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| I Have a Bit of An Idea. . | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Apr 29 2009, 02:55 AM (158 Views) | |
| ShinjiLover | Apr 29 2009, 02:55 AM Post #1 |
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Bigger Shinji Fan Than Jun!
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Okay, so, I'm writing a oneshot that I will call "Addiction". It's about a girl name Miki and her journey to find this entrepreneur's daughter, Sarah Parker. Miki is a loose-cannon cop who is incredibly violent, cusses a lot, and wears just a bit of skimpy clothing. Here's an excerpt (with offensive words censored out):
I, personally, think it needs more description, which is why I've brought it here. But what do you guys think? How's the overall plot (or lack thereof, of course)?[redit][/redit] Edited by ShinjiLover, May 3 2009, 09:52 AM.
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SL-sama, Shinji fan![]()
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| PokemonMichael | May 3 2009, 09:39 AM Post #2 |
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And i jizzed in my pants....
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Incredibly Violent? Cusses a lot? Sounds awesome. |
![]() Zentek made it. <3 I quitted staff on PCF. Get used to it.
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| CharKaChu | May 7 2009, 07:01 PM Post #3 |
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iS CoMinG To GeT yOu !! ^^
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' hmmm kina violent ' and ahh it sounds great |
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| pokerus34 | May 7 2009, 11:41 PM Post #4 |
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Pichu Virus - Stronger than Swine Flu!
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PG please... Still, looks good! Continue... ![]() P.S. |
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Pichu Rules! ---"I'm just a poor boy!"--- ---"The Kid is not my Son! | |
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