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Chapter 10 of nameless series; Chapter Ten: Unraveling the Truth
Topic Started: Feb 20 2009, 05:40 PM (88 Views)
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"Naomi's stories are like the way a rock rolls down a hill...eventually, it loses all it's speed and it dies off and gets eaten by rockeaters." - Michelle
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"Why do you want our powers?!" Ryan asked, really confused.
"Why don't I?" The sub shrugged, "Isn't it that humans have always wanted things they can't have. Like to fly, to swim as fast underwater creatures - "
"Michael Phelps can!" Ryan quickly said.
"He isn't human, is he?" The sub growled, "They want to do things that their bodies aren't physically made for. Ever since humans came to Earth, they have been pushing the limits of everything. The enviroment, the animals, and all they want is more and more power. They are power hungry creatures."
"Like leeches? Are you coming us to leeches?!" Ryan asked, outraged.
"She never said we were like leeches." Grant turned slowly to Ryan. "Where did you hear that she called us leeches?"
"As I was saying," The sub snapped her fingers to get their attention, "Having powers...it isn't so great, is it?"
"I like it, thanks." Ryan rebutted.
"Hm, I'm sure you're going through that phase. But eventually..." The sub shook her head and chuckled, "You're body won't be able to support your powers. You'll have the powers, but you won't have a body."
"So you're helping us?" Ryan asked hopefully.
"No," The sub blinked, "You'll be like a zombie or a walking corpse -"
"Correction, isn't a zombie a walking corpse?" Grant cut in.
"Shut the hell up!" The sub growled, "The point is, you'll die regardless in your enemies arms or in your own." She narrowed her eyes, "Because humans are so stupid and greedy."
"Hey, I am not stupid. You'd better take that back!" Grant glared. "You're just assuming that all humans are like that!"
"Yea, I think it just applies to freakin Americans!" Ryan said. "Everyone else isn't like that, are they?"
"Not helping." Grant mumbled, "Look, so you're going to take our powers just because we have them. Just because humans - in general - have been greedy?" Grant frowned, "How is that fair?!"
"It isn't!" Ryan waved his hands in front of Grant, "That's why they're the bad guys, Grant. Get a clue."
"Get a life and shut up." Grant said back. "What will happen to us when you remove our powers?" Grant turned to the sub.
"Oh, you'll just be a souless body walking around..." The sub shrugged, "It's actually for the better."
"But wait, don't you have powers?" Ryan shook his head, "You have powers, you're one of those stupid hypocrites!"
"No, I don't have powers." The sub grumbled, "I have weapons."
"Like batman?" Ryan suggested.
"Shut up!" The sub said loudly, some students that were late for class hurreid by quickly. "Weapons that will save Earth." The sub pulled out what looked like a badly made gun, "Ever seen one of these?"
"Uh...no." Ryan said blankly. "It looks like it was made by a three year old."
"Ryan, I don't think you're helping!" Grant mumbled.
"Well, then, let me help you understand the meaning of this weapon." The sub pointed the gun at Grant, then pulled out another one and pointed it at Ryan. "Say goodbye, boys."

"When did you get so...emo?" Adam asked, looking up at Naomi, who was grinning over him.
"Get him into a prision." Naomi motioned for some of her workers, ignoring Adam. "He shall wait there til his friends arrive." Naomi glared at her wristwatch, "Where is Theo and his apprentince? What's that kid's name...?" Naomi shook her head, "Get Adam out of my sight."
"Hey, since when was Theo - " Adam was shut up as some workers grabbed him and started dragging him away. "Let go!" Adam tried floating, but the workers held on tight. "Dang, since when was Berkeley High a cult?" The workers pushed Adam into a prision cell. He sat down on a bench and looked around; there was nothing in the room except the bench, a bed, and a table. Adam sighed as the door was double locked. "How am I supposed to eat and pee?" He banged on the door, but there was no answer. "Man, this sucks! Let me out!"
Theo, Zane, and the sixth grader landed in Naomi's office. "You're late." Naomi stated quietly. "Oh, it's you....I never expected Zane to be here. I thought you were going to bring all three of them?" Naomi looked at Theo.
"They didn't want to." Theo shrugged.
"The sub is taking care of them." The sixth grader said.
"I want to join!" Zane said loudly.
Naomi glared at him, "Okay then..." Naomi sighed, "You guys can go relax, and show Zane around. You still have control over him, correct?" Naomi looked at Theo.
"For now, yes." Theo looked at Zane, "Let's go, Zane."
"I want to join!" Zane shouted this time.
Naomi covered her ears, "Shut him up! Learn how to control that mind trick, Theo!"
"Sure thing." Theo called as they walked out.
Zane found himself in the same cell with Adam. He blinked and waited until his eyes became adjusted to the dark before noticing that Adam was in the only bed. He glanced out the high, small window in the cell, he saw the full moon shining brightly. "Ugh, where am I?" Zane rubbed his head, realizing his head was throbbing.
"You're one crazy guy." Adam said quietly.
Zane jumped, "You're awake?!" Adam nodded, Zane stood up and brushed himself off. "Tell me first!"
"You were being controlled by Theo." Adam said tonelessly.
"Theo? What the - "
"Long story." Adam cut in.
"So where are we?"
"In a prision cell of those crazy scientists." Adam answered, sitting up.
"So what did I miss?"
"Pretty much everything." Adam leaned aganist the wall, "The weirdest thing is, this cell has powers."
"It's just a cell. It can't do anything to us." Zane said slowly.
"Yea, it can steal some of your powers." Adam floated about five feet before slowly landing down. "I can't go any higher."
"Well," Zane took a step forward, but when he looked back, it was like he had taken one big step. "Oh no."
"It can't be too bad. They're going to operate on us." Adam sighed, "They're going to take away our powers."
"If this cell doesn't take away ours first..." Zane muttered.
"Zane? Adam?" They both turned towards the open door of the cell, "What are you guys doing here? Aren't you guys supposed to be fighting crime and saving the world?" The person asked quietly, motioning for them to follow him.
They saw his strange figure in the dim light coming from the hallway lights, "Wait, why are you here?" Zane asked quietly, stepping out of the cell slowly, almost at once, he felt powerful again.
"I'm here to save you." The old man answered.
"Aren't you dead?" Adam asked, staring hard at the old man.
"No...I don't think so." The old man's English was hard to understand, his accent was just so thick! Adam couldn't help but smile though; he knew it wasn't the imposter. No one could pull off that accent.
"And where do you think you're going?" Adam, the old man, and Zane turned, oh no.

The end??? Sorry if this is so bad it hurts your eyes. You can click back and erase it from your mind. I gave Ryan more lines today, i realized. My brother's been screaming his head off and it's hard to think. And i have a mirgaine [yayz....] I think a girl in my math class stole my book :ermm: but I don't know how she could've stolen it without ninja powers. :blink: That's it. Updates soon? I know it's long, it's not my fault TT.TT
As Zan-thrax would say, "Critique, please!"
P.S. - don't worry, Ryan. We all know you have a life :D
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Nehomee
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Stupid spell check is always one step behind. Prision is spelled "P-R-I-S-O-N!"
Whatever. I'll change it later...maybe
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Grant
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is she asian or an asian wannabe (like me)


hehe not nearly as emo as before.
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Adamlicious

the 6th grader is meredith
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