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Jack Clive II; [Flagged]
Topic Started: Jan 11 2018, 12:57 PM (209 Views)
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Basic Character Information
Name: Jack Clive
Epithet: Grey Hunter Jack
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Affiliation: Pirate
Bounty: ::beli:: 26,000,000
Achievements:
FeatLocation
Was the champion of the Annual Four Blues Swordsmanship TournamentKarate Island
Was a finalist on the Annual Four Blues Martial Arts Tournament, while forbidden from using his swordsKarate Island
Defeated the disciple of the "Shadow Step" swordsmanship school, marine Lieutenant Commander Tenba in a duel. Being a sore loser, the marine resorted to putting a bounty on him.Shipwreck Cove

Profession:
  • Weapon Specialist

    A much more general fighter-type profession, a Weapon Specialist is someone who has to a large or small degree devoted his/her life to the mastery of a single weapon or weapon type, such as Swords, Axes or Whips. This profession applies generally to melee weapons. Characters with this profession have access to certain additional traits and may create "Stance" techniques.
  • Merchant

    Merchants are fairly charismatic people who are skilled in both bargaining and selling things to others. Their expertise means that they are very knowledgeable of the economy, and deal with all manner of merchandise. Additionally, they tend to be well-connected in trading circles.

Position: N/A


Physical Appearance
Height: 7 feet
Weight: 220 lbs
Hair: Black, long, and arranged in a ponytail. His face is clean shaven.
Eyes: Black, almond shaped.
Clothing/Accessories: Jack usually dresses in a simple grey Kimono, held tight by a red and blue waist band, which serves to hold his sheathes too. He also wears traditional samurai wooden sandals.
General Appearance: Jack is a muscular man. He has a few minor cuts on his body, but no significant scars. He usually walks in a swaggering careless step, though his movements become much more precise when need be.

His face is a lean one. He has a slightly edged jaw line, piercing eyes, and normal sized nose and lips. His eyebrows are only slightly spiky, and normal sized.

Badass
Focused


The Character
Personality: Jack is a simple man. He is always looking for a challenge. He is eternally driven by his desire to become the greatest swordsman in the world. You wouldn’t find that out easily from him though, since most of the time, he appears to be a nonchalant dude who lets life happen to him as it comes. He loves laughing around with other people and cares little for what he calls “depressing” topics, which are really just various studious things.

When need be, he can make use of the merchant skills he gained in his youth, but that hasn’t happened in a long time given that challenging the right opponent – a pirate – can usually earn him enough money to get by.

Jack is also extremely loyal. He would almost always chose to support his friends dreams and ambitions, bu never to the point of abandoning his own.

He also makes it a point of always paying what he owes, be it something material like money, or something as immaterial as a promise.

Jack does not make a point of judging right and wrong. He is rather selfish in his ways and only really acts when he, or someone he deems worthy, has a stake in the situation. Often, his stake is just to get a good fight out of any given situation.

Hometown: Karate Island – South Blue
History: Jack was given as a child to a swordsmanship dojo, which also served as an orphanage as the master was running a modest trade operation to keep the children fed and lodged. Jack being the trouble maker that he was, always found new ways to break the rules and disrupt the order of things, and though he always bragged that he would one day become the world’s strongest swordsman, he never even tried to become a competent swordsman, so the master took him aside one day and asked him if he truly desired to become the greatest, Jack’s answer was convincing enough, so the master found a new way to train him. He started giving him as many errands for the shops as he could do.

Jack found himself walking long distances in the sun, lifting heavy crates, and doing all sorts of labor that he never thought was intended to strengthen him. At the beginning, he used to ditch most of the work, but soon the trade operation started to show signs of failure, and the master decided not to say anything, until the point where there was significantly less food on the table for everyone. After all of Jack’s friends started shunning him a bit for his irresponsibility, he finally started learning responsibility slowly, and putting his back into the disguised training to clean his mess (though money was never really that tight, the master just thought he’d benefit from the lesson).

