18 2008, 08:54 PM Post #13 |
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Slight problem, Sneezier. First, their both in the YB, and second, they both appear in Top's Oddtastic Comic. You do still have an exception in the later parts of the story, but meh. And finally... 1-1: Fahr Strike “Forward! Forward you dogs! To Victory! For Sir Grodus! FOR THE X-NAUTS!” Stalvick shouted above the roar of the battle. X-Nauts were moving on the outpost’s southern border, and were encountering resistance. The Star World Defensive Forces, the very same that beat them back at the War of Chronis, stood in their way. The X-Nauts next to him advanced, firing their trademark pulse rifles at the entrenched SWD lines. They had Lasrepeaters, stationary cannons that could fire hundreds of blasts for their single shot. Next to Stalvick, one of the X-Nauts armed his shoulder minigun, and fired a line of steel bullets on the SWD lines. Behind Stalvick, a wave of heat and sound threw him back, as a rocket blasted apart one of the Magnus Mech suits they had used for supporting fire. He had not counted on this much resistance for a single outpost in a frozen wasteland. Stalvick hoped to himself that whatever was in this outpost was worth all the effort it would take to get in. CHAPTER 1: WINTER ASSAULT FAHR OUTPOST CENTERAL COMPLEX The sound of the battle echoed to the ears of the outpost’s mayor, a dark green Bob-omb with a long, flowing mustache. Bandits had raided the outpost before, but these rebels were oddly persistent… “Sir!” Shouted a young SWD major, a young looking Shy Guy, “The enemies are breaching the southern lines. Should I call high command for support?” “Unnecessary, comrade,” said the mayor, “We have had bandit problem since this outpost was turned over to government control. If these bandits want an early grave, I will be more than happy to oblige. Prepare our artillery positions.” “Yes, sir!” Shouted the SWD Major, “You heard the man, get those batteries set!” FAHR OUTPOST: SOUTHERN POSITION Suddenly, the sky opened up. A rain of artillery shells came down on Stalvick’s position, blasting apart the advancing X-Nauts. The smoke and upturned snow obscured his vision, though he could already see his men retreating back from the lines. “Fall back!” screamed Stalvick, “Fall back and regroup!” CLIFFSIDE NEAR FAHR OUTPOST: UNIDENTIFIED REBEL CAMP High above the outpost, a small camp was erected. Several tents stood around a fire. Barrels of gun, tomes, and other weapons were scattered about the base. And single fire stood in the center, which was nearly blown out. All was silent, as most of the members were still waiting for dawn’s orders. The explosions of a battle echoed over the wide icy abyss, to which a young human-looking being looked out into. He was thin, black haired, and his skin seemed slightly tinged yellow. The man carried a massive rifle on his back, and a side arm in his coat pocket. He more binoculars, and looked out into the snow. “You up, Colonel Litera?” A short human bearing a distinctly green cloak that matched his deep green eyes walked up from behind the colonel. “I thought for sure you’d be sleeping after that long march you put us through. What’s out there anyway?” “Exactly what we’ve been looking for…” Litera said softly, “You’re just in time, Eli. Wake up the rest of them. We’re moving out.” “Into the fight again?” Mused Eli with a smirk, “Hey, as long as I get paid.” He turned to the rest of the cot, pulled out a small air horn, which split the dawn with its loud screech. “Oui! The rest of you! Get up! We’re moving!” X-NAUT FALLBACK POSITION – SEVERAL MILES SOUTH OF FAHR OUTPOST The remaining X-Nauts were formed on a large expanse of ice. Only about seventy of the 100 troopers made it back from the bombardment, and of that, only two of the seven Magnus Mech suits. “Sir, we’re regrouped. What should we do now?” An officer X-Naut questioned. “Their defenses are too strong, and our forces are too few. Still, there must be another way.” Stalvick stood for a second, holding his hand to his chin in thought. “Grodus would not be pleased if we failed on our first strike. “Sir!” Stated one of the scouts, “A party of unidentified militants are moving this way. They are signaling us.” From the east, a large party of bikes, foot soldiers, and mounted cavalry moved on the X-Nauts. Far ahead of the pack was Litera, riding a small combat hovercycle. He stopped several meters from the camp, and dismounted. “Admiral, I am Colonel Jack Litera of the Star World Resistance Forces,” He started, “I have been monitoring your attacks against the outpost, and I would like to offer you my services and skills in return for amnesty.” “Intriguing…” said Stalvick, “Colonel, you have absolutely no idea as to who we are or what we have come here to do. Why do you wish to side with us?” “Because, my men and I have