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Topmonhit
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Nov 18 2008, 02:10 PM Post #61 |
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I probably would have used Tower of Tragedy or something. Because that music is great. |
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| Warlyte | Nov 19 2008, 11:07 AM Post #62 |
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Okay, I'm going to go all-out and start asking for guest stars. PMF, I know you read some of this and can't post on here, so you can IM me if you want. Keep in mind that this takes place on A DIFFERENT TIMELINE from everything else. But once the Tech Core gets fixed up in tonight's part, the teams will have the means to go anywhere anytime WITHIN this timeline. So here's my join sheet, and it's... questions. What's your name? What kind of creature are you? Are you a dude or a chick? I'm blind, what do you look like? Where's your usual hangout? What side would you join and why? Your past or something? Describe yourself? Got any cool itemz or weaponz? Okay, here's a sheet. Name: Race: Gender: Appearance: Home Area: Team/Reasons: Bio: Personality: Items/Weapons: |
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Topmonhit
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Nov 19 2008, 02:55 PM Post #63 |
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Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm I'm going to go all-out and blow the lid off of this cherry potato wait what? Name: Topmonhit Race: Mii. Yes. Mii. Gender: Male Appearance: This Home Area: What. Um... Oh, I know! Give me a list of areas on the planet they're at, and I'll decide as to where The Cloud is currently docked. Team/Reasons: I WANNA GUEST STAR, THAT'S MY REASON! Oh, uh, Team? Um... um... um... THE GOOD GUYS! Which ARE the gouda guys, anyway? Bio: The Origin of The Cloud explains most of what you need to know about me. As for this timeline, obviously I just poofed here. Well, actually, there was a bit of a malfunction in The Cloud (that's happening a lot... dang Count Bleah) and I crashed here. AFLAC and I docked it somewhere so he can fix it up while I went on to guest star and stuff. I can't... really... do much of anything... I have a hammer that can shoot beams out of it because I always liked that idea. It can also charge for a beam smash, which is where you prepare to fire a beam out of it, but then swing it like a normal hammer for massive damage. Also explaining all about The Cloud crashing and AFLAC fixing is is purely so I have an excuse to be here. Mm'k? |
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| Warlyte | Nov 19 2008, 05:58 PM Post #64 |
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Well on the "reason" thing I meant why you'd pick that team. And Top, part of the point of my perspective stuff is to make the presence of good guys and bad guys pretty much disappear. I guess the truly "good guy" sort of thing is CAN'T WE ALL JUST GET ALONG?! Um. Well if you want the whole planet, then I'm not in tune with the whole planet yet. Most of the areas have already showed up: Morla: That was the place where a huge amount of the story took place. It contains the Shrines, a mountain range, forest, lake, and of course that huge desert. When everyone left the government collapsed and Tritrite took over. Panma: This is an area that wasn't all that important. It's where those Tritrite guys used to be. You know, before Eibmoz blew up their base. The merchant class still pretty much rules the whole thing. Derriga: THIS IS WHERE THEY ARE DUH and um the technical stuff is based in the West because that's where the Tech Core was invented (the Ein and people's team is there), the government is in the center, and um the East I guess is mostly like all the um farming and manufacturing or whatever the people do to survive in all of that. There's also another island I haven't mentioned/named yet that contains um. Dragons and monsters and stuff. And on that island you'd consider the dragons to be the good guys =O |
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| Warlyte | Nov 19 2008, 08:28 PM Post #65 |
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Part 3-5: The REAL Revival of the Tech Core.... Hopefully http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=928ghl9Pr5I I paced and thought deeply about the equation. I’d gone back and tried to figure it out, but this time, it was even worse: I had somehow gotten q (the square root of r) in both an exponent and in the base that HAD that very exponent. And it wasn’t simply q^q either. “Maybe while I’m thinking we should get some of those things,”I said. “For instance, when’s lunch? And I’m sure there’s plenty of garbage around. Insanity? Erm... I’m guessing we’ll have to put in a brain, then. We’ve got this power source and, well, I’m not sure about that meaninglessness. But the hardest part will probably be the pants of some monster with gigantic horns, claws and teeth, five eyes, three noses, and an irrational number of arms.” Noctus put a book on the table. The book itself had more eyes than I could count. “I’ve done some research on that monster. Apparently, its cave is not far south of here. As for that irrational number of arms? It seems the number is roughly equal to the square root of 9000.” “What?! 9000?” I asked. “That means... the square root is around... 