A few years later, a young man with two fine swords strapped to his waist walked into the dojo demanding a duel with the master. Though the youngster was stronger than anyone Jack had ever seen, the master disposed of him with little to no difficulty. Though he had called upon traditional duel rules and stipulated that he would become the master of this dojo if he wins, so the master took his swords as spoils of the duel, and stated that the young man can come back for them when he’s strong enough to earn them.

A few months later, the master was captured by the marines for drug traffic. Everyone was so shocked, but the explanation came as soon as the following day. The young man who had lost his swords to him showed up and demanded a duel with the master, and insisted that he fights his successor for the chance of earning back his swords, and take over the dojo.

The old man not having decided on a successor, the dojo’s best fighters lined up at the chance to defend his honor, but as Jack had expected, they all lost. And though he knew the outcome from watching the young man’s last duel with the master, he could not accept it. He grabbed two generic katana, to match the opponent’s style and requested one last chance for the dojo not to be lost. Though at this point, the young man had already claimed back his swords and was using them to fight.

By the time the duel ended, Jack had fallen countless times and got back up, and he had sustained many injuries, and broke so many swords that the floor was littered with broken metal pieces, but no matter how many times he fell, he wouldn’t stay on the ground. By the end, he was completely unable to move, and his opponent was still standing. The frustration over that situation intensified so much inside him that an explosion of his will came out of him,forcing his opponent to feint completely and fall to the ground. Jack used his last sword as a cane and stood up one last time to mark his victory. In that moment, Jack decided to let the man keep his swords so he doesn’t come back to the dojo with more trouble, though he promised this wouldn't be their last duel.

Later, when he investigated, he learned that the young man was the son of a mobster on a nearby island, and that he was likely the one to frame his master. His master’s last words before getting taken away were not to come look for him, so he didn’t.

Jack was the disciple with the most knowledge to run the various shops belonging to his master, so he carried over the operation, and kept up with his swordsmanship training to become even stronger and protect the dojo, and kept driving everyone in the dojo to train harder and harder, though he never agreed to being called “master”.

Three years later, he rented a boat and took everyone from the dojo with him. They raided the mobster’s den, exposing him to the marines, and thus his master was cleared. But for some reason, the mobster’s son’s swords were never found by anyone. Jack decided that he had earned them, and took care to hide them well before calling the marines.

After his master was cleared, Jack thanked him for everything and left for his own adventure at the age of 15, taking the two swords with him.

From that moment forward, Jack decided that he would stop at nothing to become he finest swordsman this world has to offer. He roamed the blues in search of challenge after challenge, and then decided to go to the grand line, where he met even harder trials.

Abilities and Possessions
Combat: Jack is a focused fighter. He relies on his strength and swordsmanship skills to achieve victory, but he also tries to stay as focused as possible and take advantage of his opponents mistakes. He often turns to the memories of his master to guide him through situations that he doesn't encounter very often.

It is very difficult for him to back down once he starts fighting, as he believes that if he loses even his life, it means that he was a man who could only make it that far. He is as such, always willing to take a gamble and bet on himself in tough situations.

Weaponry:
  • Kaiyō: This sword is a classic Japanese “O Katana”, which is a bit longer than a Katana. The blade is of a blue hue, decorated with a pattern of ocean like waves along the length of its edge. The sword is entirely made of qquality polished steel, the decorations of the hilt, which are made of quality untiered blue cloth.
  • Yūgure: This sword is a classic Japanese “Wakizashi”, which is a bit shorter than a Katana. The blade is of an orange hue, decorated with a bright red sun like semi-circle in the middle, and a mountain range pattern beneath it along the length of its edge. The sword is entirely made of quality polished steel, decorations of the hilt, which are made of quality untiered red cloth.

Items: N/A
Beli: 64,200,000
SD Earned: 140
Stat Points: 172
Advancement Points: 0
SD Remaining: 0
Stats:
  • Used for Stats: 172
  • Used for Fortune: 0

    • Strength: 51 (43 + 8)
    • Speed: 43
    • Stamina: 43
    • Accuracy: 43
    • Fortune: 43
General Traits:
  • Specific Devil Fruit (5 traits) - The player may choose a specific Devil Fruit, either canon or custom, for their character. These fruits are limited based on moderator discretion but can be of any of the three types.


