| Metal Wars Climax; Chapter 2-4: Reunion | |
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| Sneezier | Jan 26 2009, 09:07 PM Post #1 |
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Luigi Approves!
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Table of Contents Story 1: The Invasion of Star World 1-1: The Blackened Sky 1-2: The Defense of Fort Mei’Chai 1-3: The Popstarian and the Pokemon 1-4: The Flight of Oshy Gisho 1-5: The Mechanical Champion Hybrid 1-6: The Heart of Star World 1-7: Apsalus' Terror 1-8: The Heavens Lit Afire 1-9: Aftermath Story 2: Culling the Storm 2-1: The God of all Metal 2-2: Brewing a Plan 2-3: Copper Storm 2-4: Reunion It starts in bloodshed, it ends in romance. Sneezier Productions Proudly Presents........ Metal Wars Climax Story Arc 1: The Invasion of Star World 1-1: The Blackened Sky The Yoshi Bodyguard Headquarters, a small place where the remaining protectors lived in, home of peacekeepers and the heart of Star World's defense. Today, all that is left is Sneezier, Sally, Sub, Coshi, Plasshi, and Jet Gundam. They can no longer be as freelance as before, since the imminent merging with the SWD. Sneezier is lying down on the rooftop looking at the sky without the risk of seeing the sun and hurting his eyes. His sapphire sunglasses shielded his adorable eyes. All he could do is just stare at a SWDF Mario-Class Star-Battleship patrolling the nearby airspace. It's all over for his beloved organization of the YB. He has plans to convert the HQ into a place where history is preserved, a museum. Topper and Oshy came to the HQ just to see the remaining members just for a little chat. Oshy: Hey Sneezier, are you blinding yourself by staring at the sun. Sneezier: No, I'm just watching that red battleship fly by. I have special sunglass. Topper: So, how's the HQ? Sneezier: Nothing much, I have plans to convert it into a museum about this place. Topper: Will it be boring like that cardboard one? Sneezier: Nah, I'll add a cafe, a gift shop, and some fun stuff. Oshy: A museum’s actually a good idea. I knew you could do more than just making clones, robots, and weapons. Sneezier: Yeah, I may be a military commander but I'm not a heartless warlord. I fight for peace. Oshy: True. I still dislike how the clones are used, though… Sneezier: … Just then, they can hear millions of familiar engine noises, which has sent chills down their hearts and spines; the sound of a million mechanical screaming banshees. Sneezier: No, it can't be! They couldn’t have gotten past the fleet! Oshy: What's wrong? Sneezier: I heard these in the Battle of Neo Star, Babi Sky Killers and Messala Fighters.... Topper: Those are Metal Army robots?… Carp. Music –One Final Effort Everyone looked up in the sky to see millions of Babi Sky Killers and Messala Fighters blackening the sky. Fighters overwhelm the Mario-Class Star-Battleship. Just then, anti-matter ballistic missiles rained down from the sky, one of them hit the unlucky ship as the missile’s large explosion blow it into molten slag as the other missiles flew toward the other directions toward different continents and lands. To make matters worse, many massive Zanzibar and Komusai invasionary craft descended down to planet's surface each carrying legions of robotic abominations. Oshy: Oh dear… This invasion force is bigger than the Shoshis. It’s bigger than anything I’ve ever seen! I can't believe there are so many… Topper: Then we'll have to take them out, just like all the others. Sneezier: I wish I could agree with you, but this might be the hardest battle to win. We may not survive this one... Come on guys, we have to save our homeworld, or our planet will join the hundreds of others they’ve roboticized. Topper and Oshy ran to the warp pipes while Sneezier enter the hanger to get his Ultima STAR-ORM. 5 flying crafts launched out the HQ, the STAR-ORM, Coshi's customized X Fighter, the Great Panaj, the Nightwind IV commanded by Scorch, and Sub's Wizard Gundam with magi fin funnels attached to the back. Sneezier flew to Yoshitropolis while the Nightwind IV flew to Sarasaland. The X Fighter and the Great Panaj flew toward the Bean Bean Kingdom. From the Nightwind IV, several streaks of dropships, supported by the Wizard Gundam, flew out into space Sneezier: *Thinking* So much bloodshed in this war, how long could we