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Topic Started: Jan 22 2018, 02:56 PM (144 Views)
Umbert
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Hi guys, just to make sure Umbert is still legal (not like he's ever been kek)

Character: Umbert Redstone
Request: Check over my character and see what needs updating to the current patch. Please and thankyou. <3
Original: The one and only!
Modification: Anything that is out of date.
"If violence can't solve yer problems, then you aren't usin' enough of it!"

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Gigasheep
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Hey, welcome back. I imagine a Patch Scoop would fix a lot of this, especially as... Ugh, that cyborg trait... How old is that?

Anywayyy...

Redstone Hurricane feels like it should have more than just Ricochet, like... At least Gatling all things considered. And probably some range to show how far he'll travel. It should also be noted to require full AE to maintain

Redstone Slayer should list previous effects. Also makes me think AoE or Omnidirectional would probably be required for these. That's up to you what you'd prefer though

Redstone Bloodbath only needs to pay for one of those normal effects. The cost comes in after you apply 2 general effects (so 3 onwards)

Redstone Crush if this is hitting with a blunt part of the weapon, there is no need for damage type change

Redstone Driving Crush would need Tier Breaking listed as an effect

Redstone Fang you appear to be of the wrong rank. A -14 effect and an 8 effect would mean you'd need a rank 22 (or 18 with mastery)

Redstone Rage and Redstone Wild Rage are the same

Redstone Blackening "This technique does not work against opponents with an Armour Haki technique that is at a higher rank than this technique." can be removed, it's about the power etc. Additionally, you'd need Medium Tier Defense listed as an effect, which costs power

Redstone InfraRage Vision "*Rankx2* meters away", woah, that's... Real old stuff. We work purely off of the new range system when it comes to stuff like that, so you'd want to remove that and add range

Redstone Flaming Punch is just 2 ranks under what it would need to be. (Rank 14*2=28+6=34)

Phew, that's a lot. If you're planning on editing it here you'd need to copy said techs here and list them as old (maybe in a spoiler tag) and then list out the new ones below. Or you could remove them, or... It's up to you
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That's great, I'll get right on those changes. Quick question, where can I look into this power you mentioned? Is it a Haki-specific thing? Either my memory's failing me or it's a new addition since I was last here.

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Additionally, you'd need Medium Tier Defense listed as an effect, which costs power
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Your techs seem to already have power. Under material tier in the techniques section you can find their costs. I think steel is 10 power?
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Hey, umm, so tried to fix my character profile today, and...

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What do?
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Try again now, that should have fixed it for you
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Still working on this?
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