90 or 100, right?” “It’s approximately 94.868, to be much more precise,” he informed me. I shook my head. “How can someone have a... an irrational fraction of an arm? How do they calculate that with 94 other arms?” “It is a mysterious calculation,” Noctus agreed. “Especially given that it never calms down, and killing it will make it disappear. It leaves only its pants when it dies.” I looked at him oddly. “Well, maybe we should just... kill it and get those pants.” So, we set off on a quest to find the monster with gigantic horns, claws and teeth, five eyes, three noses, and an irrational number of arms, to retrieve its pants. Familiar music again. Sonic Adventure 2, guys. Now this is MY definition of epic, Top. If a bit of an extreme form of it. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a6aI--AdKls Matt woke up to see Rotu in an odd state, his eyes bloodshot and pupil- less. If pupil- less is a word. Anyway, Rotu floated up into the air. “The balance is gone... mother... why have you left me behind?! I can’t... I won’t... let that happen...” In an altered state his power renewed. No, it didn’t come back, really. He was leeching it from every living creature around. He then focused it to destroy something near him. Matt couldn’t stop this. He was out of power, all wasted in the battle before. He barely had the strength to get up and leave the capital, occasionally looking back as each building, each person, was destroyed by some twist of magic. There was nobody left anywhere that could still save the city from this crisis, this outrage, this catastrophe. Matt realized that soon not a single person in the capital would be alive, all the buildings completely leveled. The other heirs–would they die, too? Matt turned around and rushed into the government building, its doors blown off by the blasts. “Everyone... you have to get out of here! The prince has lost his control, lost his mind, lost the balance of the powers in him... and everyone here will suffer for it.” Some of them disappeared, but two came up to Matt and teleported him out. Lynn and all of the others watched from outside as each burst of power sacrificed one person’s life to destroy something further. She didn’t quite understand how that worked–an action that was destructive, somehow balanced another that was also destructive. How could there be any good in this? Maybe... maybe killing was wrong, after all... But Ein had almost killed them, too... what could she say about that? She closed her eyes and thought about it. What could she trust in more? Ein was essentially never a bad person... but if either was right, the other was wrong. Which could it have been? Her head spun with the thoughts of which path was true. Well, this destruction was wrong, at least. Helping everyone escape was right enough for the moment. She never looked back at the city–dwelling on the past couldn’t help. Of course, she realized, it wasn’t the past. It was the future, if she couldn’t fix it first. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q4VbFEauVpU “Time to cut off some irrational arms!” I yelled, as the three of us ran at the monster. The 94.868 arms flailed wildly, while the mouthful of teeth shouted incoherently. Dodging attacks, each of us cut off an arm at a time with our weapons. That’s 31.623 arms for each of us. Now counting to twenty attacks yesterday, if you recall took about an entire paragraph. Even starting there, it was still 21, 22, 23 as the count continues, 24, 25, 26, 27 attacks, 28, 29, 30, 31. Multiply that by the three of us and you’ll start to get it, even not considering the punches we had to dodge or the blood that rained all over us, the difficulty of cutting off an arm in a sea of them... Needless to say, it was a long and tedious battle. Our weapons converged in a final attack that combined to 1.868 arms cut off. It bled everywhere, died, and disappeared, leaving its pants behind. I had actually gotten 31.623 not by dividing up the 94 whatever-it-was, but by realizing that, with 3 as the square root of nine, I was dividing two square roots. Thus, that number each was the square root of 1000. My brain was starting to kick in again. I pulled out my work so far and thought about it again. q^2=r, dg^n=y, za=x r + x/ln(90 + r - y) = m + y r(ln(90 + r -y) = (m + y)ln(90 + r - y) - x ln(90 + r - y)^(r - m - y) = -x (90 + r - y)^(r - m - y) = e^ -x Hmmm... I kept staring at it and suddenly got the solution! But the plain fact is, in real life I have no idea how to solve the equation. My math teacher couldn’t help me any further than this, either, so for the time being we’re just going to say that it was somehow solved. Maybe none of us will ever know the true solution to the equation. Maybe it’s better that way. Anyway, within the storyline I finished solving the equation. I threw in my lunch, some garbage, a brain, and that power source, then cut the pants until they only existed in 1.5 dimensions at a time. Then I shouted some gibberish that was absolutely, well, meaningless. Holding up the solution to the equation, I made the tech core appear–in all of its who knows how many dimensional glory. Exponents can be confusing. Somehow it probably exists in as many dimensions as its meaning can support. Blargh. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WLLE_PvJ5mY&feature=related The glowing yellow orb grabbed my head somehow and scanned my thoughts. Quickly it built its own technology from the particles surrounding it, reviving everything in sight and building it up to be even bigger. The bits converged not into buildings, as I once expected, but to mechs, even better than the suit. Yes, I may be starting to get some ideas from Sub here–however, I’m not about to get all technical, tactical or anything. Besides, this is far from over... oh how far is it from being over. Yet I digress, for something is afoot! Jupiter came back and ripped the Tech Core off my head and placed it on her own, changing all of the creations from silver to gold. “Yes... it’s all mine... you’ve done it! You fool, you’ve saved me so much trouble!” She disappeared before any of us could catch her, and the color switching started to spread out around the area. The mechs came to life and started attacking us, as a tower started forming up and further upward, the sound of Jupiter’s laughter spreading outward. “Dammit!” Mars cursed. “She’s managed it after all, hasn’t she? Now, everything is going to ruin. Do you see that?” He pointed out all the gold in it. “Uncle Matt, you’re the only leader we have left. I’m your sister’s kid, so I would have taken it if it weren’t for you. Of course, I don’t really know who my dad is. In fact, none of us are quite sure of more than one parent... it sort of leaves ya hanging, doesn’t it?” Matt met the entire crew. He didn’t know that their names happened to be planets in Earth’s solar system, but he did learn the names anyway. Lynn’s daughter was named Neptune, Mark’s son was Mercury, Anna’s daughter was Venus, Seth’s son was Pluto, um, did I forget anyone? Prince Rotu’s nickname was also Saturn. Of course, we’ve already met Jupiter. One, two, three, four, five, six, yes, we have all seven of them. Although weren’t there nine planets? I must have missed one. I mean other than Earth, as Earth, confusingly, is also an element. Yeah, I know what you’re all thinking. This whole thing is terribly confusing and such, yes. Wait, I remember now, it’s Uranus. But I’m not going to tell which ones Jupiter and Uranus are. Hah, the name Uranus is still funny even now that I’ve matured a bit. Well, actually, it’s funnier than ever. But it still seems immature. About the level of fart jokes. Matt sighed. “Alright already, we get it. Jupiter and Uranus are still mysterious... haha, Uranus is mysterious... dammit, now you’ve got ME thinking it’s funny!” Maybe we should just stop before this... gets out of hand. Which it’s sort of too late. Wow. So, uh, yeah, hope you guys liked tonight’s part, because I have NO IDEA whatsoever what’ll be going on in tomorrow’s part. You know, besides picking up where we left off. And, hopefully, a guest star or two. Please submit at least one if you haven’t already! |
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Topmonhit
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Nov 19 2008, 08:29 PM Post #66 |
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Um. Derriga. Inside a hidden place in the west. The Cloud is docked somewhere secreeeeeet. Yeah I'm actually not clear on what the teams are. There's like what, 4? |
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| Warlyte | Nov 19 2008, 08:43 PM Post #67 |
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Well up until now there were only 2: the group with ya know Seth and Lynn and those people, and the other one with Ein and Mouse and Noctus. Now the people with planet names are the third team. |
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SZM
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Nov 19 2008, 09:48 PM Post #68 |
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GRATE Aether!
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Hahaha uranus. Anyway the Sonic vs. Shadoo music finished right when I finished that part.
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| Warlyte | Nov 20 2008, 04:02 PM Post #69 |
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Just going to make this last note: all guest stars will appear in the part THE DAY AFTER you sign up. Because I can't get online before I write each day. So yeah I already wrote Top's entrance but he'll be the only guest star in today's part. Also being from another timeline gives him a big advantage =O |
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| Warlyte | Nov 20 2008, 07:36 PM Post #70 |
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Updated the sheet since Top's Bio field ended up really long. He didn't tell me personality but since it's him I'm just using things I know from, say, YIM conversations i.e. tendencies and such. Most of tonight's part is finished. PLEASE submit guest stars for tomorrow, other people. Also Top if you really wanted to put in more that's fine since I'm a little short on them for now. Name: Race: Gender: Appearance: Home Area: Team/Reasons: Bio: Personality: Items/Weapons: |
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