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| Topic Started: Oct 5 2009, 09:12 PM (53 Views) | |
| Igginator | Oct 5 2009, 09:12 PM Post #1 |
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Ok this only part of it so i will write more soon. Its called Hell Hole. WARNING Contains a strong amount of gore so if you would throw up at the sight of a squashed bunny wabbit on the side of the road...its probably best you push back  seriously  “Shit! Ghost is down, I repeat Ghost is down!” “Russ, get on Ghost’s flank. Don’t let ‘em through” I called out on the radio. I let loose another burst from my AK47 at the assault drone but the bullets were deflected by the armoured plates. “We can’t hold out, we need proper fire support” Wolf yelled out, not even bothering to use his radio. “Wolf, Russ, on me!” I ordered. I crouched down and ran along the low wall as the drone’s chain gun tore up the cement above me. I kept sprinting until I reached an open doorway and I dove in, waiting for Wolf and Russ to arrive. Wolf came straight in behind me, closely followed by Russ. The building was what appeared to have once been a simple store, but that was before the bombs dropped. I glanced around and noticed some crates in the corner of the room. They were badly damaged but appeared unopened, an uncommon find considering the rate of which the cannibals and slavers have been scavenging recently. The butt of my rifle split the first crate into two pieces with dangerous force sending tiny shards of wood flying off at high speed. “Shit! Watch it, won’t you. That could’ve hit me eye!” complained Wolf. “Oh shut up Wolf! Look its tinned food, we’ll take it with us back to Finov.” said Russ. Suddenly before any of us could even react the building wall exploded in a volatile eruption throwing everything to the ground. I felt a sharp pain in the back of my head and I searched for my rifle with my now blurry vision, to no success. Figures burst into the building and fired point blank range into someone on the ground! I stopped looking for my rifle and grabbed a military colt .45 pistol from my boot holster and tried to aim at the new arrivals but my vision was still blurred. I fired 3 times in their direction and they instantly reacted by diving for cover and barking orders. I crawled in the opposite direction from them and rolled behind a wall. Bullets collided with the rubbish around me and I kept my head down praying. I steadied my view till it became clear and I listened harder, and over the gunshots I could hear Wolf roaring taunts at the gunmen. I peeked around the corner to get a better view of the enemy and I saw the standard fatigues of the military, a drab green with faint grey strips added to blend in with the ruined shit-hole of a city. They had recently been out of control killing anyone that got in the way of their sweeps, whether it is mutant or survivor. I fired a shot with my pistol at the closest marine and his face exploded in a shower of red gore. Again I fired into the group and the bullet made contact with a leg sending the bone sharply out the other side. The marine collapsed, withering in agony as his bone protruded his leg showering his squad mates in a fine mist of blood. My success attracted a full-auto rifle and I ducked back into the safety of the wall as a whole magazine was released on my position. I blind fired around the corner till my pistol was out of ammunition, so I drew my serrated knife and let out a blood curdling roar of anger! I jumped up and ran around the wall with my knife held high and I brought it down against the sergeant’s throat in one quick slashing motion. He straightened and gurgled for a moment before collapsing on the ground with the rest of the bodies as blood pumped out of his dirt stained lips all over his face. With the momentum I had I brought the blade back up along a marine’s chest spraying the roof a dark crimson. The two remaining marines backed away from me lowering their weapons begging for mercy. I felt a bullet wisp past my ear as Wolf opened fire and I ducked to the ground to see the first soldier gunned down just as quickly as he had backed away from my murderous rampage. I leaped at the remaining trooper with a feral like snarl, and the serrated steel penetrated his jugular like a warm knife does butter, and he fell gasping for air through a blood filled throat. “That’ll teach them bitches not to mess with us!” Wolf boasted already. “It’s not over yet, remember the assault drone. It would’ve been scouting ahead for them which means it’s still out there” I cautioned, trying not to sound slightly afraid. I scanned the bodies and spotted a Dragunov strapped to the sergeants back. I grabbed it and loaded in a new magazine I got from the sergeants belt. I turned around to see Wolf leaning over Russ, who had an expression as cold and dead as the bullet in his own head. “He had a good life.” Whispered Wolf loudly enough so that I could just hear it. And with that Wolf reloaded his AK47 and set off through the door with me following closely, ready to face whatever may lay between us and the fortress. |
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| Dentatus | Oct 6 2009, 02:02 AM Post #2 |
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Short, sweet, and brutal. Just the way I like it. |
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| Igginator | Oct 6 2009, 07:03 AM Post #3 |
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yeah, i will write some more soon. This week is pretty hectic but ill try to get some done in my short breaks. |
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| mattblackgod | Oct 6 2009, 03:38 PM Post #4 |
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Cool very Stalkerish. |
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| Dentatus | Oct 6 2009, 04:17 PM Post #5 |
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Key to writing is to do some every day - even a little bit. Also, always keep a notebook on hand to jot down ideas. The more you do it, the faster good ideas will come. |
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| Dentatus | Oct 6 2009, 04:19 PM Post #6 |
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BTW... I just received an email from a NY Literary Agent saying my manuscript was under consideration and would I send a synopsis for the proposed sequel. It's not a "No", so I guess that's good. We'll see. |
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| mattblackgod | Oct 6 2009, 04:31 PM Post #7 |
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Good luck! |
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| Igginator | Oct 6 2009, 08:55 PM Post #8 |
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yeah, i hope they use it. Well i write some more tonight and if i can get about another page done ill update it on here. |
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| Igginator | Oct 19 2009, 08:54 PM Post #9 |
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ok i have added a second chapter. It is posted on wattpad which is the site i use to host my stories. http://www.wattpad.com/217810-Hell-Hole That includes both the 1st and second chapters. Please read, second chapter includes cannibals! 
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