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| Just Across the Street; Chapter Ten: Reality of the Chosen One | |
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| Nehomee | Apr 2 2009, 05:49 PM Post #1 |
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I wrote ten chapters. They all failed. This is where I stopped. Write about what you think should happen! Enjoy. Just Across the Street Chapter Ten – Reality of the Chosen One By Naomi Wang Quick Summary: Judith and Naomi notice something strange in the house across from Judith’s. They investigate on the internet and discover the creature is called an Efira Allat, which has been spotted before. They call in the SSRUC, Scientists Supporting Rescue of Unidentified Creatures, who come in and destroy the creature. But the creature possesses Naomi’s body and then attacks Judith. The two go searching for more victims, and enter a nearby park. They find Zane and Adam, former schoolmates of Judith and Naomi. Zane and Adam find out that Judith and Naomi have been taken over by the Efira Allat and soon learn there is no cure, and the only way out is to kill them. Zane and Adam try to reach the true Efira Allat controlling their friends and manage to free them but then Zane, Naomi, and Judith are caught by the Efira Allat! Adam has been announced the “Chosen One” by the other Efira Allat and they threaten to decapitate Adam’s friends if he doesn’t help them take over the world! So what’s your answer? The Efira Allat asked, grinning at Adam, you work with us or we destroy your friend here, which will it be? Adam locked eyes with Zane. Adam broke contact first, sighing and closing his eyes. He opened them and glared at the wall behind the Efira Allat – he had trained himself not to look directly at the Efira Allat, especially not in their eyes or he’d lose his stomach again. “Fine, I’ll go with you freaks. But let go of my friends.” Very well, the three Efira Allat glanced at the wrapped up humans, first, tell your feisty friend that he cannot attack us or save you. Tell him to take his unconscious friends and go. And to never come back. Adam nodded slowly, noticing a small bite mark on one of the Efira Allat’s hand. Adam came to the conclusion that Zane had tried to bite the creature who had tried to capture him. “Zane, they’re going to untie you.” “Y-you can hear them?” Zane asked quietly, smirking, “Get real.” “I’m the Chosen One, Zane.” Adam explained, not meeting his eyes. “Chosen One? What are you – Harry Potter gone Asian? Adam, this isn’t a time to be joking around.” Zane grumbled, struggling at the ropes, “Defeat those freaks and let’s go!” “You saw them, Zane, we can’t! They’ll cut your head off!” Adam said quickly. “Do I look like I care?” Zane grumbled, letting out a cold laugh, “Don’t tell me you’ve turned on us.” “Zane, you have to take Judith and Naomi away from here. Don’t try and save me.” Adam muttered quietly, finally meeting Zane’s eyes. “You’re serious?” Zane growled, watching the Efira Allat untie him, “So you’re abandoning us.” Zane mumbled, “You’re getting with the Efira Allat, you know the humans are going to lose – so you’re choosing the winning side, is that it?!” Zane grabbed Naomi and Judith by the back of their shirts, “I’m leaving then.” Zane mumbled, dragging the two girls down the stairs slowly. Adam watched as his friend started to disappear, “Zane,” Adam called, Zane glanced back; “Don’t tell Naomi or Judith.” Adam said. Zane smiled but it didn’t reach his eyes, “I’d never do that.” Adam wondered if Zane was telling the truth or not. The eyes Zane had were empty and cold. Adam wondered what had happened. We will take our leave, come, Chosen One. The Efira Allat said as they saw Zane drag Judith and Naomi down the street. Adam started to head towards the stairs, the Efira Allat immediately began to laugh, foolish human, we do not take those useless methods to get around – we fly. Adam watched as the Efira Allat kicked off and floated through the ceiling. They motioned to him, Adam pushed off the ground, as if jumping, not really believing he could fly and then he slowly felt himself being pulled up, not coming down. Adam glanced down and gasped, he had flown through the ceiling without realizing it. He looked around for the Efira Allat, who were heading in the direction of Albany, Adam stretched his arms out like a super hero but he just continued to sail higher. Adam thought about letting himself just drift all the way out of the Earth’s atmosphere, but then he saw the Efira Allat glance back at him with deadly eyes. Adam started to propel himself, kicking up and down and pointing his body in the direction of the Efira Allat. Slowly, he started to move. Chosen One, just focus on one area, and you will move towards the area. One of the Efira Allat explained. Adam focused on one of the Efira Allat and started to move towards it without another thought. Soon the Efira Allat and the Chosen One were heading out of Albany, Berkeley, and into Richmond. Adam felt a sharp pain in his chest as he realized what was happening. He was leaving; he was going to go with the Efira Allat and might not ever come back. He began to miss everyone a lot – his friends, his family, and all the people in the world that he would have to kill. Adam realized that being the Chosen One was extremely painful; he had to make life-threatening decisions. Adam wanted to fly to London and tell J. K. Rowling exactly what it was like to be in the position of the Chosen One. Zane didn’t have time to scream in frustration or in pain; he had to drag his two unconscious friends far away. Zane stopped at the park that he had been in earlier looking for a baseball. How pitiful, Zane wondered how a baseball and a movie would have seemed so important to him yet now; it seemed the most important thing was…Zane thought for a while, what was important? Sure, saving Naomi and Judith. But wasn’t that done? All he had to do was bring Naomi and Judith to the nearest…Hey, wasn’t that Grant? Zane froze, what was Grant doing here? Zane watched as Grant noticed him too and walked over. “Hi, Zane, I didn’t know you were – why are you holding onto those two girls?” “Grant you’ll never believe what happened! These creatures called the Efira Allat are –” Zane stopped, “Why are you here? Don’t you live in Oakland?” Grant sighed and looked down, “I guess there’s no point in hiding it from you. You and Adam were assigned to research the Efira Allat, right? Well, I’m part of the SSRUC; I’ve been part of this group for a while. That’s why I’m here. My leader informed me that there might be an Efira Allat around.” Zane stared at Grant, “WHAT?!” Grant looked up, “Well, yea. Why do you think that I never had time to hang out after school? I had to always go to the group meetings.” “Me and Adam assumed it was because you had no life.” Zane mumbled, “Well, how do we save Adam? He’s been captured by the Efira Allat and they say he’s the Chosen One or something! What do we do?” “We have to get these two to safety.” Grant motioned towards the unconscious Naomi and Judith. Grant and Judith dragged the two to Zane’s house. “Some of the side effects of the Efira Allat living in our towns is most adults will turn to Zombies!” Grant sighed, “You’re parents are probably just sitting at their desks at work and not moving at all. The Efira Allat uses this so they can control children’s minds and such.” “Okay, what do we do now?” Zane asked as they put Naomi and Judith on the couch. “I don’t know. I was never prepared for this stuff.” Grant mumbled, scratching his head. “Damn.” Zane bit his lip, “Then let’s just go save Adam! We can leave Naomi and Judith here, right?” “I don’t know, Zane!” Grant turned towards the exit, “We have to go after Adam though, quickly!” Grant dashed out the door, Zane following closely. “Why? Is something bad going to happen to Adam?” “The Efira Allat will take him into their parallel universe and we won’t be able to follow him! Time goes really slowly in that universe, so if we lose Adam, we won’t be alive when he comes back!” “But that means…” Zane huffed, trying to keep up with Grant’s abnormal speed. “That means the end of the world.” Grant confirmed. I just realized that Adam still has the power to fly. Maybe it must be something. o.0 I make Zantrax into this evil, cold Sasuke. Sorry Zane. Maybe it's cuz you're just so pimp XD Except not really. Wish me well on my Paris trip! Bye. |
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