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Chapter 15 of The Nameless Series; Chapter Fifteen: Prison Pound Magic
Topic Started: Mar 22 2009, 10:08 PM (67 Views)
Nehomee
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The long awaited chapter is out!!! [Not really....] I've been super duper busy! (Learning how to drive....mychonny) Anyway, I have no idea where Im going to go from here....send in some ideas!
My head is filled with South Park and Family Guy. So my bad if spelling and bad grammar appear...worse than usual. Onto the Adam/Zane chapter!! AWAY!

Adam sat up, rubbing his back. "Ow...what the -?" Adam blinked and glanced around, "Zane? Hello? Old man? Anyone?" Adam stood up, dusting off his knees. "Hello?"
"Stop talking so loud...jeez." Zane rolled over from his spot on the ground, "Help me up, Adam."
"W-what's wrong with you?" Adam squatted over Zane. "Zane, you're eyes are all bloodshot...are you...high?" Adam shuffled back a little, "Hey, I don't want any of that! Just tell me where we are so -"
"I'm not high you doushebag!" Zane spat, turning to face Adam from his spot on the ground. "I've been drugged! So have you!"
"No. I'm fine." Adam did five push ups and five jumping jacks just to prove his point. "Maybe I'm immune."
"Maybe you're just too stupid and drugged up for it to affect you!" Zane said back quickly. "Help me up, I'm breathing in dirt."
"Fine, but you owe me." Adam leaned Zane against the wall. "Woah." Adam looked around, "Where are we?" Adam felt the ground, it was no longer cold hard cement, but wet grass. Adam stood up, "How...how did we get here?"
"Adam, don't leave!" Zane urged, Adam glanced at him.
"Hey, you're fine!" Adam backed away, "You're a liar!"
"No. Adam, listen, this place...the place we were in before, it's called the Prison Pound. It has this power...this scary power...it will send you to places, vivid, seemingly real places. But you cannot leave this small area we stand in. If you leave the area around these trees," Zane motioned to the trees surronding them. "You will be tortured." Zane sighed, "That's what happened to the Old Man. He...he tried to escape. He went mad."
"Mad?" Adam gasped, "He...he's dead?"
"You were knocked out for six whole days. Me and the Old Man kept getting sent to random places."
"Like?"
"The Circus, a studio, a house..." Zane gritted his teeth, "They'll drive you mad with these visions...they're so real...yet..." Zane closed his eyes, "So fake."
"It's real alright." Adam sighed, "So what do we do? Wait until the visions go away?"
"Pretty much." Zane sat down.
"How long do these visions last?"
"Usually...around five days." Zane glanced around, "See any fruit trees or something we could eat or drink?" Zane bit his lip, "I haven't had anything to eat since that house I visited a few days ago."
"God...we're going to starve to death or go mad?" Adam sunk to the grass, "We could eat the grass."
"Doesn't work. Tastes bad." Zane shrugged it off, "No big deal. Eventually, when we get out of the vision, the guards might feed us. Or at least let us have a drink of water."
"That sounds terrible..." Adam hugged his knees, "How...isn't this illegal? Part of that 'no cruel or unusual punishment' rule?"
"Wake up, Adam. They captured us, did terrible things, and we have powers. I don't think we can apply to those rules."
"Screw this." Adam stood up and stretched, "We can't wait out here forever, I might die." Adam glanced at Zane, "You coming? We can get answers...somehow."
Zane rolled his eyes, "You can't out-do the system. No one can."
"I can. We have to break down those trees." Adam paced back and forth, "You ready?"
Zane stood up, "Alright, it's better than sitting and starving." Zane rubbed his hands together, smirking, "Where do we start?"
Adam pointed at a nearby tree, "Hopefully, we can get out soon."
"Or, we can die trying." Zane said carefully.
Adam winced, "Right, that too."

I have to go now. My daddy's mad at me :( cuz I snuck out yesterday......long story. Anyway, have fun! Enjoy this terrible chapter! And comment about what you think should happen?
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elementalpenguin

its good, but..... make us break out soon, cus we havent even used our powers yet. and u need to make me kick someones butt to make up for theo brainwashing me.
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Adamlicious

im sick of being stuck in jail
jail is boring
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Nehomee
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So is your mom, but you dont hear me complaining, Adam. [BAM]
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