last in this battle... Green House-11:26 AM Prime Minister Yoshi viewed the invasion from his egg office. He has a stern look on his with his birdo secretary on his side. Yoshi: So, it begins. *Contacts the Counsel via holoscreens* Counsel, have your men ready for battle. The invasion has started already. Intro Music- Hell March 3 On the cliffside of Dinosaur Land's Donut Plain, a Rex saw the Metal Army's Steel Leigon Invasion force. A Razuk-Class Carrier Battleship fired its turbolaser cannons toward the island, just as the Rex sprinted for cover. The Komusai reached dry land first and unload its garrison, Zaku Troopers and Dom Brutes. One of the Doms has his beam saber primed for slashing. Meanwhile at the Chai Kingdom, anti-matter ballistic missiles rained toward its kingdom's capital, the Oriental Palace and blew it into a crater. Giant Daleks, Gouf Flyers, and various landing craft descended toward the newly formed crater with construction equipment. At Yoshitropolis, hundreds of landing craft unload their troops and vehicles down toward the streets. They land perfectly without suffering from any damages. The troops' monoeyes glow when they grab for their weapons. The Yoshis ran away to the emergency warp pipes and escape tunnels to avoid the gunfire. In the Mushroom Kingdom, missiles are fired at the Star-Battleships, speeding by the massive ship. Behind the main castle, a huge shadowy figure, a 700-meter tall robot walks toward the building. Its monoeye glowing as it looks at one of the battleships near the giant. The intro ends when it leaps toward the ship with a fist clenched and primed it's anti matter gun in the mouth. 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| Subsourian | Jan 26 2009, 10:12 PM Post #2 |
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The sudden invasion of the Metal Army has caught the Star World Defensive Forces off guard. After a day of heated fighting in the atmosphere, invasion vessels have reached landfall in several key locations, including the Mushroom Kingdom and Beanbean Kingdoms. However, Sarasaland has been hit with one of the largest forces, the Metal Army wanting to use the population in the region as resources in their ceaseless march. All that stands between them and victory in this region is a single fortress, and one determined clone who will not see it fall. 1-2: The Defense of Fort Mei’Chai FORT MEI’CHAI – FRONTAL TRENCH LINE The trench line outside the fortress was in chaos. SWD troopers were holding the barricaded line in front of the complex. Several autocannons were set up at the crest of the trench, and were firing outward, toward a mass of dust and confusion and chaos. On the horizon, the shapes of several Metal army warships, landing masses of troops, could be made out, There was at least three, each holding masses of mechanized warriors without number. Above, aerial mobile mech suits battled against the SWD Air Division, causing puffs of smoke in the sky viewable from the dirt line of the trench. The mass of dust from the fighting left the sky in a twilight sunset like haze, blotting out the sun with masses of orange clouds. On the frontline of the trench, a green masked Popstarian and a brown skinned Yoshi youth both manned one of the autocannons, firing at advancing Metal Army forces. Both wore the helmets and uniforms trademark of the SWD, the green flak suits that served as weak body armor. The Popstarian held the turret steady, while the Yoshi fed in ammunition as it fired. ”Easiest assignment we have,” said the Yoshi mockingly, “This is great! One week on the job, and we’re already on the frontlines!” “The cause we fight for is a just one, we cannot give in now!” shouted the Popstarian, “The light of justice will prevail in this coming battle! That I swear!” “Incoming!” a SWD solider shouted over the chaos, as an Arial Zaku strafed by. The bullets from his run ricocheted off the trench line. The two looked around, seeing their turret a smoldering pile of scrap. “They’re preparing to charge!” shouted a nearby Commissar, “Prepare to repel! For Star World!” Just then, a shadow came over their group. Several Pelican pattern dropships landed in front of the trench line, and Yoshi Bodyguard Clone troopers poured out, firing on the charging Metal Army forces. One stood out amongst them all, wearing green