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| Marshal Phantom | Apr 21 2018, 04:28 PM Post #1 | ||||||||
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Panther God
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Character Template [-----] Account Name: Marshal Phantom Basic Character Information Name: Foe D. Rook Nickname: None Age: 19 Gender: Male Race: Human Affiliation: Marines Rank (Commendations): Master Chief Petty Officer Achievements:
Profession: Weapon Specialist A much more general fighter-type profession, a Weapon Specialist is someone who has to a large or small degree devoted his/her life to the mastery of a single weapon or weapon type, such as Swords, Axes or Whips. This profession applies generally to melee weapons. Characters with this profession have access to certain additional traits and may create "Stance" techniques. Martial Artist A Martial Artist is someone who specializes in hand-to-hand combat, completely or very close to unarmed. They usually have good insight in the aspects of weight, balance and movement of the body. Position: Crewman Physical Appearance Height:5'11" Weight:174lbs Hair:Straight, Low-Cut, Black Eyes: Wide, Jade Green Clothing/Accessories: Rook wears the uniform of an non-commissioned Marine, which includes a crisp white vest with sleeves neatly folded up to the shoulders, navy blue combat pants tucked in black boots, and a white cap with blue strips on the top, the word "Marine" printed clearly on a off-white background on its front. He wears a dark blue scarf, which is tied under the color of his vest in a neat knot. General Appearance: Rook has the beginnings of a goatee on his chin, with the hair not quite being stubble nor it being a full beard. His eyes are wide and alert, and colored a jade green, with a rounded nose. He usually has a ide smile, and generally is upbeat. He has a lean and slightly toned build, with definition being present in his arms and the upper part of his torso. Spoiler: click to toggle The Character Personality: Rook is a dedicated and loyal man, serving in the Marines with pride and distinction. He has a strong sense of justice, and strives to see it is upheld in all regards. He is fair and just, not reveling in fighting nor killing, being perfectly willing to resolve situations diplomatically. He believes in the potential for good in everyone, his mindset being no one can be purely evil. His dream is to one day rise to the rank of a Vice Admiral, and perhaps even beyond that, to protect the seas and those who are in it. While considered somewhat good looking by many, he is by no means a lady's man. In fact, he is the exact opposite. Rook finds it difficult to interact with those of the opposite sex, often times stumbling over his words or becoming nervously quiet in their presence. If flirted with, he has a habit of making some excuse to make a quick exit. He holds a somewhat low opinion on Nobles, stemming from rumors of their cruelness and activities. Hometown: Shell Town, East Blue History: Growing up a the son of a merchant and a Marine, a young Rook always saw himself as following in his parents footsteps, whether that be in trade or in duty. And early discovery some skill in martial combat seemed to cement his path, and so from the age of 7 to 12, he would train with his father in swordsmanship, and be instilled with the Marine mantra of "Absolute Justice", where any criminal, no the reason, should be met with an iron hard ruling of justice. He was taught to dislike pirates, bounty hunters, bandits, anyone who skirted out the law, were to be cautious around. At 13, he officially enlisted, becoming a chore boy at the Marine Outpost on Shell Island, where he worked and trained until the age of 15, when he was promoted to Seaman Recruit, and assigned to a serve aboard a ship. He bid farewell to his father and mother, who made sure he knew the pride they held for him, and departed. For five years he served aboard the S.S. "Jackson", patrolling the sea of the East Blue, capturing pirates, protecting towns, and rising through the ranks, eventually becoming the Master Chief Petty Officer of the "Jackson". His ambition was set high, with dreams of reaching the rank of Vice Admiral one day. He has entered his 6th year of service in the Navy, with the "Jackson" having recently been assigned to the Grand Line, patrolling having recently docked at Gesso Island, in Route Four. Abilities and Possessions Combat: Rook is a technical fighter, using precision and technique rather than raw strength and power to take down an enemy. He often uses the sheathe of his katana as a blunt-weapon, swinging it by the blade and striking with the handle. When serious, he unsheathes the sword, and strikes without mercy. Weaponry: Iron Katana(Inscribed with the kanji for "Justice" along the length of the sheathe) Items: Beli: 1,000,000 SD Earned: 11 Stat Points: 43 Advancement Points: 0 SD Remaining: 0/11 Stats:
Critical Hit (1 Trait) – Through training in how to hit vital points in the body, the character can use up to a quarter of their Technique Points in techniques which hit vital points in the body. Striking vital points allows characters to do damage and cause a stat debuff related to the area struck. Fate of the Strong (2 Gen Traits) - By placing traits in Fated, you lock them until the next time you earn a trait. You may put as many traits as you have into fated. In the meantime, you get a temporary boost of (2 of traits in fated, multiplied by 3) to your strength stat. Beast Handler (1 Trait) - Characters with this trait have a natural affinity for getting along with animals. Wild animals tend to behave either neutrally or friendly towards the character, unless they are very strongly aggressive. These animals, with proper approach and care, may be made to be merely distrustful and may sometimes refrain from attacking. The user also gains one NPC pet, who may possess humanlike intelligence, behaves as a crew NPC and is controlled by the player of the main character.Abu
Techniques Regular Technique Points: 16 Used Regular Technique Points: 8 Special Technique Points: 0 Used Special Technique Points: 0
Development History Gains/Losses: Edit Log: Spoiler: click to toggle |
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Royale A. Charles • Navigator • Martial Artist • Crimson Ghost Pirates • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 0 • Location: Gesso Island, Route 4 Foe D. Rook • Master Chief Petty Officer• Weapon Specialist • [url=insert marine crew URL here]N/A[/url] • Commendations: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 0 • Location: Route 2, Brick Blues | |||||||||
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| ♠ Shamma | May 15 2018, 08:28 AM Post #2 | ||||||||
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no fun
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Hey buddy, sorry for the wait. Need to reference your old sheet in Gains/Losses so I can see where the SD is coming from. From what I can see, you're just changing two traits so should be an easy approval after that. |
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Piper • Pirate • Martial Artist/Weapon Specialist • Hot Rockets • Bounty: 343,000,000 • SD Earned: 881 • Beli: 259,500,000 • Location: Raijin Island Jija Juju • Marine • Inventor/Marksman/Scholar/Doctor • Fiore • Rank: Rear Admiral • SD Earned: 579 • Beli: 188,000,000 • Location: Couture Island, Grand Line Other Characters
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| Marshal Phantom | May 16 2018, 02:53 PM Post #3 | ||||||||
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Panther God
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Actually, I'd like to cancel this scoop. I've got other plans for him that don't require me to use my scoop right now. | ||||||||
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Royale A. Charles • Navigator • Martial Artist • Crimson Ghost Pirates • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 0 • Location: Gesso Island, Route 4 Foe D. Rook • Master Chief Petty Officer• Weapon Specialist • [url=insert marine crew URL here]N/A[/url] • Commendations: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 0 • Location: Route 2, Brick Blues | |||||||||
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