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Orchid Kaa; no step on snek [Flagged]
Topic Started: Apr 16 2018, 05:09 PM (202 Views)
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Account Name: Jusenkyo

Basic Character Information
Name: Orchid Kaa
Nickname: N/A
Age: 22
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Affiliation: Bounty Hunter
Position: N/A

Professions:
  • Dangerous Dancer - Primary: An Entertainer makes his/her living through putting on shows. This profession is always specialized towards a specific type, and includes Dancer, Musician, Juggler and many more. Her particular performance involves a dangerous element while she dances, such as blades, fire poi, or live snakes Knowledge granted is job-specific. Entertainers can use their performance skills, be they song, dance or anything else, to influence others and use them as various buffs.

  • Assassin - Secondary: The Assassin profession gives stealth skills, the ability to move silently through areas without being detected. It also gives general poison knowledge. An Assassin generally has little actual combat experience, since their victims don't fight back, and as such don't fare that well in a true fight.

Physical Appearance
Height: 6'1'
Height: 130 lbs
Hair: Waist length shiny black hair that is thin but valumous kept in a high ponytail or set loose when she is relaxing.
Eyes: Deep brown almond shaped eyes.

Clothing/Accessories: Her clothing is rather scarce consisting of only a bikini with light 'golden' chain connectors, the bikini itself is red and has a cloth attached at the waist that goes near her ankles and covers her front and back and is very flowy. Her shoes are a sort of sandals with connections all the way to her ankle but leaving her feet mostly exposed besides the bottom of them. She also has an ornamental 'crown' of gold colored thread.

General Appearance:Human: Beautiful sunkissed bronze skin set on a voluptuous body with long legs is the bare minimum description that could be given to this exotic beauty. With high cheekbones and long lashes over a cute nose and plush lips her looks are enough to draw the eye of anyone with an even remote attraction to women. She has a bright smile that disarmed even the most hardened of marine veterans and she moves with a practiced grace, not a single step out of place. Her body is toned but not overly muscular, as if she were incredibly flexible. She has a tattoo that is a sort of permanent eye shadow, the dark marking serving only to accent her eyes.

Animal: An absolutely huge snake measuring 5 Meters in length (Around 16-17 feet) with a net like pattern all over its body. The scales range from Olive and brown to Forest green and Black in various spots.

Hybrid: The Hybrid between these gets larger still than either of her forms, her body extends to a huge 6 meters (19-20 feet) with about a half of that standing up right. Her arms connect to her body about one foot below her neck and are just slightly longer and thinner than regular. just as in snake form, she is covered in dark scales with the net like pattern.


The Character
Personality: She could be described as predatory, she’s the type of person to take what she wants when she can get it. She enjoys the idea of people being attracted to her, and that holding a sort of power over those people. By that note she can be quite sadistic and likes to lord power over those that don’t have it, and she finds those that do have power very attractive, regardless of gender. She has no problem putting herself below people that she perceives to be strong until she no longer finds this to be the case.

She loves having eyes on her as well as sitting on the razor edge of danger, which is one of the reasons she loves dancing. It’s also the reason she chooses to be an assassin, a single strike of the blade and the surprise that comes with it thrill her. She would love to rule over an island with hundreds of adoring fans.

With people she can be quite convincing she speaks with honeyed words and tends to be very genial in normal conversation. On the other hand she has a hard time trusting people as she tends to think anyone being nice is acting unless she is manipulating them.

She puts a lot of pressure on herself to be ‘perfect’ she puts her best effort into everything she does and feels like she has failed if things don’t go just right. She tends to get depressive and flinch at even small contact after she ‘fails’ as if she was going to be struck by anyone that approached her. She tends to withdraw and attempt to hide from people when that happens until she can be calmed down. If she is forced to continue to interact she becomes almost a completely different person. All the confidence she exudes is sucked away and she becomes timid and jumpy shrinking back from even casual movements by those around her and she doesn’t calm down unless she can get some alone time with her closest companion.