sworn to fight against Star World and it’s oppressive Counsel.” This got some response from the crowd who followed him; especially from two Pokemon in the front, but Litera continued, “Seeing as you were wandering into enemy territory I figured we were on the same side.” “I see…” Muttered Stalvick, “How exactly do you propose to be of service to us, Colonel?” “Well, I possess an intimate knowledge of the surrounding area. I can show you an alternate route through a mountain pass that will lead to the rear of the outpost.” “Very well, Colonel,” Said Stalvick, convinced, “Consider yourselves the first conscripts of the Society of X-Nauts. Captain,” He turned to an X-Naut by his side, “See that the Colonel is given our full cooperation… We shall see if he’s worth the effort.” “New army to fight for? As long as I get the resources I need for my research. I’m Eli, part mage, part warrior, all lover.” He extended his hand to Stalvick, who reluctantly shook his.” “My name is Amphy, sirs! And this place, give me the burs!” The Ampharos smiled at the group of X-Nauts, who stood silently, looking at him, still trying to comprehend his pun. “Ignore him.” Said a Raichu, his eyes clad in dark shades, “The name’s Christopher. Just tell us what you want destroyed, and it’ll be gone… For a price, of course.” “Aye, we shall see…” Stalvick eyed him suspiciously. He had dealt with these sorts before, and he distrusted them. “Out of the way! Out of the way!” A young Shy Guy pushed through the crowd to the front, where he nearly ran into Stalvick. “My name is Paper, master in the fields of engineering and technology. I look forward to seeing our work in the field- Hey, those are nice high frequency sonic propulsion emitters!” Paper walked over to a X-Naut, and snatched his rifle out of his hands. “With a nice stock to emit the-“ “Paper, enough.” Litera snapped, “When you’re ready, Admiral, we will move to the base. I’m sure you want to leave this artic wasteland as much as we do.” “Indeed, Colonel Litera,” Stalvick muttered, “Alright men, move out! By tonight, we’ll have taken Fahr Outpost for the glory of Sir Grodus!” A cheer erupted from the throats of the X-Naut force. Within the next minute, the conscripted Resistance Forces moved northward, the X-Nauts right on their tail, leaving a trail of footprints in their wake. TO BE CONTINUED IN CHAPTER 1-2: THE FROZEN PASS |
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Topmonhit
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Nov 18 2008, 09:09 PM Post #14 |
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Shouldn't the mayor be saying "BOMB" too much? |
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| Subsourian | Nov 19 2008, 06:10 AM Post #15 |
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Ermmm.... New Mayor? ![]() I haven't played PM2 in forever, so that's one aspect I've forgotten. I just remember the Russian accent. |
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| Warlyte | Nov 19 2008, 10:57 AM Post #16 |
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Nice one. Ya nailed it. Suddenly I'm getting the urge to ask for guest stars in MY story... that would be interesting, anyway. xD |
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| Subsourian | Nov 22 2008, 10:08 AM Post #17 |
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New part. I noticed we have a lot of mages. And tech people. Sign ups are still open, by the way.1-2: The Frozen Pass FAHR OUTPOST CENTRAL COMPLEX The entire outpost was quiet, even after the last assault on their southern front. Guards stood at their posts, some scanning the horizon, which was, for the most part, a barren tract of wasteland. Mountains dominated the northern front of the outpost, which no army would be suicidal enough to try and cut through. For an outpost covered up by the Counsel of Star World as not existing, it was pretty well defended. The mayor of Fahr Outpost stood in the snow outside the main complex, pondering the last few attacks. Rebels had never attacked with that much ferocity… And their weapons were different, their attacks more uniform and organized. The sub-zero weather prevented much scouting until the late of day, and they really couldn’t take a single man away from defense… But this could affect Fahr Outpost’s security. “You seem troubled, Mayor.” Behind the mayor, a short female Toad, clad in heavy armor, and wielding a large white sword, walked behind them. Her suit gave away the holy markings of the Church’s Protectorate. Only recently had their influence come from the Federation to have branches in Star World. The mayor found that odd, considering it was founded to prevent another demonic Dark Age from setting on the universe “It is nothing, Sister Maya. How goes investigation?” “The demonic influence of Vaufendor is not within this ice sheet.” She looked over