trimmed armor and a flowing cape, as well as a heavier and more menacing battle suit. Within minutes, the few Metal Army forces that had charged were repelled, but then aerial force strafed by, destroying a dropship and killing several nearby clones. The clone troopers ran for the trench, barely avoiding long-range shooters from the Metal Army position. After a few seconds, the local commissar saluted at the large extravagant clone trooper, the clone trooper returning the salute. “Commander Scorch, it is an honor,” said the Commissar. “With all due respect, now’s not the time,” said Scorch, “We’ve got to take out the invasion transports before their full cargo unloads. We won’t be able to hold them back if they get a foothold here.” “Excuse me sir,” said the Commissar, “But… We can’t take on three of those. We only have a small garrison.” “I know,” said Scorch, “We only have to deal with one. Transport 3 should be going up right about…” Just then, a massive, blinding flash appeared from the sky, forcing everyone to advert their eyes, followed by an earth shaking explosion. When the light subsided, a trail of a massive superlaser from the sky could be seen over the southeastern front. “The Ion Cannon network is online, however, we can only fire it once every two hours. We don’t have that time. The one closest to us could be taken out by a bombing run, but we’re going to have to destroy their anti aircraft guns if we’re going to take out all of the Metal Army forces before they activate and set up a base. For that, I’ll need two volunteers from your regiment.” “I will lend by lance to your cause,” said the Popstarian, bowing. ”Sounds like fun!” The Yoshi youth said. “Perfect, you two will do. Name and rank?” “Corporal Frob, and this is my aid, Corporal Bread, sole members of the 4th Specter Scout Squad. We are fresh from an operation on Mobius, and are ready to aid you, sire.” “Mobius… General Subsourian was recently there,” Scorch said, “Well, we’ve got to bypass their defenses, and disarm the A-A. You two will cover me. We must use stealth. Now, come on!” ”Yes, sire!” Frob snapped into a salute. “As long as there’s cookies in this,” Bread muttered, following behind. METAL ARMY POSITION – TRANSPORT 2 Scorch, Frob, and Bread moved quietly over the nearby ridge, around the firing Metal Army forces without being noticed, their small numbers masking their advance. They eventually came to the massive form of the invasionary transport. Next to it, two large cannons fired streams of bullets out at the sky, warding away SWD fighters nearby. Around the turrets, several defensive forces stood, including a Zaku gunner. “What weapons do you have?” Scorch asked. ”I have my mighty lance,” said Frob, “And a small sniper rifle.” “Oh! Oh! I can fire this!” said Bread, arming his, and pointing it off in a random direction. “NO!” shouted Scorch, snatching the gun away, “You’ll blow our cover! Keep silent, and make every shot count!” Frob armed his rifle, and aimed at the head of one of the Zakus manning the turrets. He fired, and the monoeye of the gunner exploded, and the limb body fell from the seat. The three Dalek defenders took notice, but not in long enough to respond to Scorch firing down on them with his ARC battlerifle. Then, a Dom Brute charged at the group, supported by two Gelgoog Elites. Frob stabbed at one of the Gelgoogs with his lance, running him through, while Scorch shot the second one in the head with his side arm. Bread jumped up on top of the Dom Brute’s head, and ground pounded it. The head was rammed into it’s torso, and the body sparked, exploding. Scorch tossed several grenades at the now defenseless second A-A turret, and it went up like a torch. “We won! WE WON!” Bread shouted, while Frob set his lance on his back. “1st ARC Command to Skywing 7, you are clear. Target has been set on HUD.” ”Rodger that, command, target locked. Preparing bombing of target. Cover your ears, it’s about to get loud down there!” “What is-“ Bread was interrupted as three massive bombers streaked by, carpet-bombing the massive transport. The entire hull went up in flames, and within ten chaoic seconds, the ship was crushed down into rubble. “Well, that takes care of one, but what about the other, sire?” Frob asked Scorch. “Ok, first, call me ‘sir,” said Scorch, “I’m your commander, not your