Hometown: Amazon Lily, Calm belt

History:
Starting life on Amazon Lily Orchid doesn’t actually remember much about her life there, more of a vague sense of what it looks like more than anything as well as the beauty of strength that many Kuja prize. When she was very small her mother took her away from the island, with permission, as her mother was part of the Kuja pirates. The plan had not been to leave her behind, she was merely intended to watch as the Kuja were planning a Dual on Ava’Tul Island and she had wanted her young daughter to experience the true beauty of the Kuja. When they arrived on the island she was set up quite some distance away to watch the dual with her newly given snake companion Jinendra. What they didn’t count on was the young girl’s snake to disobey it’s commands and run off as soon as the first clash of power started. Orchid had wanted to stay and watch but she also didn’t want to loose her friend so she followed it off into the western part of the island. The tall buildings and old factories were quite spooky, but she wasn’t paying attention to them she was looking for Jinendra.

The small girl found her snake curled up sort of cowering within one of the buildings, bundled with a fruit that had green swirls on it. She pet the snake gently until it slithered up her arm and rested on her shoulders like a living scarf. The fruit it had found was wrapped in a cloth as if someone had deposited it in that place for safe keeping. She looked around for a second before deciding that she was hungry enough to try and eat it before she headed back. One single bite was all it took, it was the worst thing she had ever tasted, like working out and then trying to eat your shoe afterwards. She was so surprised by it that she accidently swallowed before spitting and rubbing her tongue with her hand, only to find that she didn’t have one anymore. In fact she had lost feeling in all of her limbs and she started freaking out so much that she was flailing around on the floor. She had no idea what happened she just wanted arms again and then suddenly, she had them but, they were different, scaley and green. She took a moment to get the feeling for moving and found a piece of broken glass that was reflective enough to show her her own face. The eyes are what convinced her, she was cursed! She remembered an old story about the boa sisters and how they were cursed, and reasoned in her young mind that must be the case for her as well.

When the Kuja came to find her, she hid. Perhaps they might have found her had they been looking harder but when they passed by without seeming to notice her she didn’t dare check if they were gone. She holed up in that place until late into the night when the noises coming from the long forgotten machines spooked her outside. She managed to calm herself enough that she changed back into just a young girl. She survived hiding out on the island and becoming nocturnal, leaving the creepy buildings before the sun went down and sleeping during the day.

It took just over a month for a new group to visit the island and in that time Orchid had managed to figure out mostly that she could control the changing if she focused. When the pirates found her she was initially hostile and her hybid form was nothing if not intimidating, letting her stand a few inches taller than a full grown man. They were less than impressed. They captured her and Jinendra and sold her to a traveling ‘Stage show’. In reality the show was a sort of mercenary company that did performances on the side when they didn’t have a ‘real’ job to do.

In the following years she was ‘trained’ by the ring leader in both the entertainment arts and the art of assassination. She was quite good at both from the get go, but not perfect and the art demands perfection. When she would perform sub optimally each member of the group would take a turn striking her, however she alone was not subjected to this each member was equal in that way. If one of her ‘co-workers’ were to mess up it would also be expected of her that she would strike them. Eventually the routine was mundane to her, but when she turned eighteen the leader told her she had made enough of a profit that she was free to leave any time she liked. She decided to set out on her own after another few years to build of a small safety net of money.

Abilities and Possessions
Combat: She fights as if she's dancing with blades, her motions sway and turn in unpredictable ways and she uses her flexibility to her advantage. She tends to strike hard and fast like a snake as she is not good at prolonged encounters. Her fighting also incorporates her snake companion who strikes when she would be vulnerable and she is rather adept at moving while there are a large number of enemies or allies.

In snake form and Hybrid form she is a bit faster and stronger and tends to make darting strikes as she is also much much larger.