Professional Traits:
  • Tough Bargainer (1 Trait) - Ever the successful businessman, merchants know how to extract money from people and to keep as much as they can from leaving their pocket. Thus, they will always earn 20% more Beli in their Storylines.
  • Mighty Strength (1 Trait) - This character's strength is boosted by 20%.


Devil Fruit
 
Devil Fruit Name: Doru Doru no Mi
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia
Devil Fruit Ability: Turns the eater into a candle-man with the ability to produce and control wax from their body. The user's wax is produced in a liquid form which can be hardened at will or naturally harden after a few seconds.


Techniques
Regular Technique Points: 86
Used Regular Technique Points: 40
Special Technique Points: 0
Used Special Technique Points: 0

Devil Fruit
Doru Doru no Mi
Type: DF Base
Range: Self
Description: Jack is now candle-man with the ability to produce and control wax from his body. Jack's wax is produced in a liquid form which can be hardened at will or naturally harden after a few seconds.


Mutoryu
Mutoryu: Alligator Jaw (4)
Type: Defensive
Range: Melee
Power: 4
Description: Jack uses his two palms to catch a weapon that can fit – such as a blade – and use his strength to immobilize it in place.


Ittoryu
Ittoryu: Cheetah Strike (12)
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Power: 4
Description: Jack jumps forward, unsheathes his sword and slashes at his target with the same motion. This technique is executed with exceptional speed (Quick 8).


Nitoryu
Nitoryu: Mantis Slicer (10)
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Power: 10
Description: Jack holds his O Katana in a diagonal position, and his Wakizashi in a vertical one pointing downward with its hilt near the tip of the other sword, so that the two blades are forming the shape of a mantis front leg and edges are facing each other. He then quickly moves the short sword in a rotation to close the gap between the two edges, with the aim of slicing anything between them.

Nitoryu: Bear Blow (14)
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Power: 14
Description: Jack strikes at his target in a swift but short gatling motion using both swords. The resulting wound, if the technique is properly effective, is a multitude of parallel cuts sorted in increasing length much like a bear would leave when striking with its claws. Though these are sword sized. [Effects: Gatling 8]


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Edited by Franky, Feb 11 2018, 09:06 AM.
“We all need to be mocked from time to time Lord Mormont lest we start to take ourselves too seriously.” - Tyrion Lannister
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Update Stat Points to 172 and deduct 18.5m for his ship.
Piper • Pirate • Martial Artist/Weapon Specialist • Hot RocketsBounty: 343,000,000 • SD Earned: 881 • Beli: 259,500,000 • Location: Raijin Island

Jija Juju • Marine • Inventor/Marksman/Scholar/Doctor • FioreRank: Rear Admiral • SD Earned: 579 • Beli: 188,000,000 • Location: Couture Island, Grand Line

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The ship has been burned to the ground in his current SL. He'll be traveling on the crew ship of The Reaper Pirates whom he just joined. You can consider this me selling the ship back. Or if you prefer I could make a shipyard topic to do so.

Stat points fixed.
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With your currently listed height/weight ratio your character's fairly underweight for a muscular adult male. Please either make him a bit shorter or a bit heavier.

For Ittoryu: Cheetah Style: Speed is not/no longer an effect. The only way for a technique to be faster-than-average is the Quick effect, which is a -8 elite effect.
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Done and done.
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The link to "Greatness in the Making" SL in your gains losses for Patrick is borked. Still checks out, but please fix it. I was nice and got the correct link for you: http://s1.zetaboards.com/One_Piece_RP/single/?p=1814183&t=5647304

You've got 86 total TP, not 70

If you are selling the ship, make a note of it in your gains/losses/edit log so we know its been refunded.

Should be fine to flag.

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Done & Done & Done :)
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Piper • Pirate • Martial Artist/Weapon Specialist • Hot RocketsBounty: 343,000,000 • SD Earned: 881 • Beli: 259,500,000 • Location: Raijin Island

Jija Juju • Marine • Inventor/Marksman/Scholar/Doctor • FioreRank: Rear Admiral • SD Earned: 579 • Beli: 188,000,000 • Location: Couture Island, Grand Line

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