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Topic Started: Feb 19 2009, 05:20 PM (65 Views)
elementalpenguin

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“I’m Kirin. What… are you?” Kirin cringed as he spoke. He was probably already dead. He was hallucinating. That must be it. Could you hallucinate while you were dead? He took another look at the cat thing that had just talked to him. No, he thought to himself. Do not tell yourself that the thing is talking to you. Don’t encourage yourself.
“What I am is not important.” The clear voice brought Kirin back into the real world. He didn’t like the real world at the moment.
“What is important is that you owe me your life. And I have a favor I want to ask.”
“You saved my life!?! No way! You’re a… a…” Kirin winced in pain. His rib was on fire.
“A cat. Yes, I’ve noticed that. But I can also talk and think for myself. Think, boy. Am I really just a cat?” Kren, or whatever it was called, sounded annoyed now, as if it was expecting something of him, and he wasn’t delivering.
Was he supposed to know what the thing was? Because he definitely did not. And how could it have saved his life? It was a cat. Cats do not save people’s lives. But then again, cats don’t usually talk either.
Kren sighed. “It seems like you truly have no recollection of the debt that you owe me. Even more puzzling is that you have no idea what I am…” She looked thoughtful now. Her face was much more flexible than those of most animals, Kirin thought. It was almost human…
“Fine then… I have reached a decision. I will unlock those memories for you.”
And with that, Kren leaped straight at Kirin’s face, claws outstretched.
“AAAAAG-”
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“-GGGGGHHHHAAAH!!!”
Kirin looked around. He was no longer in a tree. He was… nowhere. And has he thought this, he heard it echo around the emptiness.
Kirin…
“Gah! Who’s there?” Kirin looked around warily, and then saw the cat creature step out of the mist… mist that had not been there a moment before.
“You – Kren – you…. YOU KILLED ME!” Kirin felt rage coursing through his body. He was dead! This couldn’t be possible! Everything was wrong!
“Kiri-” the cat creature started,
“SHUT UP! YOU KILLED ME! GET… OUT!” Kirin’s roar echoed around the empty space. However, it wasn’t empty anymore. Flames danced along the edges that were now forming. Edges that were closing in on Kren…
“Kirin, let me explain, I –” Kren started again.
“No.” Kirin suddenly felt empowered, and at the same time exhausted. And words suddenly flew threw his head. He spoke them. “I, Kirin, reject you.” And then a single word that would change the world – “Flame.”
Gouts of fire erupted through the emptiness, licking over both Kirin and Kren. Kirin felt a mere tickle, whereas Kren burst into flame and vanished, a silver thread suddenly around her neck as the flames caught her. Kirin let the flames wash over him, and stood alone. He didn’t know when it happened, but suddenly he was falling, falling down, and his head hit leaves. He was asleep in an instant, not knowing that awestruck rainbow eyes watched him wondrously.


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"I reject..." Huh? Kinda reminds me of Bleach : D [I know! I have to read that...and Naruto...later.... >.>]
Its really good! But you didn't post 7 times, lair Zan-thrax...shame on you...
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? bleach? it remiinds me of one piece. with the rejection dial. also, you're a liar. u told me u didnt read naruto anymore, liarpants.
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I go to high school! I have homework, unlike you buttheads who stay at home for the entire week! You'll all be hobos!!!!!!!!!!!! I'll read Naruto when it gets interesting....Burn Zan-thrax.
[Today I almost got sent out of class because I almost swore in front of the teacher ^ ^; I've never been sent out a class before!! Haha]
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