king.” “Yes, sire!” said Frob. Scorch sighed, and continued. “Look here.” Scorch pulled out his PS, and gave a satellite overview of the battlefield. From the west, hundreds of tanks began bearing down on the third transport from Easton, cutting through their position with massive Metal Slug Annihilators and even a hulking Metal Slug Godslayer, one of the largest tanks ever created. “So, we are victorious,” said Frob. “Yes, but the battle’s not over yet,” Scorch said, “I’m requisitioning you as my personal honor guard. We’ve got a lot of work to do before we drive the Metal Army off of our planet.” ”Of course, sire!” Frob snapped a salute. “Umm… Sir, does this mean I get cookies?” said Bread. “…This may be longer than I thought…” Scorch muttered. TO BE CONTINUED |
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| Sneezier | Jan 27 2009, 07:42 PM Post #3 |
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Luigi Approves!
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Shortly before Scorch arrived to the Chai Kingdom. Sneezier flew his STAR-ORM the nearest city to the Yoshi Bodyguards HQ, Yoshitropolis, one of the main cities of Star World. A hi-tech city under seige, he won't let those robots caused more destruction to this planet. 1-3: The Popstarian and the Pokemon Yoshitropolis-Egg Park Street On the streets of Yoshitropolis, all hell broke loose, overturned cars, endless amounts of gunfire exchanged each other, and bodies littered all over the streets. Topper reached the frontlines first via warp pipe system. He got by jumping out. A Dom's Bazooka Round blew it, leaving him stranded in battle. Topper: Carp, there goes my only ticket out of this city. Three Dom Brutes then surrounded him with their melee weapons, a beam saber, a ball and chain, and Power Fists. Power Fist Dom Brute: You won't survive, puny meatbag. Topper: I read that as Power Box at first. The Dom with the Ball and chain launched the spiky ball toward the fighting pokemon but Topper slides under the weapon. Ball and Chain Dom Brute: No fair, your suppose to stay still! Topper: No way, boltbrain! Topper then does a blaze kick in a form a sweep kick thus tripping the Dom and overheating the leg repulsors. He then tore off the spiky ball from the chain then throws it at the Beam Saber Dom but the Dom sliced it in half. Topper used agility to get very close to the Saber Dom. He grabbed the bulky robot then Seismic Tossed him into a fuel truck, exploding both the truck and the said Dom. The Power Fist Dom then punched Topper from behind and sends him flying into a bus. The Dom Brute walked over the injured Topper. The fists glows red at full power. Power Fist Dom Brute: Say Goodnight! Before he could land the final blow, a laser vulcan striked the Dom in the head from the left side, blew into molten slag. Topper look to the left to who saved him from being beaten into a pulp. The STAR-ORM arrived to the city just in time. The red capped mecha landed in front of Topper. Sneezier: Whew, I made it in the nick of time. Topper: Thanks. Topper rubs the back of head. It felt sore from the fist's impact. Topper: That's-a gonna leave a mark. No wonder they call Dom "Brutes". Sneezier: You can worry about that later. Right now, we have a city to save. The STAR-ORM picked up Topper then hovered toward the main square where most of the fighting occured. To be continued.... |
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Topmonhit
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Jan 27 2009, 07:47 PM Post #4 |
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I just realized since I edit my characters' stuff in your parts, Sneezier, you posting your parts is boring because I already saw iiiiit. |
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| Subsourian | Jan 27 2009, 07:54 PM Post #5 |
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Does that mean you don't want to see the next part? ![]() Since it pretty much entirely features your characters. |
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Topmonhit
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Jan 27 2009, 08:21 PM Post #6 |
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But you're making it, so why would I have to edit it? |
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| Subsourian | Jan 28 2009, 09:46 AM Post #7 |
