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Just Across the Street; Chapter Five: The Cure
Topic Started: Apr 2 2009, 05:11 PM (100 Views)
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I got hit by a red bull today. In the head. So please excuse any mistakes in my life today...Im not one hundred percent here. Red Bull for the lose.

Just Across the Street
Chapter Five – The Cure
By Naomi Wang

Quick Summary: Judith and Naomi notice something strange in the house across from Judith’s. They investigate on the internet and discover the creature is called an Efira Allat, which has been spotted before. They call in the SSRUC, Scientists Supporting Rescue of Unidentified Creatures, who come in and destroy the creature. But the creature possesses Naomi’s body and then attacks Judith. The two go searching for more victims, and enter a nearby park. They find Zane and Adam, former schoolmates of Judith and Naomi. Zane and Adam have no idea of what is going on but are about to find out.

“Hey, isn’t that Naomi and Judith over there?” Zane asked as Adam climbed a tree to get a better look. “Huh, that’s weird, I always knew Judith lived near here but I wonder what they’re doing here!”

“Yea, Judith doesn’t seem like the type to go outside a lot, does she?” Adam laughed as he climbed higher up the tree.

“Let’s call them over. Naomi! Judith! Hey, you –”Zane stopped waving his hand, “What are they…?”

“Did they just freaking eat that squirrel?!” Adam practically screamed, jumping up and down on the branch, causing leaves to fall into Zane’s hair.

“Hey look, they’re coming over here!” Zane said, “What’s with their eyes…?”

“Zane, get up here, now.” Adam said quickly, reaching down a hand to help Zane up. “I don’t know, but I’ve got a feeling that isn’t the Judith and Naomi we know.” Adam said as Zane got onto the lowest branch. “Hey, Zane hurry up, they’re getting closer!” Adam said, climbing up another three branches.

“Hey, Adam, wait up –”Zane said, trying to climb onto the second branch.

Then he felt a painful tug at his leg. Zane felt tight claws grip into his legs. Zane bit his lip as the pain spread through his leg. Zane glanced down as he heard Adam scream, “ZANE! LOOK OUT!” Zane gasped as Adam came jumping down from a higher branch and slammed his feet against Judith’s face, causing her to let go of Zane’s leg. “Take that, whatever you are!” Adam screamed, grabbing onto a lower branch and kicking at Naomi and Judith, who were now growling at the two boys.

“Adam hurry, let’s climb higher!” Zane said, helping Adam up and the two continued up to higher branches. Zane and Adam watched as Judith and Naomi clawed at the tree from below. Zane sighed in relief, “Good, they can’t climb up here and hurt us.” Zane stared at his leg, apart from some scratches, there was nothing serious. “What are they?” Zane asked quietly, sitting down on the branch.

“They certainly aren’t nice.” Adam said quietly, “And they’re not Naomi and Judith.”

Zane sighed, “What do we do, Adam?”

Adam shrugged, “I don’t know…man and I had so many things I didn’t do yet!” Adam stood up and pointed down at the creatures circling the tree, “Haters!” Adam screamed, tossing a pinecone down at them. He started to toss more and more down at the creatures.

“Adam stop! You’re making them mad!” Zane warned Adam.

“Zane, I don’t know about you, but I’m not dying without a fight.” Adam said, shaking the branch above theirs, causing more pinecones to fall.

“Adam, don’t forget that those things down there are inside Naomi and Judith’s body!” Zane said, standing up as well.

Adam kept shaking the branch, “I don’t care! Naomi and Judith will understand!”

“Aw man, Adam.” Zane slumped down on the branch, “What are our parents going to think? What if we get charged with murder by pinecones? And what about school? I worked so hard on that –” Zane stood up, shaking the branch they were standing on, “That’s it! Adam!” Zane grabbed Adam by the shoulders and shook him, “Our project! To search those so-called fake creatures! Ours were the Efira Allat! That must be what’s taking over Judith and Naomi’s body!”

“A-are you sure?” Adam asked uncertainty. Adam, unlike Zane, had totally forgotten about the project and hadn’t even studied one bit on it.

“Don’t you remember? The green eyes? The unbearable hunger? Easily angered and once it finds prey, it won’t let it go?” Zane said, grinning and pointing down at the creatures below, “That’s it! The Efira Allat! Wow, a real live Efira Allat!”

“Okay, so we know what it is. Great. What now? How do you defeat it? What’s the cure?” Adam asked, glancing down as the creatures attempted to shake the tree, “Don’t worry, we’ll save you guys! Zane did his work! So doing your homework does amount to something! Zane knows the cure and we’re going to save you guys! Hang in there, okay?” Adam yelled down as the creatures paid no attention to him. “Alright Zane, tell me what we do to cure them.” Adam said, turning to Zane.

“Adam, we…” Zane gasped, “Adam…” Zane stared hard down at his former schoolmates who were now taken over by some creature who, until just now, Zane had thought didn’t even exist. Zane locked eyes with his friend, “Adam, there is no cure.”


No. Not 'The Climb' the cure!! Rawr.
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