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| Seian Verian | Jun 25 2018, 08:44 AM Post #1 |
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Name: Alicia Valens Gender: Female Age: 16 Class: Taiyoutono Class 1-1 Clubs/Occupation: Fencing, Debate, Chess, First Aid, and Literature clubs, in addition to student Council. She plans to attend every Student Council meeting, and spend enough of her own time on practice to make up for having to split between any clubs with overlapping meeting times. Personality: Alicia is an intelligent, driven young woman who is defined by her need to do what is right, in all things, at all times. This applies not just in the sense of morality and justice, but also in simply getting the best result possible from any action. Everything she does has a carefully considered reason, and nothing can persuade her to do something she believes is wrong. With that said, her view of right and wrong is neither simplistic nor childish. She is keenly aware of the nature of consequences, and that something that seems to be good in the short term can often have terrible long term consequences, as well as that sometimes it is necessary to make difficult decisions in order to obtain a better result in the end. Alicia is powerfully dedicated to improving herself, and works very hard to do the best she can at everything she does. She works meticulously to get the best grades in her classes and to master every skill she can that could potentially be useful to her, so that no matter what happens to her, she'll be ready for anything. While trying to make herself into the best person she can be, Alicia also tries to make the world around her a better place- This is often done by trying to make those around her into better people. She will carefully manipulate those around her to try and get them to do what is best for them, or for those around them. Those who become aware of what she is doing rarely thank her for this. Though she is unusually accomplished for her young age, Alicia leads a lonely, unhappy life. The amount of responsibility she puts on herself is not healthy- She is constantly exhausted, always trying to fit too many things into her day, and never taking time to herself to relax. While perfectly capable of being charming and getting others to do what she wants, Alicia finds it difficult to form genuine bonds with others. She's often afraid that if she's too honest with her own feelings, that others won't understand or be able to relate, or worse yet, they'll find ways to use her weaknesses against her. Because of this, her relationships with others tend to be utilitarian or shallow, without much intimacy. History: Alicia was born in Norway, to wealthy parents Luciana Valens and Elias Kasten. Luciana was a kind but strict mother, who pushed Alicia to excellence in all things, while Elias was always too involved in his own business to pay much attention to his child. Alicia received the best education money could buy in her early years, including lessons in multiple languages, including French, English, and Japanese. Eventually her mother thought it would be best for her to experience other cultures, so over the course of several years she was moved from one school to another in several countries. Now she's a newly arrived sophomore in Taioyoutono High School. Appearance: Alicia is a thin, pale young woman, with straight, golden hair that goes halfway down her back, and blue eyes. She stands at slightly under five feet tall, and weighs about 105 pounds. When not in uniform, Alicia's clothing tends toward the intricate and elegant, but also toward what's easy to move in, unless there's a pressing reason to wear something more restrictive. She favors lighter colors, though sometimes an outfit might have darker parts that help highlight the rest of it. Current Weapon/Combat Skill: Alicia has some skill with a fencing epee, and is generally quite agile, but has no real combat experience. Mask: Mostly white, with a crown-like pattern of grey over the top with a strip down the middle. Persona: Tira Miron, the Voice of the Flame. From the mythology of Eberron, a setting from Dungeons and Dragons. She is the chosen emissary of the entity known as the Silver Flame, an embodiment of justice and self-sacrifice. She appears as an armored woman awash in silver fire. ~Name: Tira Miron ~Arcana: Empress ~Drain: ~Weak: Darkness, Gravity, Earth ~Null: Light ~Reflect: ~Resist: Wind ~Skills: Hama, Dia, Sukukaja Have you read all the stickies? Yes |
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| FirebreathFishslap | Jun 27 2018, 10:24 PM Post #2 |
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I'm the best! I'm the king of me! I'm gonna eat chips out of the garbage!
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Hi, welcome to the site! There's a few things I wanna go over in the details of the app, but I think we should address the big things before we get to those points. - You've got a very lengthy personality section, but the history is very much barebones. I'd like to learn more about Alicia's past and how this caused her to develop the obsessive, exhausting lifestyle she has currently. - I have some concerns about how Alicia will actually be able to do anything ruins related or interact with other players considering her dedication to both making top of the class and attending all of her extracurriculars. I feel like she's involved in a bit too much to realistically attend, on that note. - I would recommend looking at alternate Persona choices, as I'm not sure that a D&D character is appropriate for a Persona in this instance. If you want to talk it over, feel free to DM me on Discord to explain your choice. Your resistances, weaknesses, and skills are fine, however. |
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