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Blander
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Star World is in total war. The city of New Yoshitroplis has taken heavy hits by the massive invasion force of the Metal Army. In quick response, the SWD and Yoshi Bodyguard forces have taken the fighting to the streets of their own capitol, attempting to push the mechanized horrors out of their heartland. However, the stories of soldiers are not the only to be told in war. For outside New Yoshitroplis, on the Donut Plains, one pacifist will be forced into the very heart of conflict, forced to fight for the survival of himself and his friends. Chapter 1-4: The Flight of Oshy Gisho OH GEE LABS – YOSHI ISLAND WARZONE Oshy swung open the door to Oh Gee Labs, the ground shaking around him. Behind him, the a Tegan mecha and a large Metal Army pattern mech he recognized from his books as a Babi Sky Killer were in the middle of a deadlocked dogfight. Oshy ducked under the door, avoiding being seen, and ran into the dark labs. “What? Who’s there?” a familiar voice shouted. “Oshy!” screamed a female voice, which ran up to him, hugging him tight. It was Apricot; her face was pale from fear and the sheer shock of the sudden attack. “Apricot… Good to see you,” said Oshy, holding her close, “Professor Oh Gee, we need to get out of here. Where’s Testube?” “Bun bun!” The glove-like Testube said. “But where are we going to go?” asked Oh Gee, the familiar voice from before, “Our lab is the safest place on this island! With my new defense system, they’ll never get through!” ”Do you mean that bucket of water that was hanging over the door?” inquired Oshy skeptically, “Nevermind, look, I accessed the Yoshi Bodyguard Tactical Network before we left. Several invasion forces are going by this lab en route to attack New Yoshitroplis. We have to get out of here, now! There’s a refugee camp just south of here, we might be able to wait it out there!” “We should do what Oshy says,” said Apricot, “We’ve come too far to die like this.” “Bun bun!” said Testube. “Oh, fine!” said Oh Gee, “But if my brilliant defense system turns out to work, and this was all for nothing, I’m not gonna be happy!” DONUT PLAINS – WARZONE Oshy, Apricot, Testube, and Professor Oh Gee moved slowly through patches of light woods, using the firm roots to mask their steps. The echoing sounds of explosions and gunshots came from every direction, as well as the occasional squeal of a low flying fighter. Eventually, the group came to an open path, with seemed quiet for a while. Oshy took out his PFF, and checked the local area. ”The camp isn’t far,” said Oshy, “If we follow this trail, we might be able to-“ ”OSHY! LOOK OUT!” Apricot screamed, as Testube tackled him just in time for a Dom Brute’s rocket to stream by him. In the corner of his vision, several Daleks, a Dom Brute, and three lanced Gyan Knights moved up from a turn in the trail. Testube grabbed Oshy, and moved behind the cover of trees, just as several bolts from a railgun tore up the ground where the two were. “Professor! Don’t you have any inventions that could help us now?” shouted Apricot over the gunfire. ”No, I left the components for my defense system back in the lab!” shouted Oh Gee. “What do you have?” screamed Oshy. ”Well, I have my Mobile Beaker here, but I don’t see how that will-“ “Good enough!” Oshy said as he snatched the animated beaker out of his hands, and began to shake the beaker up. Oshy reeled his arm back, and tossed the now foaming concoction at the Metal Army position. The beaker exploded, sending a few of the forces backwards with the force of a grenade. “That got them!” said Oshy. “There’s still more!” said Apricot, “They’re coming this way!” Just then, an explosion hit from behind the Metal Army position, blasting the two remaining Gyan Knights into scrap metal. The hulking shape of a Metal Slug Annihilator, it’s main cannon smoking as its two massive heavy chain gun emplacements roared at the nearby forces. Just then, a Babi Sky killer strafed down, blasting the tank with missile rounds, piercing its armor and igniting the fuel tanks. The tank exploded in a fiery blast, knocking the four down as they adverted their eyed from the blinding flash. “We’re almost there! Come on!” Oshy shouted, as they followed the trail. DONUT PLAINS – NEARING YOSHI ISLAND SWD BASE OF OPERATIONS After several more miles down the trail, the four stopped for a short break, catching their breath from the exertion. The trees were giving way to a bigger plain, where explosions could be seen off in the distance, as well as the shape of a town-like structure. “I… Should have… Brought… My… Automatic walking device…” managed Professor Oh Gee. “We can’t stop long,” said Oshy, “We’re so close. If we don’t get there soon… I don’t even want to know what’s going to happen.” “Bun bun!” Testube yelled, pointing to a shape forming above them, getting bigger. The shape formed itself into a Metal Army troop transport, used to ferry strike forces from one point to another. This one was nearing their position. “We’ve got to move!” said Apricot. Testube picked up the exhausted Oh Gee, and followed Oshy and Apricot, who were holding hands as they made a dash down the plains. Behind then, the transport began to land, dispatching several Gelgoog Elites, their arm blades extended. There were six of them in whole, all bearing the black markings of the Obsidian Legion, the famed Metal Army force of shadow operations. With great speed, the Gelgoogs started toward Oshy, Apricot, and Oh Gee. The three attempted to pick up their stride, but could not match the tireless sprint of the Elites. Within ten seconds, the Obsidian Gelgoog Elites had closed the gab to a mere twenty-five feet, and were continuing to bridge the distance. So this is how it ends, thought Oshy. Not dying to save Apricot, not dying in a blaze of honor against Rexor, no, he was going to die running away, after all he had done for this universe, after all the villains he had defeated, this is how it would end. It wasn’t fair. It simply wasn’t- "Shore up the left flank!” came a voice from in front of him, not even fifty feet, “Take aim, FIRE! Keep firing until they see the glow of our barrels!” From a trench outside the refugee camp, SWD forces had taken up arms, and began firing from their entrenched positions onto the Gelgoogs. The Obsidian Elites, being of lighter armor to provide better stealth, crumbled under the fire of the gun emplacements, all falling to the ground within seven seconds of the first shot. Oshy, Apricot, and Testube, still carrying an exhausted Oh Gee, jumped over the line into the trench, and all nearly collapsed from exhaustion. Several soldiers supported them, and helped them walk to through the trenchline, through the SWD position. “In all my years, I have never seen anyone do that,” said the SWD soldier, “The camp’s not far, you’ll be safe there, for the time being. Well, at least safer than out there. We’ll have a medical team look at you before we ship you out.” “Thank… You.” Oshy managed, limping over the trenchline, into the row of SWD tents. He had survived, but for how much longer? Would he be safe from this war, or was he just delaying the inevitable. Oshy felt a twinge of hopelessness, as he realized, for once in a very long time, that this was one event he could have no impact in. He just hoped that Sneezier and the SWD could win this, or all they’ve fought for all these years would be lost. TO BE CONTINUED |
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Topmonhit
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Jan 28 2009, 10:22 AM Post #8 |
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Ah, yes, there hasn't been a story he didn't have an impact in for a while. |
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| Warlyte | Jan 28 2009, 09:05 PM Post #9 |
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Capsule J2
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You know, a lot of near-death scenes spend so much time on the suspense that you just know the character isn't going to die. Great example there. See, there needs to be a scene where it does that and the character DOES die. Or that they just don't think about the near-death experience or something. MUST BREAK CLICHE. |
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Korparl K. Kaport
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Jan 28 2009, 09:32 PM Post #10 |
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persindant of rub
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this story owns |
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