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Pez Collecting Vol. 1; Kid gets some new techs[Flagged]
Topic Started: Apr 15 2018, 06:12 AM (82 Views)
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Character: Kid
Request: New techs 66 TP spare, 66 TP being used by following techs (0 TP left)
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Pez Dispenser: Fudo Saiken 16
Type: Utility
Range: Medium
Power: 0
Description: The Fudo Saiken Pez Dispenser, making you hate everyone else just that little bit more. By consuming this powerful Pez, the user will soon find themselves filled with anger which they feel the need to direct into an opponent (or ally). If within Medium Range, the user will launch themselves across the distance at high speeds and feel the need to lash out in any way they can as they approach. A pinch of salt has been added to the mix, harvested from a sample of the fossilized remains of a Machairodus Kabir. Warning: May make the consumer incredibly grumpy, as well as induce temporary growth of various clumps of silver cat fur. It costs Kid full AE for this to be consumed. (-8 Medium Range, -8 Quick)

Pez Dispenser: Colin G. Fist 14
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Power: 0
Description: The Colin G. Fist Pez Dispenser, adding some bite to your snacks. By consuming this powerful Pez, the user will soon find that their teeth have sharpened to extreme levels. For the duration of the round that they consume this, their teeth can bite through Starter Tier Materials with ease. Additionally the consumers body appears to temporarily grow various clumps of ice blue fur, making them appear just a little more authentic. Seasoned with shavings from a fallen moon rock, so that you too, can literally eat the moon (but not the sun). Additionally it tastes weirdly of cheese. This costs Kid full AE for it to be consumed, and the buff will wear off by the start of the consumers following post (-14 Starter Tier Breaking)

Pez Dispenser: Grit T. Write 14
Type: Utility
Range: Self
Power: 0
Description: The Grit T. Write Pez Dispenser, for when things are going a little bit too well. By consuming this powerful Pez, the user will soon find that their legs literally stop working, not only that but they're then left with a strong aftertaste of coffee in their mouth. The source of the bitterness is actually thanks to the comedic inclusion of a drop of genuine loli tears, that in turn react violently with special home grown coffee beans, as if out of spite. This costs Kid full AE for it to be consumed, and the debuff will wear off by the start of the consumers following post (-14 Disable)

Pez Dispenser: Sam Wright 8
Type: Utility
Range: Self
Power: 4
Description: The Sam Wright Pez Dispenser, it's electrifying, and also quite depressing. By consuming this questionable Pez, the user will soon find their body becoming more akin to that of another gender. Despite the change, it still remains fairly obvious who the person is. Additionally their genetics themselves do not change, it is mostly just aesthetic, meaning a little fat forming or fading here, and a little temporary hair growth or loss there. Entertainingly, it contains the surprisingly sweet blood of the hermaphroditic Clownfish. This costs Kid full AE for it to be consumed, and the 'buff' will wear off after 3 posts (-4 Disguise)

Pez Dispenser: Eve Senba 14
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Power: 14
Description: The Eve Senba Pez Dispenser; now with 100% less sin, and 100% more justice. By consuming this powerful Pez, the user will find that it actually contains popping candy, which after a few brief moments will begin to heat up and zip around violently, forcing them to open their mouth. From forth a shower of colourful, shocking candy will explode, electrocuting anyone within a melee range. One of the many secrets of the Sky Islands is hidden within the native Platypus, with their unnaturally high voltage bills, which of course were "humanely" harvested and mixed into each cube of Pez. This costs Kid full AE for it to be consumed, and the effects only last a few seconds (+14 Elemental Damage: Electricity)
Edited by Gigasheep, May 1 2018, 12:04 AM.
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This is cool. TESI, yeah? An ingredient for Pez Dispenser: Grit T. Write would be good.

Pez Dispenser: Fudo Saiken. Construct is unfortunately currently limited to LR and DFs, though even if it wasn't what amounts to a bodymod might be a little far.

Only other one I'm iffy on is Pez Dispenser: Sam Wright, since that might be going a little bit too far in terms of wondrous effects, though feel free to ask about for secondary opinions. If it was less dramatic in terms of fully changing gender, then possibly, but I'm not super confident with the idea.
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Fudo is now a lame version of Soru, though that suited his speed and anger well

Grit's ingredient is now a strand a genuine loli tear mixed with coffee beans to create a lot of spite

Sam's Pez is working akin to Life Return stuff, a little bit of fat and hair changing, and a small change in vocal tones.

Eve's is now sourced from Sky Island Platypus bills, because who said Pez had to be vegetarian friendly?
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I'd rather this bit "the user will soon find their body changing into one of the opposite gender, developing in areas they previously hadn't" would be removed and just something like they become slightly more masculine/feminine instead, so we stay away from strict gender changes. Still think we're okay for a flag at least.

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Removed it and rewrote a bit, should be fine now
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Colin - Reads as a non stat buff for material breaking. Should be inducing a single material breaking bite.

Grit - Disable is only supposed to disable a single body part. I understand what you're going for and you're free to RP it as disabling both legs, but for the purposes of the tech it needs to disable one. If you shot it into someones mouth, them ending up unable to walk for a round would be a bit much.

Personally, im against alterations to body makeup getting involved in this, leave that to LR. So sam is a cool idea but a no from me.


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Gonna inactive these for the time being, and resurrect them at a later date. Sorry for the inconvenience to anyone that helped me on these though

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