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Just Across the Street; Chapter Three: Possessed
Topic Started: Apr 2 2009, 05:06 PM (52 Views)
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Just Across the Street
Chapter Three – Possessed
By Naomi Wang

Quick Summary: Judith and Naomi notice something strange in the house across from Judith’s. They investigate on the internet and discover the creature is called an Efira Allat, which has been spotted before. They call in the SSRUC, Scientists Supporting Rescue of Unidentified Creatures, who come in and destroy the creature. But Naomi can still feel its eyes, as if it’s watching them.

“So it’s done? End of story?” Naomi asked, collapsing on the bed. “It’s over? Did this really happen?”

Judith didn’t like that Naomi was just asking questions, not relieved that it was finally over. They didn’t have to live in fear. “Yes, Naomi,” Judith said, sitting down on her desk chair, “It’s finally over. We can live our lives.”

Naomi stared at the ceiling, not moving, “If the guy from SSRUC finally terminated the Efira Allat, then…” Naomi sat up quickly, glancing at Judith, “Then tell me why I still feel its eyes on my back?” 'I can still feel its eyes, as if it’s watching our every more…' Naomi shivered as Judith cast an uneasy glance at her. 'That scream…' Naomi sighed, lying back down on the bed, looking up at the heavy metal cross that hung from Judith’s bedroom ceiling, 'those deadly eyes, watching us…' Naomi covered her eyes with her arm, 'I’m starting to believe they didn’t actually kill the Efira Allat and that it’s still there.' Naomi almost groaned aloud, 'who am I kidding? I saw and heard it all. It’s gone, I need to relax, I need to calm down. I’m just over worrying and freaking Judith out.'

Judith watched as Naomi lay motionless on her bed, 'Naomi is starting to worry me,' Judith admitted to herself, 'I knew she was scared about the Efira Allat, but now she feels as if it’s watching us?!' Judith scowled; 'she’s probably playing a mean prank on me, go figure. Typical Naomi, trying to get me back for the stuff I do to her.'

Naomi felt the darkness enclose around her, like a tight blanket. Naomi began to feel claustrophobic, 'what’s happening?' Naomi tried to move, 'it’s like I can’t move! I can’t control my own body! Wait, what’s happening?! Move! Move!' Naomi ordered her body, 'the darkness seemed to come even closer, No, no, please, no…'

Judith sighed; 'Naomi can be so stupid and annoying sometimes; using the Efira Allat as an excuse to scare me. Yea right, I’m not going to fall for that.' Judith glanced as Naomi opened her mouth, her arm still covering her eyes. Naomi let out small sound, Judith frowned, “Alright, jokes over, Naomi. It’s not funny. Look the Efira Allat is gone; defeated. We can go on with life now. So stop worrying about it-”Judith gasped as Naomi sat up and glared at her. “Naomi, you–”Judith stared back at Naomi. But it wasn’t Naomi. It was like someone had taken over Naomi’s body. The girl who sat on her bed wasn’t Naomi, Judith decided. Judith didn’t know who she was, but this was way too real and freaky for her. Judith knew those eyes, those eyes that she had seen from across the street. Judith stared at those blank, green eyes. They weren’t the natural green; they glowed and showed the intent to kill. Judith tried to back away from the person on her bed – the Efira Allat, but she was in her desk chair and all she did was back into the desk. The Efira Allat smirked and stood up. All Judith could do was say loudly, in a pleading voice, “No, wait, no–”


Judith being scared? Wow, OOC much? Heck ja.
[Jes. I went back and edited ALL the italics crap. you're welcome.
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