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LN8 8: Many Shadows
Topic Started: Feb 20 2009, 11:15 AM (81 Views)
Grant
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I decided to split this into 8 and 9, so 9 should be out later today.

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LN8 8: Many Shadows

I opened my eyes. I was watching the fight again. This time it was Zane. The shadow flew towards him, but he deflected it with an Ice shield. He shot four ice bolts at it in quick succession. The first one missed, but the second one hit it and then the third froze it. The ice shattered and the thing charged at Zane. Zane suddenly was wearing a layer of ice over him. It looked like armor. And he had a huge lance made of ice. He stabbed the creature with it, and it screamed. I couldn’t hear anything but I instinctively knew it screamed. And then it seemed to shatter. The shards flew everywhere and then came back together as.. a shadow of Zane!
The shadow lance hit the shocked Zane on the chest, shattering the ice there. Zane flew backwards, and suddenly there was Theo! He threw a sphere of metal at it and the thing withdrew, giving Zane time to get up. And then Theo was past, back to fighting his own monster. Zane and the shadow began fighting faster and faster. I saw Zane had a weak point on his leg on the opposite side of the lance. How I could tell I did not know, but I knew it for sure. And then Zane put his hand out and grabbed its face, and slowly it began to freeze. But he wasn’t fast enough. It stabbed him in the side, just where I knew he was weak. And then the ice froze him over and he disappeared screaming. Zane fell backwards and began writhing on the ground.
And suddenly I was watching Ryan. He was throwing ninja stars at the thing, but it was dodging them, walking on the ceiling. “You can’t out ninja me!” Ryan yelled. And then a bolt of ice hit the thing and it froze in its tracks. Zane! I hoped he was all right. The thing shattered, and like Zane’s, became a shadow of Ryan. He definitely wasn’t the type for fighting, but neither was his shadow. It ran up to Ryan and began to stab him, but Ryan got there first. And suddenly there was a pain in my side. I was the shadow!
Ryan glared at it.... me.... and I tried to say, “No Ryan, its Grant!” But nothing came out. And I just stood there and he stabbed me and stabbed me. And then I saw, almost like a light, a place on his side. I stabbed it, and Ryan fell to the ground, but I was burning. I was on fire!
And then I was watching Theo. He was in his middle ages armor, wrestling with the thing. He hit it hard, and it shattered like the two before it. And then they began wrestling again, and it seemed to be overpowering it. And then Adam flew by and hit it with some flame, and then moved off, followed by his shadow. Theo backed up, and... There was Zane! Fighting his shadow again! Had it come back? And then the past... or was it the present? repeated like before, and I realized the timelines overlapped. And Theo was back fighting the thing.
But I was the thing again now! I had already died once! But Theo was attacking me, and I couldn’t attack him. And then some instinct awoke in me, and I slid around to his back and stabbed him, shattering his armor. He fell down, and I was horrified by what I did. But then Adam came up to me and held onto my face, and I began burning again. I screamed into the darkness, and now I was following Adam. Him and his shadow, as it was already his shadow, flew around the room, and I could see the other three battles going on. And then I was the thing again. This time I was determined not to die. I charged at Adam, but he was faster. He held onto my face and the burning began again.
I was outside, following Naomi. And something gave me the feeling somebody else was as well. Something darted out and began to attack her. It was another shadow! She hit it with a sphere of steel, obviously one of Theo’s moves. It shattered, and there was her shadow. It shot a sphere of steel back at her. I watched as she dodged my sphere of st- Oh no. My? I was the thing again! What was going on! Don’t attack me! I wanted to scream. And then she hit me with some of Adam’s fire, and I began burning. And burning.
And now I was following Judith, who was flying across the bay. And wait a second. It was dawn. Had so much time passed? She shot into San Francisco and into the Wells Fargo mint. She flew down, down, and entered a room where the 4 were. Theo, Zane, and Ryan were all lying on the ground, and Adam was fighting hundreds of shadows. Judith did some weird flash thing, and all of the shadows fell to the ground. And the worst part was, I could feel them. I could feel the shadows dying. And then there was another time skip, Because all five of them were in a huge chamber, and there was Brighty, and a strange dark pulsating sphere, and somebody lying on a bed next to it. The person was.. Me? I was here! How could I be there? But maybe that was my body.... and this was my soul?
“I hope you all are okay with surrendering, because we have your frie-” He stared at Judith. “Who are you?”
“Nobody important” She was right next to him, and then she hit him with a weird light attack. Then she came over and touched me.
And I was awake.
“You okay?” Judith asked.
“Yeah”
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Grant
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Bump. Teehee
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Nehomee
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OMG this is getting good!!!! But Judith isn't that nice Haha. She'd probably kill us all and then join the bad guys X3 Probably.
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Grant
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lol... fine.. Ill do that later >:)
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Theo, The Pirate Gnome

Medieval, grant thats the word yar a looking fore, Medieval.
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Grant
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yep, probably :)

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