Weaponry
Iron DaggerA short iron dagger of simple make
]Iron DaggerA short iron dagger of simple make

Items
ItemDescription

Beli: 500,000
Advancement Points: 0
SD Earned: 0
SD Remaining: 0
Stat Points: 32 [32 + 0]
  • Used for Stats: 32
  • Used for Fortune: 0
    • Strength: 8
    • Speed: 8
    • Stamina: 8
    • Accuracy: 8
    • Fortune: 8 [32 / 4]

Traits:

Specific Devil Fruit (3 General Traits) - The player may choose a specific Devil Fruit, either canon or custom, for their character. These fruits are limited based on moderator discretion but can be of any of the three types.

Performance Assistant Snake- Jinendra (1 Professional Trait) - Plenty of good entertainers need someone to help them carry out their routine. The character gains a special Performance Assistant NPC which is under their control.

Jinendra is a large venomous snake around four meters long with a Diamond pattern on it's back and a rattle on the end of it's tail. His head is flat and his scales are a sandy color with black in the diamonds. He has been with her as far back as she can remember and is very loyal. He deeply cares for her safety and rattles his tail whenever he feels that she is threatened.

Devil Fruit
 
Hebi Hebi no mi Model: Reticulated Python N/A
Devil Fruit Type: Zoan
Devil Fruit Ability: Allows the user to transform into a Reticulated Python as well as a hybrid between the human and animal form.
Devil Fruit Free Effect: Zoan buff


Techniques
Regular Technique Points: 16 [8 * 2]
Used Regular Technique Points: 8
Special Technique Points: 0
Used Special Technique Points: 0

* denotes +4 Rank Mastery
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Techniques

Rank: (4)
Name:Animal form
Type:Support
Range:self
Power:N/A
Stats: +2 Str, +2 Speed
TP:4

Orchid Transformed into her snake form and gains a boost in speed and power.

Rank: (4)
Name:Hybrid form
Type:support
Range:self
Power:
Stats: +2 Str, +2 Speed
TP:4

Orchid Transformed into her Hybrid form and gains a boost in speed and power but retains arms with which to wield weapons and manipulate objects
Rank: (4)
Name:Dance of Death
Type:Support
Range:Single
Power:N/A
Stats: +1 Str, +1 Speed
TP:4

Orchid moves her body in an enticing manner while manipulating blades it gives a sense of power to onlookers and the performer alike

Rank: (4)
Name:Coiled Strike
Type:Offence
Range:Melee
Power:4
Stats: N/A
TP:4

Orchid whips forwards with a blade or fang to slash at someone in an attempt to deal a fatal blow.




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Edited by Jusenkyo, Apr 30 2018, 02:00 PM.
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No to 28-29 feet size for your zoan form. You need monster point for anything big like that.

Hybrid form is also way too long, and I wouldn't allow that even with monster point.

Think Lucci's or Chopper's transformations for an idea of what kind of size changes are allowed without Monster Point.

Your BBCode is weird between techniques and devil fruit section, fix that please.

You've listed your Techniques twice, please only list them once.
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Edits have been made
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BBCode is still weird in places but don't see any big issues, please fix that code though.

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Dance of Death follows the standard buff table and should only be buffing by 2 not 4 Points.
Amyral Vansen [color=#006400] • Crew Position • Ninja/Martial Artist/Chaplain/Navi • ? • Bounty: 30,000,000 • SD Earned: 274 • Beli: 78,885,000 • Location: Romulin Island

♦ Str: 33 ♦ Spd: 125 ♦ Sta: 50 ♦ Acc: 88
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fixed it
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Edited by treize, Apr 30 2018, 03:37 PM.
Amyral Vansen [color=#006400] • Crew Position • Ninja/Martial Artist/Chaplain/Navi • ? • Bounty: 30,000,000 • SD Earned: 274 • Beli: 78,885,000 • Location: Romulin Island

♦ Str: 33 ♦ Spd: 125 ♦ Sta: 50 ♦ Acc: 88
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Scooped Characters: Kove
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