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God’s Hand pt 1.
Topic Started: Mar 15 2009, 12:54 PM (83 Views)
Grant
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God’s Hand pt 1.

The plains in the land of Tin were vast. Although most of the land was flowing zelora, a type of fern, there were places where the flora was violent, and could kill you if you weren’t careful. This was where Cindal Aldera found himself. He was being chased by other boys, who were 4 years younger than him but almost a foot taller.

They were in his class because some genius decided that height, age, and grades should be averaged to decide what class you were in. Although his grades were average, he was very short for his age. About half the average height for his age. He was bullied all the time by other kids because he was an easy target. This time they had decided to lead him into a patch of poisonous plants.

He didn’t pay attention to the plants, running blindly, and wound up entangled in something. He felt something biting into his ankles, and realized he was in the grips of an extremely poisonous plant. To make it worse, he was hanging upside-down it easy reach of the bullies, and he wouldn’t be able to do anything.

They had found him. He was screwed. The boys began laughing and surrounded the helpless kid. They swung punches at him, laughing as he tried to dodge them. In the past, he had just taken it, but he was sick of it this time. The was going to kill them all. He was going to kill everybody that chuckled at him because of his height. And although he didn’t know it when he promised himself, three coincidences would make that possible. The first was that there happened to be a teacher following the boys because they hadn’t done there homework. The second was that he was one of the five most powerful magicians to have been born up to that point in time. the third was to happen a few years later.

The second Cindal swore to kill them all, something happened within him. The magic that had been building up in him all his life was awakened. Had it all been released in a second, his body would have been ripped to shreds and the whole land of tin would have been flattened. Lucky for everybody, he had a target, and instead 5 bolts of lightning shot out of him, turning his attackers to ash. The plant, sensing the boys power, lowered him to the ground, slowly. The boy was to shocked by the 5 piles of ash surrounding him to notice the plant lowering him to the ground.

Had there not been a teacher watching this occurrence, the magic may have sealed itself again, or the boy may have gone around killing everyone until mage hunters killed him. However, the teacher recognized the boys power, and knew that he was something more important than even the whole province they lived in.

“What did I do?” Cindal asked the teacher.
“You proved that you are something special.” The teacher replied.

The walk back to there town seemed to take an eternity. Cindal wasn’t sure what “something special” meant, but he was sure it wasn’t good. Was he going to be killed in the village square? Was he going to be sent to the capital of the land of Tin, to work in labor camps? He knew that once somebody had killed five people and was sent to the capital to face unimaginable tortures. Were five boys different from five men?

Cindal waited in the room outside the mayors office, and after a few hours of talking, the teacher came out and said “Pack your bags. We go to the capital tomorrow.” Cindal’s legs felt like lead. He was going to be punished. But how?
Edited by Grant, Mar 15 2009, 01:32 PM.
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elementalpenguin

its good, but very repetitive
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