towards the setting sun, “I will be staying here until the sun rises tomorrow. The Church will be sending a transport back to Mushroom Kingdom.” “Very well, you are free to stay in the center of our humbled base, sister. It is the safest place we have to offer you.” “I shall accept your hospitality. I assure you, I will be no inconvenience.” With that, Sister Maya left the old Bob-omb in the snow, to stare deeper into the cold dawn. MOUNTAIN PASS – SEVERAL MILES NORTHEAST OF FAHR OUTPOST The newly formed X-Naut army moved between the pass of two icy mountains. It had only been several hours since their union, and the Resistance force and the X-Naut army still felt uneasy about each other. They would get over it, thought Stalvick, trotting through the snow. Amphy and Christopher took up the front with Litera, and were leading the way with several other rebels and mercenaries. Paper and Eli took up the middle, Stalvick and the main body of the force. The massive Magnus mechs covered the rear of their position. The pass, at it’s narrowest, allowed about ten normal sized troopers to go on, side by side. The sloped surface only presented a problem to the mechs, which relied on good footing to stay upright. “When are we going to reach this base? I’m losing feeling in my face!” Shouted Amphy. “Oh, shut up already!” Christopher moaned, “You’ve been in this wasteland for a month now.” “Two and a half, actually,” Muttered Litera, “That’s when I hired you two. My contract does, indeed, extend to the X-Nauts.” “So we’re still getting paid! Now we’ve got it made!” Amphy jumped into the air in joy, but slipped on the ice sheet. Christopher put his hand to his face, and sighed. FAHR OUTPOST NORTHERN BORDER- TWO HOURS LATER On the cliffside above the pass, Paper and Eli laid, both looking through pairs of enhanced binoculars. Beyond them, the outpost lied. Several artillery batteries were lined up, facing the southern position of the base, unmoved from the first X-Naut attack. “There are two generators and three artillery batteries,” said Paper, looking back up, “If we take them out, the base will be defenseless.” ”I really don’t see why these X-Nauts want this base so badly,” Said Eli, “They obviously aren’t going to keep it… They must want something inside.” “Not our place to judge, I assume,” Paper sighed, then pulled out his com-link “Admiral, this is the forward team. We’ve marked five primary targets, and located the primary complex.” “Excellent.” Stalvick’s voice returned, “We will begin with the attack momentarily. You two shall lead the charge. Your targets will be the generators and the artillery batteries. We have reserves to assist you in this. On your signal. Stalvick out.” “Great…” Muttered Eli, “Well, better now then never.” Eli rose from his position, and raised his hand, which glowed with a blue light. Then, a fireball shot into the sky, and exploded in a bright light. Several other flares came up from the cliffside, where other raiding parties were set. They streamed down the mountain, an army black specks against the white of the snow. The SWD were caught unaware as X-Nauts and rebels stormed the walls of Fahr Outpost, gunning through the little resistance they encountered. From all over the base, troopers were scattering around, trying to scrape together some defense. From his perch above the battle, Eli was enveloped in a blue teleport rune, and then disappeared. Paper ignited a fire spell in his hand, and threw it at a small box below his position. Several explosions rocked the snowy mountainside as a line of detonations went off. An avalanche descended on the bases Eastern side, crushed the walls in its wake. Paper stood above the massive landslide, safe from the crushing avalanche, then slid down the mountain side From the mountain range, a ball of blue light flew through the air, sparking with electrical energy. It was a large Volt Tackle, from the combined efforts of Amphy and Christopher. Seeing the air target, the base’s A-A batteries opened up on the volt tackle. The rail bullets streamed close to the ball, but the volt tackle streamed out of the way. “We’re not going to make it! We’re going to get hit!” Shouted Amphy above the electrical roar. ”Not if I have anything to say about it!” Christopher exclaimed, taking the volt tackle into a full dive. Amphy screamed behind them, as an impact seemed imminent, but at the last second, Christopher pulled up, narrowly floating above the ground. The volt tackle flew between the two power generators, where it exploded. The power generators were caught in the blast, and brought to smoldering piles of slag. Christopher and Amphy flew out from the explosion, and both landed, face first in the snow. “Could you be any less careful? We were almost died, and you would be blameful!” Amphy shouted. ”Hey, it worked, didn’t it?” Christopher smiled, still dizzy from