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| Topic Started: Dec 26 2007, 02:17 PM (114 Views) | |
| kimiko | Dec 26 2007, 02:17 PM Post #1 |
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yah well it's gonna be an anime that we're [hopefully if it isn't to graphic] gonna post on youtube. it's about an evil dictator who is mad with power. he likes to play a game called hangman. it's where there's one person guessing letters and another who's hanging on a scaffel but not really hanging they're standing on a stool thing. whenever the person guesses wrong a soldier cuts off one of their limbs. the person guessing gets set free. then there's the alliance against it trying to run the dictator out and yea the anime's mainly about the alliance -nod nod- thanks for listening or reading or whatever... yaaaay 
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| PanDus | Jan 1 2008, 06:59 PM Post #2 |
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It sounds like a good start. Develop a few strong characters and long-term grudges and you can call it official. 
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| kimiko | Jan 4 2008, 02:07 PM Post #3 |
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yeah cuz the main charracter's bestest friend [danny HAHAHAHA danny i kno u don't go here but HA!] dies -nod nod- |
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| Kisame | Jan 13 2008, 11:52 AM Post #4 |
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Yea...Danny... Well that should bring in some drama, and drama always leads into an excellent plot. Edited by Kisame, Jan 13 2008, 11:53 AM.
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| kimiko | Feb 9 2008, 12:25 AM Post #5 |
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yup . . . .....but danny got mad at me it was funny  here i'll post what ever we have done here --------------------------------------------------- HANGMAN Village courtyard, Sundown, last killing of the day, corpses n limbs everywhere, stench of burning flesh, fire for burning flesh on side, Greg is on high seat surrounded by soldiers, Richard next to him with pen and paper, Andrew n Ernesto are there watching Danny on scaffold, an arm and leg missing, Gasper: (yelling to Greg, tears in eyes) YOU PSYCOTIC BASTARD!!! Greg: (without emotion) shut up…make your next move or you’ll be next on the scaffold. Gasper: (reluctantly) fine… “L” Soldier: Incorrect Soldier chops off Danny’s leg. Danny screams in pain. Greg laughing in approval of Danny’s suffering. Gasper: (to himself) damn Soldier: Next letter Gasper: (pause) “S” Soldier cuts off Danny’s last arm and throws it into the blazing fire. The stench of burning flesh fills the air. Danny screams more awaiting his absolute death. Soldier: Incorrect. Next letter please. Gasper: (thinks for a moment) “H” Soldier: Incorrect Soldier kicks the stool out from under Danny. Danny dies instantly. Greg grins. Soldier: The word was “ramification” Gasper: (falls to ground crying) Sorry… Danny. Greg: Good job Gasper, you’ve just murdered your best friend. Gasper: You son of a… Andrew: (interrupts) Shut up! Don’t speak to you’re mighty ruler that way. Greg: (commands) Throw him outside (to Gasper) don’t blame me, you’re the murderer (walks away) Andrew takes Gasper away kicking and cursing. Andrew knocks Gasper unconscious. Throws him to the front gate, he is now free. - Gaspar wakes up at front gate around 4am. recalling what has happened he’s mad, sad, tired, hungry, and helpless all at the same time. He was really hungry especially because they deprive those that are going to play the game from food and sleep. He gets up and heads to work and pretend that nothing happened. He worked in the next town over which took him three hours to get to his shoe shop where he still had work. He is delusional. |
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