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Chapter 3: Duel, Bright, Light, and Visitors; A super double edition
Topic Started: Feb 10 2009, 09:18 PM (48 Views)
Grant
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I introduced a lot of characters in this, and it is only monday. Well, It makes the rest of the week more interesting.

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LN8 3: Duel, Bright, Light and Visitors

“Hey, that is my power!” Zane yelled. He held his hand out and pulled Naomi’s ice towards him. She stared at it for about a second, then began to pull it back to her.
“Erm... guys.. uh”
“Shut up Grant, Its a friendly duel,” Zane said. They began moving faster. Naomi was faster than Zane, which was a little weird. They began to move fast. Zane gathered up an ice knife and then threw it at Naomi. She dodged it quickly and then began to conjour up her own knife.
Zane wasn’t fast enough to dodge it, but he just blocked it with some ice. Both of them were noticably changing. Zane was pretty much blond with blue eyes, Naomi had brown hair. They seemed to be getting more and more violent.
“Guy... just stop. Please?”
They began moving faster and started to blur at the edges. Naomi was throwing tons of knives, but Zane just blocked them with ice shields.
“Hah, your just a simple copycat,” there was a certain edge to Zanes voice, and it didn’t sound like he was really Zane anymore.
“Could a copycat do this?” Naomi didn’t seem nice either... It was scary, almost like they were soldiers. I stood helplesly by and watched Naomi make a sword and shield out of ice. Zane formed a spear and they began cutting at eachother. Zane had more mastery of the ice, but Naomi was faster. They started moving faster and faster and a couple people were pointing and talking. Oh no. The cops are probably going to come soon.
“GUYS! STOP” They must have been moving to fast or something, but they kept fighting. Zane was moving the ice in strips, trying to trap Naomi, and he had her left leg, but she quickly cut it off with her.... it was a weird scimitar now! What the hell was going on. Neither of them were this violent...
An Ice kife flew out of the brawl and right near my foot. It was time for this to stop. I began walking towards them. But somebody else beat me. It was somebody with a blank stare.. and a Wells Fargo shirt on. Oh no.
“GUYS!” The man jumped between them and pushed them away from eachother. He jumped at Naomi.
“NO WAY!!! JUMP AFTER ME BASTARD!!! I AM MORE IMPORTANT THAN HER!!!” Zane jumped at him and stabed him through the chest with ice. He threw him to the side and the two began fighting again. The Wells Fargo man dissapeared before he landed. Now I was determined to stop them. But so was somebody else. Another teen walked up to the two. Suddenly he flashed really bright and we were all blinded.
When I saw again, Zane was attacking him but he was blocking it with some weird flashes. Great, another person with superpowers. He was faster than Naomi and he hit Zane in the chest with a flash. Zane doubled over and the blondness left his hair. He began moving away with Zane, but was hit in the back by another flash. Naomi!
The kid dropped Zane and turned around. Big mistake. The kid was hit by Zane’s ice spear, but somehow he blocked it. I noticed he had a strange haze around him, almost like a shield. But that diverted his attention again and he was double teamed. There was another flash and he was gone. Naomi and Zane were back to normal more, and by now there was a huge crowd. Naomi and Zane looked around, and then started running to Zane’s house. I followed them, but they must have taken a zig-zag because I got there first and waited in his yard. They walked up looking really tired.
“Wow, that duel really took it out of me” Zane said
“Yeah, me too.... and sorry about the whole power .stealing thing... I guess it is my power... you saw me copy flash right?” Naomi replied
“No, I am sorry. I overreacted. It was like I had a different personality almost” Zane said.
“Me too. Weird huh” Naomi said.
“Yes, it is strange” the flash boy said. There was another blinding flash and both Zane and Naomi were lying on the ground with the kid standing over them
“Who the hell are you?” I asked.
“Nobody important... well, unless you have powers. Do you??” He said
“Uh no” I replied
“Well, then I will kill you. If you have powers they will activate before I kill you, and then I will know, if not, you should be gone anyways. You know too much already”
“Umm...” A voice said, “I don’t think so.” Suddenly some light began to swirl around him. It locked him In place and suddenly Judith appeared!
“Judith... you have powers too?”
“What do you mean... too?” Judith replied
I gestured to the knocked out Zane and Naomi “Those two. Zane has Ice and Naomi can copy others powers”
“Wow, cool!”
“So you are a big happy family! Wonderful!” The bright kid said. There was another flash, and he was gone. Again.
“How does he do that?” I asked
“I don’t know. It seems like he can manipulate light, kindof like me”
“What can you do?”
“Well, I can sortof turn into light. It doesn’t really make any sense though”
“Yeah. We should probably get these two inside”
I put Zane on my back and began to walk up to his main house.
“Stop” Judith said “I want to try something” She began to glow. Then she touched Naomi and Naomi was gone.
“YOU KILLED HER!!!” I screamed
“No, no, calm down. I just turned her into light.” She walked over and touched Zane, and he was gone also. I walked up to the main house. We got inside and then Judith kneeled down. She put her hands out and suddenly Zane and Naomi were on the floor.
“Awesome” I said.
“I didn’t really know if it was going to work” Judith replied.
“You could have killed them!!!”
“But I didn’t!”
“Could have killed who?” A voice said from the kitchen. Adam walked out with a bowl of goldfish. He saw Naomi and Zane on the floor and dropped it. But instead of falling to the floor it stopped. A voice from nowhere said “Adam, you almost killed the goldfish. Goldfish are asian. Respect your asian friends!”
“Ryan? Is that you” I asked
Suddenly Ryan appeared holding the goldfish bowl. “Yep right here. This invisibility thing is really annoying me. I don’t know how to controll it yet. Well, at least i’m not torching things like Adam is.”
“Hey,” Adam replied “The rice fairy gave me the power to cook all the rice I want, whenever I want!”
“Who is the rice fairy?” I asked
“Oh, the weird girl in my head. She told me she was the rice fairy. She might have been kidding though.”
“Yeah, I have a girl in my head also, but she is a redhead, so she can’t be the rice fairy” Ryan said.
“Yeah, I have a weird person in my head also!” Judith replied
I felt really weird surrounded by all of these people with strange powers. Was this god’s cruel joke? Why not me?
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