the blast. From beside them, Eli teleported in, his armor unscathed and a small blaster in his hand. He looked down at the two Pokemon, and sighed. “A little late, aren’t you? You have things to do!” said Amphy. “Hey, better late then never. And I know what I have to do.” Eli turned towards the artillery batteries, now moving towards the advancing X-Naut position. Several SWD troopers now took note of him, and armed their rifles and trained them on him. Eli swiftly teleported in the middle of the group, and sent a wave of ice from his body, encasing their entire bodies under a solid sheet of frost. Calmly, he took several homemade explosive charges, and put them on the sides of the three artillery batteries. Eli then ran back to cover himself, as the three batteries burst apart in a fiery explosion. It was just then that Litera came over the walls with the remaining X-Naut and rebel forces. The SWD forces were now outnumbered, and in surrendering. Those that were stubborn enough to fight on retreated into the main complex when the battle turned for the worse. Looking around, Litera nodded, and activated him com-link. “Mission successful, Admiral.” Said Litera. “Excellent, Colonel.” Stalvick’s voice came through on the com, “This bases defenses are now crippled. All we need to do now is raid the primary complex, and we will be off this cursed rock. Send in a team to clear out the complex, while we prevent any reinforcements. “Yes, Admiral.” Litera shut off his com, and turned to Eli, Christopher, and Amphy. Paper ran up from one of the holes in the wall, and joined the group. “You four are with me.” He motioned toward them. “X-Nauts will support this. The quicker we get this done, the quicker we can be our of here.” “Ready when you are, Colonel.” Said Eli, “The quicker we can finally get to some place warm, the better.” TO BE CONTINUED IN CHAPTER 1-3: THE GAD INSTILLATION |
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Topmonhit
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Nov 22 2008, 02:54 PM Post #18 |
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Hmm... Chills could work as a guest star, except he doesn't usually do these types of things himself. OKAY SUB, YOU CAN EITHER HAVE A CHARACTER WHO DOESN'T TALK VERY OFTEN AND IS A NINJA AND POWERFUL AND RUTHLESS AND STUFF, OR AN EVIL MASTERMIND WHO ISN'T ALL THAT MASTERMINDY, HAS NO LIMBS, AND HAS A MUSTACHE LIKE WALUIGI'S |
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| Subsourian | Nov 22 2008, 10:45 PM Post #19 |
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Just because of my love for over the top battle scenes, I'll go for the ninja. Is it someone new, or should I know him? |
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Topmonhit
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Nov 23 2008, 12:01 AM Post #20 |
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You should know him, but nooo, you haven't been RPing in Anecdote. Anyway, Name: Ripvor Species/Appearance: Velociraptor. ![]() Age: 26 Gender: Male From: Terrydactyland Bio/Personality: Ripvor is a ruthless, stealthy, and... ruthless ninja. I got the idea when the History Channel described Velociraptors as the ninja dinosaurs or something. ;o He uses his razor-sharp teeth, sharp claws, and supersharp talons to damage foes badly. His tail is also as sharp as a sword, so he can use that as well. He's also real agile, able to run fast and jump pretty well. He works for whoever pays him the most... although it depends who they are. More often than not, he's working for the bad guy, and either way he'll follow his own rules and not do something he doesn't want to. Which usually includes beating his foes to a pulp. On rare occasions--which only includes if he hasn't eaten in a week--he'll actually eat some of a foe he kills. I guess The Cloud threw Ripvor at the place and let him do what he wants. Anyway, here's a 2nd character. She'll just show up out of nowhere and follow them, giving them horrible advice. Name: Teen Angst Species/Appearance: YI Information Block. She always has a cell phone connected to her left side, green eyeliner, and lipstick. Age: Um. Iono. Do YI Information Blocks have an age? She's probably like 17. Gender: Female From: YI Bio/Personality: Teen Angst (I have no idea why she's named that) is a YI Information Block who is a very, very, very stereotypical teenaged girl. She talks on her cell phone a lot. Like, y'know, seriously. And stuff. Totally. Her relatives (wait what) want her to become a first-class, famous Information Block that gives excellent information. She couldn't care less. Most of her information is bad, and half the time she stops during the middle of it to talk on her cell phone. The only thing she doesn't do is text, which is because she has no fingers. |
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