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Just Across the Street; Chapter Nine: The Chosen One's Choice
Topic Started: Apr 2 2009, 05:45 PM (73 Views)
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Just Across the Street
Chapter Nine – The Chosen One’s Choice
By Naomi Wang

Quick Summary: Judith and Naomi notice something strange in the house across from Judith’s. They investigate on the internet and discover the creature is called an Efira Allat, which has been spotted before. They call in the SSRUC, Scientists Supporting Rescue of Unidentified Creatures, who come in and destroy the creature. But the creature possesses Naomi’s body and then attacks Judith. The two go searching for more victims, and enter a nearby park. They find Zane and Adam, former schoolmates of Judith and Naomi. Zane and Adam find out that Judith and Naomi have been taken over by the Efira Allat and soon learn there is no cure, and the only way out is to kill them. Zane and Adam try to reach the true Efira Allat controlling their friends but then Zane and Adam see the creatures and are now defenseless, as the Efira Allat are closing in on them…

The two creatures grinned at the defenseless humans, one mutual thought running through all the heads in the room: This is where it ends.

Adam held his stomach and swallowed as best he could, looking up at the oncoming Efira Allat. I’m going to just eat you up, wimpy human! The Efira Allat exclaimed. “Dude, please, I’m not wimpy.” Adam said, holding back the pain he felt from his stomach, “I’m frigging sexy!” Adam yelled, jumping into the air and slamming his leg down on the Efira Allat’s head. Adam stumbled backwards as the creature went limp, “Uh oh…” Adam turned to the corner and puked until he lost conscious.

Zane focused on the creature attacking him. Zane wobbled and tried to see clearer. Then he stumbled backwards as the creature gave him a slight push. Zane fell down the flight of stairs as he heard the Efira Allat screech, forcing Zane to cover his ears and stumble down the rest of the stairs. Zane hurried out to the street, calling for help. He saw Naomi and Judith, unconscious but they seemed normal enough…Zane cautiously walked over to them, poking Naomi for good measure. He sighed as the headache grew. Naomi shifted slightly and Zane kicked her hard, she sat up quickly, Zane saw the dark brown in her eyes before she fainted from exhaustion. Zane could tell that the Efira Allat had used the two past their limits. Zane couldn’t get Judith’s front door unlocked, so he dragged the two bodies to the backyard, where he put them in the unlocked tool shed. Then his mind rushed to Adam, “Oh no!” Zane glanced around a little too quickly because he immediately fell from dizziness. The headache and bad eyesight were causing Zane to have a terrible time walking and even thinking right. Zane closed his eyes and breathed deeply before trying to get up again. He stumbled backwards and fell over his own feet. Then Zane looked around, no, they weren’t his own feet he had tripped on – they belonged to another Efira Allat!

He can hear us! The Efira Allat exclaimed to his semi-conscious friend, pointing at Adam, this human has been granted the power to speak our language! The Efira Allat poked the unconscious boy, the prophecy! The prophecy! It states that when we are regaining our world, the Chosen One will meet us and help destroy those useless humans. But it will come in a form unimaginable and will speak our language, that is how we will know if it is the Chosen One or not! This is it! This thing – this human is the Chosen One!

The other Efira Allat looked up and rubbed his head, we must train him to grow strong before showing our leader the Chosen One.

Yes! We must train him well! Adam opened his eyes, blinking hard as he saw two Efira Allat creatures trying to give him a drink. The barely conscious Adam sipped the liquid without another thought. This drink will make you stronger, and then we will train you even more, Chosen One.

Adam tried to keep his eyes open as he watched the Efira Allat talk without opening their mouths. “G-get real, freaks,” Adam mumbled, managing to stand up, using the wall for support, “What makes you think I’m going to work with you? Zane will be here soon and beat you guys up so badly that –”But Adam stopped, hadn’t Zane been fighting alongside Adam? Where was he now? Adam looked around but couldn’t find a trace of Zane.

Because we have your friends right here! The Efira Allat explained as another Efira Allat pulled out a tightly bound Zane, Naomi, and Judith.

Adam almost sighed with relief; he could see that Naomi and Judith were no longer possessed but unconscious still. “What do you want me to do?” Adam asked, focusing back on the situation.

Fight with us till we destroy most of the human race! If you help us, you will choose who will be spared and who will die. But you only may pick a certain amount of people. All three Efira Allat said.

“And if I don’t?” Adam asked back uncertainly.

Then we’ll behead your friends! Starting with this young man! The three Efira Allat said in unison, grabbing Zane by the top of his hair so his neck was exposed. Zane and Adam watched in fright as the Efira Allat who was holding Zane with one hand, held his other hand close to Zane’s neck and the nails on the creature’s hand began to extend and sharpen in an amazingly short time! So what’s your answer? The Efira Allat asked, grinning at Adam, you work with us or we destroy your friend here, which will it be?


pick the right one. pick the right one. pick the right one.....awww.
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